10 14 05 - Edited and Hopefully it runs smoother. Tell me how it is. 10 25 05 – I took out some of the wording to help the story run better. I hope it helped.
Au-ish but not really. There are a few new characters but I am going to try my best to keep it correct I hope you enjoy it. Reviews are great.. Even bad ones. but no nasty ones .. If you feel it necessary to give a neg review .. then lets be constructive about it. Help me get better
Disclaimer: not mine .. none of it .. Except for my characters. I think the idea has never been done but we will see
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Chapter One: Surprise !
If you were a visitor to this small apartment, you would be welcomed to a young but frantic 31-year-old woman pacing in her living room with a cordless phone. Her feet padded softly as she deftly maneuvered around her coffee table into her kitchen and back around in front of her TV. The carpet would be feeling it in the morning that's for sure. Her hair swayed behind her, almost falling out of her loose from her braid. She did not look 31 at the moment, in her Alvin in the Chipmunks pajama set.
"Finally! Thank god Wesley! Why did you put me on hold for 20 minutes!" she sighed as she flopped on the couch.
"Now Allison calm down. You knew it was bound to happen. You did give her the decision after all. " The voice on the phone spoke to her like a therapist calming a child.
"I know I know. But, I didn't get past her actually saying yes."
"Allie. You will do fine. You are both practically clones of each other. She can start at Waldorf or Princeton in the fall."
"I know, but 15.. I don't know if I can do this. I can't even keep a goldfish alive. I don't even have the room! I need to get a bigger place. And what do they eat?"
"Allie. Calm down. You can work on a place. I think she can take care of herself and I think they are pretty durable at this age."
"When does she get here?" Allison asked as she propped her feet up on the table.
"Her plane arrives tomorrow at 4 pm at Princeton Manicipal."
"What? Oh my god! I have to..."
"Chill. You have to chill out."
Sigh "Ok Wes, you're right. I will just explain to my boss who is as mean as a snake, a vicious as Cujo and as curious as a cat."
"There is a cure for you! At least you didn't say he was sexy."
"I was getting to that. I am just supposed to say what? Hi I have to leave early because I am going to pick up my 15-year-old daughter. You know, the one no one knows about because I had her when I was 16. Good Lord Wesley, that just sounds stupid just saying it. How am I going to get off early to pick her up?"
"You will find a way. You always do."
"I will make it work. I will just go to Dr.Cuddy and hopefully I can dart away before his Cameron sensors go off."
"Hey Allie? Before you go"
"Hmm."
"You sound like a mom, Hun."
With that the phone clicked off and Dr.Allison Cameron sat back on her couch and smiled. Being a mom for the first time would be cool. I wonder if Hanna likes Chinese
Notes:
Now this is just a start. Tell me what you think. I could also probably use a beta reader since I am so not an English person. All math, but I have great ideas. If I could only get it on paper, tell me what you think. Waldorf School of Princeton is a true school in Princeton and so is Princeton Manicipal Airport Google is a wonderful thing
