So i thought this would be a good story, i read over it several tomes, but writing has never been my strong point,i like making up story's but i can never get them down on paper (or computer). The M is only for cuss words, there will be a little romance, but its not the main focus, and there will be no lemons because I've never written one, and don't think i could write a very good one.

I do not own Naruto or Shugo Chara, this is just for entertainment.


Hinata


A young girl, around 5 years old, with short midnight-blue hair walked hand in hand with her younger sister, a girl with longer brown hair and looked to be 2 years old, behind their father, a stern looking man who, like his youngest, had long brown hair.

"Hinata" their father spoke for the first that day, to them at lest.

"y-yes father" Hinata spoke in a small, quite voice.

"You will be fighting Neji today. As the heiress you should win, do not disappoint me." Their father's voice was cold, and seemed to already sound disappointed.

"Yes father" was barely whispered as Hinata griped her sisters' hand tightly.

A young woman wearing a headband came up to the three, bowing low, and speaking robotically

"Hiashi-sama I will take young Hanabi-sama now."

Hiashi looked at youngest, and nodded. Hanabi let go of Hinata's hand and went to the branch member, holding her hand. Hinata watched as they walked away, disappointed that haniba couldn't stay with her longer.

Hiashi looked down on his eldest.

"Hinata."

"Yes father"

"Neji is a year older then you yes, but he is a branch member, you are not. Winning should be easy."

"Yes father"

"You have one hour before your match, I expect you to use this time wisely"

And hiashi walked away, leaving Hinata to stare at his back.

'there is no way I will beat Neji-nee-sama….father is going to be so mad at me when I lose, what do I do…."


1 & 30min later…..


Hinata lay crying in her bed, she had lost to Neji, as she knew she would, but father was even more angry then she expected, and now she was to train extra early in the morning, for hours….

'I just wish I could be better, make my family, my father happy…be happy…..better…"


The next morning….

Hinata stared at the two colorful eggs in her bed, in shock, and silently freaking out.

'Why are there eggs in my bed?! Where did they come from? Did haniba put them here? She has started to do weird things….. WHY ARE THEY HERE?!

Hinata slowly reached her hand out and picked one up. It had a dark lavender body, with a red ring going around the top, and a grinning scull and crossbones, there were also 4 black circles, one on top, one on bottom, and one on ether side of the scull.

"Its warm….doesn't that mean it's alive?"

She looked at the other one, and picked it up as well.

This one had a light lavender body, with white sakura flowers, and a sakura branch with buds stretching up on it. This egg was also warm.

"Their alive…I need to find a way to keep them warm…."

Hinata but the eggs down and got up to look around her room. First she fount a box, most likely from her last birthday, got one of her pillows, pulling the case off, and using the pillow case made a nest in the box, quickly put the eggs in it, and the put them under the lamp on her desk.

As she looked at the time, she let out a quite gasp, before quickly getting dressed, and running out of her room, heading for the main branch dojo.


3hr later…


A panting Hinata was facing her father, covered in sweet, and looking like she was about to pass out….and her father looked completely fine, not even a hair out of place...

'I just need 1 hit! He said training would be over…just 1 hit….'

Hinata once again got in to the Hyuga fighting style before rushing at Hiashi. Hiashi simply moved her arm, hitting it while doing so.

"Your arm would be useless right now if I had used chakra" Hiashi said this in a cold, disapproving voice. "Are you so useless in a fight that you can not even protect yourself?"

Hinata stared at her father, huffing, and feeling as if she was going to die.

'I wish I was a good Hyuga heiress…'

"And why can't you be?"

"Huh" Hinata whispered, while looking around with her Byakugan

"From a sad Hyuga heiress, to the best!"

A white sakura flower hanging earring appeared on Hinata's left ear.

Hinata suddenly felt a lot better, and got a determined look in her eye. She once again got into the Hyuga fighting style, and went for her father again, feeling as if she was not in control of her body.

Hiashi and Hinata both looked on in shock as Hinata finally, finally, got a hit on Hiashi.

Hiashi looked at his eldest as she stared in shock

"Very well, training for today is over."

As hiashi left the room, Hinata kept staring at the air in shock, unsure as to what had happened.

"That look is very unbecoming of an heiress."

Hinata looked up sharply, and stared at the tiny….creature floating in front of her.

"Staring is very rude." The small girl said with a smile, seemingly amused with how Hinata was acting.

The girl was very pale, and had Hyuga eyes. Her long hair was half pulled up in and elegant hair style, with a small Kanzashi that had a white sakura flower on it in her hair.

She was wearing a lavender kimono with a white slash, she also had white shorts and white flats on.

"Hello" she said with a laugh in her voice "My name is Hime, and I am your shugo chara"

"Um, um w-w-what's a-a shugo c-chara?"

"A shugo chara is your would be self, I'm from the lighter egg that you found this morning"

"Um…b-b-bu-"

"Last night you wished for us, and by that I mean the other egg in there, and myself. We are what you want to be, and what you can be! There is nothing we can do that you could not do yourself, with a little practice." The shugo chara, Hime, nodded along with her words, and spoke in a clear smooth confident voice.

"…um are you, uh are you the reason I-I w-was able to land an h-h-hit on my f-father?"

"…ahhh" and here she blushed, if only lightly. "Yes, I did a chara change, gave you my personality, and abilities. I am sorry, I won't do it without your say so again, but your father just made me so mad, and it was taking forever, and I very much wanted to talk to you."

"o-oh, um i-its ok, I-I don't mind. I'm j-just glad that i-its o-over."

Hime frowned slightly, "You do not need to stutter around me, I am your shugo chara, and I am your friend. I will do everything in my power to help you become a good heiress! I will teach you how to talk, walk, and act. I will also help you with your training. I will teach you everything you need to become the greatest heiress this clan has ever seen! Uh, that is, of course, if you want me to?"

"I-I would like that very much" Hinata said looking at Hime with a smile.


Please review, tell me what i did wrong, what i can do to make it better, etc...but please don't be mean, because i cry easily. :)