So Yah I'm actually not sure which one I wrote first, this one or the Bleach fanfic but i think it was the Bleach one. Anyway point is this is probably crap. Once again, DON'T FLAME PLEASE!! I'm excited right now though cuz I just went to the orthodontist and I'm getting my braces off in a few months! Yay I will be with me beloved caramel in a little while! (Sorry that was a little random) ONWARD!

Disclaimer:
Arrancarstar: Ok Tobi hit it!
Sora: Hey but this is my story! *pout* I want to do the disclaimer!
Tobi: Sora is a bad boy! No stealing Tobi's job!
Arrancarstar: *sweatdrop* Riku?
Riku: Arrancarstar does not own any of the characters or themes from Kingdom Hearts, so don't sue. Or I will drag you into the darkness.
Sora&Tobi: RIKU!!!!

Character info:

Name: Liliel Kiru

Age: 15 1/2

Eyes: Electric blue with black and navy blue dots

Hair: down to the backs of her knees and tied at the bottom with a ribbon. Black with red streaks (they change color when she wants them to)

Height: 5' 5"

Info: loves to shop at hot topic kinda emo looking.

(Might upload pic..)

Ch. 1

Lilliel laid in her bed with her back to the door. she was thinking about what a boring day it had been. She was all alone and she wasn't allowed to use her laptop for the rest of the day (true story XD) but of course she could if she wanted to, but why risk her mom coming home and busting her and taking it away for longer. Just then she heard her door creak open. 'ughhhhh ever heard of knocking!' she thought thinking it was just her mom or dad or even her little sister. instead she said "yes? can i help you?" no answer. "hello? are you going to answer?" she said irritably as she rolled over.
She froze. It was not her mom or her dad. It was not even her little sister. there stood a black cloaked figure. The hood was up so she could not see a face. " Oh! I ummm......... ya know....... i umm thought you were someone else." she said sheepishly. "wait a second! Who are you and why are you in my room!" she waited. "You know it's rude to just stare." the figure then walked over and grabbed her arm. "HEY! WTF IS WRONG WITH YOU!" the figure shoved a cloth in her face. She started to feel dizzy "Wah.....?" was all she could say before she blacked out.

So how was it? Did it burn your eyes? Did it make you want to kill yourself? Did it make you want to CONSTRUCTIVELY criticize it? Or just comment? Well then by all means please do! Just be gentle and... DON'T FLAME!!
Thanks&Love&Huggles-Arrancarstar