Judai, Johan's slave REWRITE

Neo: I'm going to do this because I have too but don't worry everybody this REWRITE is...well I tried to make it perfect! flames aren't allowed just criticism about this story because I can't get on my other account to delete the first version which I know sucked because I wasn't very good at a gooooood plot and I made Judai really really Girly! I know he's not a girl everybody who loves Seme! Judai which I do now too but not more than Seme!Johan!

Leo: Finally, I get a chance to come out! This is our rewrite so we looked at what we did wrong like love coming from rape. But Judai is still a Seraph and Johan is The Vampire King and Jehu is the Emperor of the Vampire world and Haou, who we realized we made a mistake with is fixed, he's Judai's brother and not his dark half this time. Yeah this is an alternate universe. Oh an d for your info you mother fucking flamers we saw all the Yugioh Gx episodes from season 1-3! So fuck off tellin' us we haven't seen Yugioh Gx. Some of a bitches!

Haou: Could you calm down you Jehu look-a-like!

Jehu: I know he looks like me Haou-chan but There is a major difference between us! Right?

Johan: Please don't blame Neo if he doesn't do a good job he's really trying his best to do a spiritshipping fanfic that all of you will love! Judai actually told him to do this so he caved in.

Neo: *Sulking in shame* They'll hate this, they'll totally hate this.

Chapter 1

Judai Yuki, a 15-16 year old slave with duo colored hair and a skinny figure. His specialties included cooking, cleaning, and other things. Judai has somewhat girly features though he's a boy(Note: I said somewhat so please don't flame me). Judai was picked out by one of the most famous visitors, Johan Andersen. Only few people knew this, but Johan was the Vampire King, though he was only 18 years of age. Judai looked at his new owner with innocent chocolate brown eyes, and tried to get up to follow Johan but staggered from the lack of food. Johan caught the brunette by his arm and pulled him into his chest and picked him up bridal style, shocking the slave significantly.

Johan Andersen was a blue haired adult who lived in a large mansion, and had what seemed like endless wealth, power, and leadership over his companies. He wasn't the quiet type but he wasn't one of those hyperactive types either. He was only eighteen when he was put in charge of the company business. Though, Johan looks like a normal adult, he's actually a vampire and not just a normal vampire he's Vampire King. The reason that Johan bought a slave is because his mansion has gotten really lonely since he moved in and renovated it. Johan was sitting in his limo with Judai by his side. The bluenette was curious about the slave, who hadn't said a word since he got into the limo. The brown haired boy was dressed in a long gray shirt and shorts. "Why don't you tell me something about yourself, Judai," Johan said to his slave who was being too quiet for his liking. Judai was too shy to say even a word to his new master. Johan realized they were already at the mansion. They were getting out of the car, well Johan did first and waited for Judai who was easily confused to why his master was holding the door for him.

"Uh Judai, you know you can get out right?" Johan said to his uncomfortable slave. Judai slowly got out of the car, scared of what Johan would do if he didn't listen to him. Johan looked at the brunette that was trembling in fear as he got out of the car. Johan was really, really getting annoyed with Judai's fear of him. Judai finally gained a control on his body's composure when he got out of the limo.

"Well, I hope you get used to living with me, Judai because i'm not returning you to that douche bag of a slave owner. Also, the reason I picked you was because I sensed something special about you." Johan said to the brunette before picking him up bridal style not wanting to wait for Judai walk behind him. Judai trembled in Johan's arms, blushing while the bluenette carried him in such a girly way. 'Well, You are a slave after all.' Johan telepathicly said to Judai causing the brunette to look at him in shock and slight fear. "Don't worry, I won't hurt you. I'll just bite your neck a little but not yo kill you, but to imprint with you." Johan said to the trembling brunette who still was scared about the bluenette's telepathy. Judai realized what Johan just said, and tried to hide in Johan's shirt making the young vampire laugh at his new slave's fear. "Don't worry I'll make sure not to hurt too much okay Ju-Chan." Johan said smiling to brunette that was still trying to hide from the bluenette inside his shirt. Judai blushed, though Johan couldn't see it. He was happy that he wasn't going to be tortured.

Neo: Go ahead. Flame me but I did my best because Judai was a slave.

Johan: You did a good job Neo. Read and Review to make Neo feel better. Pweaseeeeeeeeeeeee!

Jaden: At least I wasn't raped like in the last version and Johan was at least in character. Well, my character needs work but that's the attitude of a person who is a slave right Leo?

Leo: Yep! So please read this rewrite and review it! Please my alter ego needs the confidence boosts!