I hope you like the poem, inspiration struck and I just had to write it down. Well here it is a poem full of sadness but it might just be true that fate can be cruel. I hope you don't think it is to heart wrenching. So please read and review I would love to hear feedback and if you would like I could write a poem for any other couples you like and it doesn't have to be sad; I can do love and many other genres to.
Two Souls Shattered by Fate
Deep from the heart
Yet speared in the soul
Light pours in from the darkness
The darkness is clouded by such a strong light
The light is submerged from the pain in itself
Two hearts come together but are broken apart
Here sits them now in their chambers of pain
They loved each other true enough
But one had one path and one the other
They were two separate entities
One still felt the pain of the brutal betrayal
Her heart shattered into shards
Each piece unable to become whole once again
Tears are the sign that the pain has come
Her screams can be heard on the far corners of life
Yet the other one stands with his back to the pain
He knows that what was done, was for the best
He feels the pain but it can not be felt
He is immune even to their love once
He would leave and never return, to this realm
They were two hearts connected by love
One turned his back, leaving the other alone
Darkness is his soul; he can feel no more love
Pain is her soul, she can never love again
They have to different lives
Fate has taken there love away
Darkness has taken one soul away
Pain has taken one hopes of life
Fate has been cruel, to, two such as them
To Sasuke and Sakura
Please review I want feedback on how well or bad I did.