Dear readers, I would like your opinion and tell me if it is a good idea and writing. This is the first story I every wrote that was not for school so I will try me best what for you o respond to write more. And? POV is a mystery to you.

? POV:

"I love you. You know.'

It was the last thing I said as I was falling asleep from tonight's "activities", as we cuddled on my bed together with my love of my life.

"Yes I know I love you to forever." Was the last thing I heard was those enchanting words.

Percy' POV:

I have lived with a foster family for my whole life. They are my family the said when they saw me when I was just 1 month old they fell in love with me and for that I am grateful. They are my family I don't care if my mom did not give birth to me they are my mom and dad. My mom could not have kids so I am kind of spoiled. Living in a skyscraper have my walk-in makeup and cloth closet the size of half my room with is giant, bigger than my parents. I also have literally have e wall of computers, monitors, motherboards and almost any thing apple or computer related.

My parents on a company that is all over the world and we travel a lot but my home is New York. I know almost every thing about computers to making them to hacking them; I even broke into all the secret services all over the world not even slightly even detected. That means I set up the security for my parents and fix their computers. It is fu my parents never had any trouble with anything technology related.

Once some one tried to hack into the system, the thing kind of … backfired. I have to say it was really funny.

My parent said " why do you have to do this, what are we going to do with you honey."

"Nothing," I responded to her giving her my innocent smile that made them crack which does haven that often. I have never heard my mom giggle but she did, and my dad had one of those generic booming laughs that are on TV but I loved it anyways.

2 hours later

I always walk to central park, I go every day, its one of my only traditions. I have gone in sleet, hail, snow, rain, heat and at twilight is my favorite time to go. The sun going down and the lasting rays of light are like mist across the sky. The beauty is something maybe only I can see but is seems magical and sets peace over the land.

2 days later

I am walking through a hall and it's boiling hot. My body keeps spazing

. I feel like the e heat engulfs me. There was no way out but a door made of water. I couldn't think right but I know the only was to survive is to fight, but when I try everything goes black. Is this real I ask myself or are my family dieing and I am totally useless?

-- The end of chapter 1 -

Do you want more or is it bad only you can tell me.

Who is the mystery person I may not even know yet sadly.

Thanks to you I started to write I am scared sh** about how It

Is I have no courage so the chapter is small will be bigger

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