There are many stories of Naruto's father, brother, sister etc. But there are few stories of other relatives, like Naruto's uncle, cousin etc. So I decided to write a story about the remainder of the Uzumaki clan, and were they originated. The story starts right before the sound-nin used the gen-jutsu to put every body to sleep. I have most of the story written and it will come in parts. There is an end but I don't know how long the story will last. There will be lots of pairings, and I will improvise about the plot line.
P.S. Email me any ideas you have at please don't post them in the reviews as it may ruin the story for others. Should you have any plot problems email me and I'll fix them or explain them.
The main original characters are as follows:
Uzumaki Torun (toe-rune)
Age: 14
Rank and village: Sun Genin
Hair: Light blond hair with Zabuza's hairstyle
Eyes: Pale green eyes
Specialty technique: Rasengan Shot, shoots a Rasengan.
Weapon: Standard
Fighting style: Iron fist.
Description: Forehead protector is on his forehead (duh). He prefers to be in the nature and can talk to animals; he can summon animals by smearing blood on a tattoo of the animal that is on his left arm. (Yes, I did borrow this from Bloodlines, by "the SOC puppet". Very good story, must read.)
Hyuga KimikoAge: 14
Rank and village: Leaf Genin
Hair: Reddish brown
Eyes: Pupil-less
Specialty technique: Spike Blast, combines byakugan and kaiten and propels a mass of shurikens by using the kaiten and locating targets with the byukagan
Weapon: A staff that has a kunai imbedded in the wood on each end
Fighting style: Gentle and iron fist combination
Description: Has a mean temper and can kill you by destroying your chakra coil system and smashing your body at the same time. (Ouch) She doesn't mind blood; actually I think she likes it a bit. Forehead protector is tied around her waist, like a belt. (Imagine Avril Lavrigne)Nara Tishimori
Age: 14
Rank and village: Leaf Genin
Hair: Metallic blue and spiky, think Spike from Trigun.
Eyes: ???? Sunglasses
Specialty technique: Chakra Ghost, forms a ghost out of pure Chakra, which can solidify but can only be hit by chakra attacks (i.e. Rasengan, Chidori).
Weapon: Standard
Fighting style: Gentle fist.
Description: Somewhat Shikamaru-ish. He would prefer to sleep then do anything else. Except to fight maybe. He specializes in strategy and in striking unnoticed. His forehead protector is tied loosely around his neck, covering his mouth.
Uzumaki Rukani
Age: 54 (looks like he is in his early 30's.)
Rank and village: Sun Jounin
Hair: Same as 4th's
Eyes: Dark blue
Specialty technique: Meteor Shower, lots of rasengans get shot down from high up.
Weapon: Standard
Fighting style: Iron fist.
Description: In this story he is the 4th's older brother. He is a mix of Vegeta and Goku, sometimes happy-go-lucky, and other times silent and stoic. He has several tattoos, on his left arm to represent the animals he can summon. Forehead protector is on his forehead. I'd tell more but that would ruin the story.
PrologueUzumaki Mamoru was going to a conference with the Hokage to discuss the new exchange program the two Kages had been working on. He traveled with a small escort of a jounin instructor, and three genin.
As they were nearing the Leaf Village he had sensed a chakra unlike any before. It was throbbing with power and pain, suffering and loneliness, a chakra abandoned to the world.
The Tenpikage quickly gave the hand-signs for "alert" "enemy" "do not engage". The genins all quickly disappeared into the forest area, and Mamoru used a gen-jutsu to change his appearance to that of an old man.
As he followed the chakra patterns, Mamoru was shocked, He had thought that they were close to whoever it was, but it took them over 10 minutes to get to the person. He had felt the chakra from almost 3 miles away. He knew that it was no human chakra. He saw that the genin were nervous, since they too felt the chakra now.
"Don't worry, it'll be fine," he told his two nephews and his son. The three were almost inseparable. When one ever got into trouble, the other two would come, and divide the punishment between the three.
They entered a clearing in the forest, and Mamoru walked up to a figure lying on the ground. He studied the woman. She was dead, but in her arms where two small foxes. He lifted one up and almost dropped him in surprise. The fox had nine tails, and chakra seemed to simply flow out of his body. He motioned for the genin, and the jounin to join him.
"This is incredible, these are the first Acacia that have visited this Plane in over fourteen hundred years," said Mamoru as he handed the foxes to his son and nephews.
"Ra-sama, are you sure that these are-" The jounin was interrupted by Mamoru.
"You shall refer to me as Tenpikage on this Plane, is that understood, nii-san?" The jounin bowed and muttered his apology.
"I want you to take these two, and return to home. They are to be adopted into the family, and they are to choose their partners, at the next Hiton ceremony."
"But brother, it is not for another ten years. What if they attack us by then?'
"We must wait for the next generation there is no other choice. I wish I could be done sooner, but we must not press them." The jounin bowed, and took the foxes from his two sons and nephew.
"We have agreed three for three, have we not Gojunidaime?"
Mamoru sighed, "These three will be the three to stay there so please do not worry, they will be fine on their own. You know we can not spare anyone to take care of them." With that the Tenpikage proceeded to take the three genin, and go on to Leaf Village.
The jounin was left standing with two sleeping foxes in his arms.
"Good luck, Uzumaki Rukani, Uzumaki Arashai, and Uzumaki Sarunoka..."
Author's Note
Yeah, totally rewrote the prologue, and will add a new first chapter. I found a giant plot hole, because, if the 4th Hokage, and the 52nd Tenpikage both died the same year the exchange program was started, then the 4th became Hokage almost immediately, since he still had to train Kakashi and get trained by Jiraiya. So I rewrote the whole thing and add some stuff that will be mentioned later on.
I want to thank SilverKnight7 and kitsune, for their constant support, since they reviewed nearly every chapter.
Questions that Author needs answered:
What is the 4th's name, Kazama ??????
Does the daime only work for the Hokages, or can any Kage use them? I.e. the Yondaime of Sand Village.
Also please send me any Characters you may want included in the story. I suck at names, so please send names, even if you have no characters to go with them. If they mean something please tell me what they mean. Send them by email, NOT BY REVIEWS!!!!!!
I greatly appreciate anyone who helped me, will help me, or is helping me. I will thank anyone who helps me. If you are wondering about any thing just put it in a review and I will answer it, to my full ability, without ruining the story. I will answer any question that needs an answer. Thank you very much and I appreciate it, if you tell me what I am doing wrong so that I may correct it.
Without wax,
Sun Hound
(If anyone figures out what 'Without wax' means I will dedicate a chapter to him or her. First person only.)
