Hello, Raven Darkstar here.

This is my first story so please be nice. And I don't ,and never will, own Max, Fang, Iggy, Nudge,

the Gasman or Angel, who are owned by James Patterson. However, I DO own Jenay and Jaimie and shall

do what I like with them.

Enjoy!!

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Chapter 1

Jenay P.O.V

"Jenay? I'm scared." Jaimie whispered, her blue eyes wide in fright.

"Don't worry. Just try to stay calm." I whispered back, trying to keep my voice neutral.

We just managed to sneak out of 'the school' building without anybody noticing. My viens were filled with adrenalin. This is the furthest we've ever gone. We had to get out of here before the whitecoats found our empty cages.

"WHEEEEE!! WHEEEEE!! WHEEEEE!!" The alarm sound pierced through the night air.

NEVER MIND.

"Run for it!!" I ordered. Jaimie didn't need telling twice.

We sped off at top speed whizzing through the trees. Soon, we heard the Erasers following us in hot pursuit, and I willed myself to run faster.

The Erasers were armed with guns and were soon firing at us. Gun shots sounded and trees started popping around us. One just barely missed my ear.

Jaimie was right behind me keeping at a steady pace and soon the erasers started to get further, and further away. OH YEAH! WE JUST MIGHT MAKE IT THIS TIME!

"Jenay!" Jaimie suddenly cried. Startling me out of my thoughts.

I looked foward and realized that we were heading towards a cliff. DRAT!

An Eraser laughed manicly. They had us cornered. DOUBLE DRAT!

"Uh, what do we do now?" Jaimie asked.

I bit my lip. GOOD QUESTION.

"Hello, old buddy. Long time, no see." A voice sneered.

I narrowed my eyes. I knew that voice. "Ari." I growled.

And there he was, loading his gun."Jenay." He greeted casually."Aren't you glad to see me?"

I was not going to dignify that with an answer.

I looked over the cliff. It seemed like an endless drop. I sighed.

"Jaimie." I whispered out of the corner of my mouth."When I give the signal, we f.l.y."

She stared at me as if I had gone completely dotty. Who knows, perhapes I had.
"B-b-but we never-" She started, but I gave her a look that said 'If you got a better idea I'd like to hear it.'

Then she nodded, and got ready.

Ari aimed his gun and said " I've been wanting to do this for a long time."

"NOW!!"

Instantly, me and Jaimie jumped over the cliff. And unfurled our wings. Mine were black and Jaimie's were pure white.

The Eraser's growled and Ari went mad. "Don't just stand there!! What are you waiting for?!! Fire!!Don't let them escape!!!"

FLAP! COME ON!! FLAP! OH MY GOD!! I'M FLYING!! I'M FLYING!!

I could'nt help but laugh as I started to surge higher into the air. This was the first time I actually got to fly, and it rocked! I cast a glance at Jaimie, who was laughing giddily, her golden hair surrounding her head like a halo.

We flew higher into the sky above the Erasers, dodging bullets.

As we flew away Jaimie blew a raspberry and cried "See ya Ari! We won't be missing you!"

I rolled my eyes. And Ari roared "THIS ISN'T THE END FREAKS!!"

Finally, we flew away from the school. Away from death valley.

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