Olla!
Ieeee Gomen, Gomen ! Errr... some people just don't like my story so... i re-write it... maybe... just maybe... they will like it! Gomen ! ... and I promised to update faster! GOMENASAI... and maybe... I will re-write the other story as well... Really ! GOMENNN! Review Please! oh and thanks For reading this!
Warning: Some OCC character
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto, It's Just a Fanfic
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'...' Inner talks
'...' Someone talks to the Inner
"..." Normal talks
Chapter 1:
Today is Saturday evening ... 5 P.M exactly... Sakura, Ino, Hinata and Tenten Gathering in a café near their houses, they're sitting outside the café enjoying the cool air blew through their Pale skin as They chatted about their life or something like that.
"COOKIES!" Ino yelled when the waiter brought their foods and drinks "Ino... Please don't humiliated us on the public..." Tenten sighed when the waiter go away and face palmed herself "WHY? I LOVE COOKIES AND I KNOW YOU LIKE IT TOO" Ino yelled as she pouted "Shh... okay, okay... just don't yell Ino" Tenten sighed at her best friend behavior.
Sakura and Hinata giggled at them "What are you two laughing about?" Tenten ask crossing her hand on her chest and pouted "Nothing..." Sakura grinned "Whatever" Tenten rolled her eyes. Sakura laughed when Ino eagerly eat her cookies "What?" Ino muttered with a full mouth of cookies "Ino... you will choke and die you know?" Tenten sighed
"Mm-hm" Ino nodded as she continue to eat. "So Sakura how was your life? haven't seen you in a while, right?" Ino asked "Hmm? I was just busy on the hospital you know working..." Sakura said as she sipped her tea "Oh, yeah right..." Ino nodded "How about you Tenten?" Ino grinned "What?" Tenten shrugged "I mean how's your relationship with Neji?" Ino grinned
"Err... nothing much?" Tenten Said nervously "Oh really? how about that ring?" Ino grinned as Sakura spit her tea "What ring?!" Sakura said as she put the cup down and wipe the mess she make "OH MY GOSH! It's beautiful!" Sakura's eyes began to sparkled "Spill!" Ino look at her "Can't it wait?" Tenten blushed "No" Ino shook her head "J-just a-Ask Hinata, O-okay?" Tenten shuttered
"E-Eh? why m-me?" Hinata blushed "Just spill it! come on!" Ino turned to Hinata
"E-Eto... It's like this... one week ago...
~Flashback~
It was Sunday morning... Hinata and Neji was eating their breakfast with silent as Neji spoke "Hinata-hime... can I ask you something?" Neji look at Hinata who was sitting across from him while sipping her tea "E-eto... sure?" Hinata nodded "D-do you think I-i should proposed to Tenten?" Neji Said as Hinata choked on her food and coughed "W-what?" SHe coughed again
"Hinata-Hime!" Neji yelled as he give her a water and she drank it "A-are you okay?" Neji said as she nodded "So... what do you think?" Neji asked "S-sure... But have you buy the ring?" Hinata asked "What ring?" Neji ask "To proposed to her of course!" Hinata grinned "But i didn't have enough money for that" Neji look down "Don't worry nii-san! We can ask otou-san" Hinata grinned
"Ask me what?" came a dark low voice behind them
"A-ah... Hiashi-sama" Neji bowed "No need to be formal, you are like son to me" Hiashi sit next to Hinata "So what do you want to ask me?" He look at Hinata "E-eto... Neji nii-san want's to proposed to a girl... but he can't afford the ring... so can you help him? Please?" Hinata look at him "Is she the bun-bun girl?" He ask as Neji's eyebrow twitched
"Yes" Hinata nodded
"Well... she's quiet interesting... so i will pay for your engagement ring" Hiashi nodded
"Arigatto Otou-san" Hinata grinned "Arigatto Hi-, I mean Otou-sama" Neji bowed "No problem, so when will you buy it?" Hiashi ask "This afternoon I suppose?" He said emotionless but in the inside he's happy "Excuse me for a second" Hiashi said as he stand up and go somewhere. A few minute later he come back "Here use this" He said as he give him the money "Arigatto outo-sama" he bowed as Hiashi nodded and smile (A/N: I mean it! he smiled!)
"I will get going now bye Hinata, Neji" He nodded and walk away "See?" Hinata grinned "Hn, thanks Hinata-hime" Neji smirked "Just Hinata please" She smile "Hn" He nodded "Let's go buy the ring" Hinata said as she dragged him "Slow down Hinata" He sighed as they go to the jewelry shop's.
