Hey guys, this is my first ever post so please don't be mean! Constructive criticism is fine. Basically, this is set in future, not very far from where the old clans used to live in the lake territory, so they have the same ancestors. Please, please, please write a review so I can improve it! Here goes, hope you enjoy! Also, if it mentions 6 clans, that is a different story (basically clans called Fireclan and Earthclan join - me and my friend are writing stories about that too). Remember, r and r!
Alleigences
Moonclan
Leader: Darkstar – Pitch black tom with startling amber eyes
Deputy: Silversong – Pale grey she-cat with light blue eyes
Medicine Cat: Shadowpelt – Dark grey and black tom with yellow/green eyes
Warriors:
Fireblaze – Bright ginger she-cat with green eyes
Skyscar – White she-cat with scar from a hawk over one eye
Shadowlily - Dark grey she-cat with green eyes
Owlcoat – Brown tabby she-cat
Foxeye – Grey she-cat with amber eyes
Windroar – Grey tabby tom
Rainwhisker – Tabby tom with green eyes
Nightfoot – White tom with black splodges and feet
Silentfur – Sleek light brown tom
Rabbittail – Grey tom with a white tipped tail and white socks
Ravenwing – Blue/black tom
Coldheart – Cream tom
Lightwhisker – Light ginger tom
Queens:
Dapplecoat – Pretty grey dappled she-cat
Lilyflower – White she-cat with green eyes
Rivereye – Grey tabby she-cat with dark blue eyes and white socks and belly
Apprentices:
Streampaw – White and grey she-cat
Sleeppaw – Dark grey tom
Flickerpaw - Dark ginger she-cat, white socks and belly
Sharppaw – Brown tom with ruffled fur
Leafpaw – Tortoiseshell she-cat with green eyes
Elders:
Littletail – Small tabby she-cat with half her tail missing
Dapplepelt – Once pretty grey she-cat
One-eye – Ginger tom, blind in one eye
Sunclan
Leader: Heatstar – Striped ginger she-cat
Deputy: Meltdawn – Brown tom with amber eyes
Medicine Cat: Flarefrost – White tom with ginger splodges
Warriors:
Blazebird – Ginger she-cat
Sunwonder – Ginger/Red she-cat
Redwing – Brown tom with reddish tint
Orangenose – White she-cat with orange nose
Ashstripe – Grey tabby tom with green eyes
Settingsun – Yellow/Ginger she-cat
Duststorm – Light brown she-cat with dark brown eyes
Sunbreeze – Tabby she-cat with yellow eyes
Brambletail – Dark brown tabby tom
Ravenface – Black tom
Pebblefoot – Grey dappled tom
Whitepelt – Striking white tom
Sparkpelt – Brown tom with ginger flecks
Runningstream – Swift grey tom
Snowcloud – Grey/white tom
Queens:
Leopardheart – Yellow she-cat with darker flecks
Sparrowfur – Tabby she-cat
Breezepetal – Light grey she-cat with white socks
Cindertail – Grey tabby she-cat with blue eyes
Apprentices:
Birdpaw – Brown tom with green eyes
Badgerpaw – Tabby she-cat with amber eyes
Swiftpaw – Sleek black tom
Brightpaw – Grey she-cat
Rookpaw – Black tom with a blue tint
Treepaw – Dark brown tom with unusually long tail
Sunclan has no elders, as they kill them because they are a 'burden to the clan'
Prologue
"It is time."
"Time for what?" A pale grey she-cat turned around to face her medicine cat.
"Starclan tell me that you and Sunstar have to go with a few select cats to a place not far from here to create two new clans." Shadowlily replied. "They also tell me a prophecy."
"Which is?"
"Flickering light is to be trusted more than a blazing fire." The black and white she-cat gazed strongly into Moonstar's eyes, feeling more like a medicine cat to her, not a sister.
"But what will happen to the rest of the cats? The ones we leave behind?" Moonstar's gaze was troubled.
"Starclan have not revealed to me what will happen."
"Has Blazepetal received the same message?"
"She has. We leave tomorrow," Shadowlily turned around to leave the leader to wonder what she would do.
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