Hey! I'm not too sure about this story yet, but I really really want to pull through with it, but I want your guys' ideas and feedback first. I don't know if this has already been used. It kinda branches off from your typical 'what if'. So yeah, please give me your advice and opinion on it so that I know whether I should keep going and stuff. Though I may post a few chapters either way. Like I said, not too sure yet.

This little beginning is in Zuko's POV, followed by Katara's POV, but the rest of the story with probably be 3rd Person O. Or Katara's POV. I need to figure out which is more comfortable and which is better suiting for the story. That being said -

DISCLAIMER: I am not the owner of Avatar. It does not belong to me. Not even slightly. Though I bought my first dvd set. I'm happy about that :D

Zuko's Point of View

I watched her, my very own sister, wave her arms wildly yet with an indescribable exactness. The blue flickering of electricity lightened her face, eerily. I felt confident. I felt in control. And I felt ready. My second time redirecting lightening would be easier to handle than my first time. Azula was not as strong as my father, but the comet heightened her abilities. At the same time, it heightened mine. I had no fear.

Azula paused, ready to strike. From the distance, I could see her eyes shift abruptly, narrow. My brain froze and the streaks of lightening shot past me.

Straight at Katara.

Katara's Point of View.

I felt helpless like a bystander; I hated it. I knew that this was Zuko's battle and that he had been waiting for this. It was inevitable. So I stood there, watching. Even looking at Azula sent ineffable chills through my spine.

She lifted her head. I had faith in Zuko but I still was worried for him. Another chill went up my spine as she shot her pent up power towards me. The air caught in my throat, my mind incomprehensive. I hurriedly opened my water carrier and created an ice shield. I could feel gravity pulling me towards the earth as I stumbled backwards. The crash of the lightening against the ice was ear shattering; it was a warning. I threw my arms to cover my face as shards of ice shot everywhere.

The electric shock flowed through me with a trail of immense heat. And everything went dark.

Tell me what you think. I've just outlined this story and it leads away from this. It's not a huge deal, this scene, it's just where it all begins. So please tell me if you want me to continue. I'll have a full summary by next chapter, if it exists.

RXR

MichaellaLoe