Hi, my name is Georgia this is my first time writing fan-fiction but i have read plenty, criticism welcome, also some positive feedback would be could but only truthful opinions please! Don't be afraid to tell me that one of my chapters were shit, it wont discourage me from writing,xxx Helpful tips would be appreciated if you have time if not read and enjoy!xxx
I do not own twilight! All rights go to Stephenie Meyer!x
Chapter 1:
Bella PoV:
He's gone. Just like that I felt my heart shatter. He didn't look pained to say those words at all. He was fairly calm. Right then i knew i wasn't enough, he wouldn't change me because he thought id become a monster its because he didn't love me enough. This was his way out. I just wished it wouldn't hurts this much,knowing how he ran away from me, left the pitiful human girl to find her way home. I couldn't move, my brain wouldn't allow it. i heard things moving but the only emotion i felt was pain, there was no room for fear or anything else. Then i couldn't take it anymore, i threw myself onto the floor and sobbed for lost love.I began to get cold but i didn't care eventually everything went black.
I felt two warm arms around me, for a moment I let myself hope but then memories crashed down on me. He was leaving or already left. It was too painful and i blacked out again.
I woke up to the familiar beep I've been accustomed too all my life. Charlie sat at the side of my bed eyes red and puffy, he was deep in thought. 'Char-lie' i chocked out. my voice extremely horse from what i do not know. He looked up immediately 'Oh my .. Bella are you okay? what were you doing in the woods?... The questions continued i only answered a few of them because they were the only ones i could answer. And if my day couldn't get any worse my favorite doctor walked in. Seems not all have left yet. Dr Cullen looked at me no expression on his face at all, he asked the question i answered them, all very formal. He informed me that Alice&Jasper wanted to see me before they hit the road, I agreed i know how relentless Alice can be. So half an hour later the two of them waltz into my room as soon as Jasper entered the room he looked to be in intense pain. I knew why. He left. I could not bring myself to be kind to Alice or the pain will wash over me again.I am going to say a few word then they can leave, 'Alice, you have been extremely kind to me and that i am thankful for, however your brother has lost interest in me and i wish you to have a nice eternity, our friendship was nice while it lasted, Tell Jasper what happened at the party was my fault and not to beat himself up about it. I wish you both and your family a pleasant eternity' 'Bella...' she started to say but i would not hear it 'Goodbye Alice'I said dismissively.