Hello! It's my first piece ever on fanfiction, so please critique! Don't worry, throw whatever you've got at me! :P
I spin around in a circle
Twirling without fear
The colors blur together
sounds buzz in my ears
There's a sense of vertigo
As I stop
I'm dizzy, and the buzz is duller now
I guess this is it
I spin in a circle
Once again
The buzz has stopped
And now he's here
I can't hear him
The colors are sharp
And pigmented
But the sound is gone.
Was this all there is?
Am I to be Left Behind?
The questions go unanswered
The fall on deaf ears
Like my own.