Chapter 1: Full Metal Hothead (please make corrections!)
Ed sat staring as his sister walked around him with a look in her eye. That look made goose bumps go up and down his back.
"What are you looking at, Mi?" he asked, in deep thought.
" Nothin, just looking." she replied.
Al turned to them and said, " Mi, leave brother alone it's not his fault he has to go to Pine Hollow."
"That's not it. I'm thinking about this formula I found in Marco's notes. It was a formula I have never seen before. I mean NEVER!"
"So, what does it matter, there were things in there I never want to look at again." Ed replied.
" Brother, what are you going to do with Marco's notes."
"We're taking them with us. I'm going to carry them 'cause I'm not leaving them with that retard Mustang." Mi told him.
The three heard the train whistle and they got up to board. Hughes walks up , from behind a tree, and gives him the case folder, "Pine Hollow. Good Luck!"
"Thanks. Tell Mustang I'm glad he found me an assignment." he countered sarcastically.
As they boarded they saw someone they didn't want to see, Lieutenant Armstrong.
Ed's mouth dropped open." What are you doing here! We aren't babies. We can take care of OURSELVES!"
"It is my duty to care for the three of you and make sure you stay on track with the mission." he replied with a stone face.
"Whatever. Just sit down Ed. Al and I are waiting on you!" Mi shouted.
"I'm moving, cool it sis!"
When everyone had finally sat down the train started. After a few hours Mi began to get restless.
" I need some fresh air. I'm getting on the roof."
"Alright!' the three said at once.
They didn't hear her say that she was going on the roof. As Mi climbed the ladder she sat on the roof taking in the fresh air. She touched her auto mail on her face and found it was warm. She had always liked it when her face felt that way. As she turned to get up she found two huge men standing in her way.
" Your in my way. Move!"
The two men smiled and pulled out two rings and put them on. She knew they were getting ready to do some sort of alchemy. She got ready to do some of her own.
" You wanna piece of me!" she shouted.
The two men nodded as they began a pattern to produce alchemy. She hit her hands together and two bolts of lightning came out, the two men dodged, but she was ready to counter. Her brother had installed a sword into her arm that could be accessed by her alchemy. She ran and sliced one man off the roof. She turned for another go. Then she heard a clap and knew she was in trouble.
Ed shot past her cutting the second man in half. He turned again and grabbed her, dragging her through an open window. He turned and stared at her, his eyes flashing.
"What in the hell do you think you were doing? I can't believe you. The roof of all places." Ed shouted.
" Cool it you hothead. I knew what I was doing!'
" Brother don't be to hard on her."
" Oh if you were killed I don't know what I'd do."
He turned and hugged her tears streaming down his face.
" I'm sorry. Please stop crying. Your making me wants to cry."