~End Of Flashback~
"That's all I know.." Hinata said "Okay... Now Tenten spill" Ino look at Tenten "What do you want to know?" Tenten sighed in defeat "Where did he proposed to you?" Ino smirked as Tenten blush deeper "W-what kind of question about?" Tenten shuttered "Just answer it Ten" Ino said as Sakura sighed at her friend's stubbornness "Alright... he proposed to me on a Restaurant... Are you satisfied now?" Tenten sighed "That's my girl!" Ino grinned "Whatever" Tenten mumbled
"Now... off to Hinata ... how 'bout ya?" She asked "Really Ino?" Tenten asked "Yeah, yeah" She nodded and focused on Hinata "I-it's good I guess... B-but Naruto-kun is kinda busy so... we haven't seen each other for a few days tought" She sighed at her best friend waiting for a lecture to come "What?!" Ino yelled "I-Ino! Calm down!" Tenten sighed at her soon - to - be sister in-law frightening face's "HOW I CAN CALM DOWN WHEN MY BEST FRIEND'S BOYFRIEND DIDN'T SEE HER IN A FEW DAYS?" Ino yelled and start to banging the table
"I-Ino please... people are looking at us" Tenten try to pull her down "Let me go Tenten" Ino growled as Tenten shrugged "Sak... help me please?" Tenten pleaded to Sakura who was sipping her tea "Sorry Ten... not my problem" Sakura sighed "Pretty please?" She pleaded again "Okay..." Sakura sighed "Thank you" She nodded "Ino-pig... please sit down... Everyone looking at you like you are a crazy stupid psycho" Sakura sighed
Ino snapped and turn her head to the crowd "What's your problem? haven't you see a people yelling?! Now go away" Ino yelled as the crowd disappear "Sakura ... you are not helping at all ..." Tenten sighed "What?' Sakura shrugged "Please Saks!" Tenten sighed "Fine ..." Sakura groaned and put down her tea then stand up and ...
SMACK!
"Ittai! Forehead! what was that for?!" Ino yelled at her "Just shut up and sit down now!" Sakura growled as Ino obey her and some people looking at Sakura with a confuse face "What are you looking at?!" Sakura look at them as they run "Huft" Sakura sighed and face palmed herself "Thank you..." Tenten grinned "Hm" Sakura groaned
"H-how about you forehead? do you still didn't have a boyfriend?" Ino look at her "Boys are troublesome" Sakura sighed "Ew... you sound like Shika-kun, when I drag him to the mall" Ino rolled her eyes "Whatever Ino-pig" Sakura sighed "But Saks! you're popular! why didn't just pick one?" Ino whined "She is right Sakura-chan... not to mention you are pretty and nice" Hinata nodded
"Thanks Hina-chan... but no" Sakura shook her head "But Sakura, You are popular for goddess sake" Tenten sighed
"A-are you still L-love hi-"
"Hinata-chan!" Tenten and Ino yelled in unison "A-ah! G-gomen Sakura-chan! I didn't mean it" Hinata said nervously "Nah! It's okay! i didn't really mind at all" Sakura smile sadly "Really! So sorry Sakura-chan!" Hinata look at her as she nodded "Aren't you guys suppose to meet the boys?" Sakura asked looking at them
"Oh shit you are right" Tenten streamed "We are late!" Ino yelled "Just go you guys... i will pay your bills" Sakura smile "Are you sure Saki?" Ino asked "Yeah! now go" Sakura nodded and grinned "Thank you Sakura-chan, bye! Take care" The three of them said as they walk through the door and Sakura just chuckled at her friends
After Sakura finished her tea and dessert, she pay the bills and walk to her home. When she pass through a dark park she felt a familiar chakra 'No, no... it must be my imagination' Sakura sighed
"He-help!" A dark deep voice called her 'No... it must be a genjutsu' Sakura tought as she try to undo it "Kai!" Sakura close her eyes and re-open it "Oh my gosh it is him!" Sakura yelled and run toward the body "S-sakura" The voice said as she gently put his head on her lap "I'm here... just hold on for a minute" Sakura said as she put her hand to his stomach and heal him.
"S-Sakura..." He said as his eyes slowly close "No, no Open your eyes please!" Sakura yelled
Author's Note:
Hahha gomen for the cliff hanger... but if you already read the original... you must be know who is the boy! oh well Ja! Thanks for reading this! and please REVIEW! or I will haunted you with no update for a month mwahahhah ! Just like my other story! *Evil grins* Once again please review!oh and sorry for the OCCness! Love ya all! And please tell me if there is a grammars or something like that! JA!
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