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Kate's Betrayal
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Those gentle eyes
And kindred soul
The face, a mask
That fooled us all
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The enemy
Or was it friend?
Has made a pact
With devil's end
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And she, the brave
Jumped in the way
She had to save
To be cliché
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But, oh, the Kate!
It stole her end
With one bullet
It had them rend
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She fell to earth
The closure's gone
Her smile brought forth
The viewer's frown
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Far in the distance
Stands the clown
His face a mask
And loads the gun