The Great Life in Equestria
I do not own any of the characters other than my OC (Golden Eagle/ Torian James Scotterian) MLP is owned by Hasbro and DHX
Attention... At ease Hello People of the Internet Im The Admiral and Welcome to my first MLP Fanfic featuring my OC. Now you probably heard from Call of Duty One Shot that I will begin some MLP Fanfics and some more Call of Duty once I get some good ideas. I also want to point out that I`m still learning from my mistakes from the One Shot and will make Chapters nice and long. Since it is the summertime and school is out, I have a bunch of free time to update this story or if I get support from you guys to keep going. And if I don`t update on time that most likely means I have either writers block, I`ve been busy or important matters came up. (People have lives too so don`t expect an Update every 2-3 days) With that out of the way Lets begin shall we.
Hello my name is Torian James Scotterian (I know its a weird name and I don`t know why my parents named me this way) I`m 25 years of age, I`m about 5'7 and 120lbs. I have black hair, brown eyes, I`m a mix between African American(My Dad) and English White(My Mom). My usual attire is a navy blue short sleeve shirt, Black cargo jeans, black sneakers and a pocket watch my Grandfather gave me as a child before he died. I play Guitar, Play War Thunder, and sing to myself whenever I got bored. One more thing you should know and I don`t like talking about it as much is that I have a scar that streaks from my left eyebrow down to my upper left cheek because my drunken mother had a fit with me, grabbed a knife, held me down against my will and slashed my eye with it. Thank the lord above us it did nothing to my vision but it did leave a mark on my face forever.
Now that you know what I look like maybe talk about where I live. I live in a cozy apartment near Pearl Harbor in Oahu, Hawaii. But this tropical paradise doesn`t make me feel as happy as I used to be. My family was really messed up like for instance my brother is in prison for tagging the USS Missouri and My mom got killed in a car wreck for drunk driving. But atleast one family member was sane and it was my dad, He raised me the right way, taught me survival skills I may need in the future, was really wise, and gave great advice. But all good things come to an end because my dad really loved sailing and wanted to sail around the world, but vanished in the Bermuda Triangle. His boat was there but he wasn`t, I felt devastated since the man who raised me right was gone from my life but he left a few things for me to have before he left, A Navy combat knife, his survival kit, and My Great grandfather`s World War 2 dog tags. My dad even promised to be here at my 19th birthday but I guess he will never be able to fulfil that promise now.
Anyway I decided to take a walk on the beach outside Pearl Harbor, So i grabbed My phone, earbuds,My Pocketwatch, My survival kit, My Dad`s combat knife, My Great Grandfather`s dogtags, and my guitar. I made my way to the beach and began walking along the beach with a full moon illuminating the ocean. But all of a sudden a flash of light appears in front of me, I shield my eyes to protect myself from getting blind and moved back to trip on a piece of washed up driftwood. For a few more seconds the light faded out and I slowly moved my arms to see what was going on. Infront of me was a creature who would be mythical to Earth a large horse with a horn who was midnight blue and her hair and tail would have stars in it and blow in the invisible breeze. I was shocked and surprised to see something that was never meant to be found on Earth.
"Hello young Torian." The large horse spoke "I`am Princess of the Night Luna."
I was dumbfounded to know this strange creature could talk but it was rude to not respond.
"H..Hello do y..you know my name and w..what are you?" I asked clearly nervous of the mysterious being
"Fear not Torian, I will not hurt you, For I`am an Alicorn and I`ve been watching you from afar." Princess Luna responded in a Old English Fashion
"How were y..you watching me?" I asked still scared out of my mind.
"I can visit one`s dreams and see if they are peaceful or nightmare." Princess Luna explained
I was nervous that Luna could visit dreams since she was a Princess of the Night.
"What are you doing here and what do you want?" I asked as i stood to my full hieght and I was practically a few inches taller than her.
"I want to offer you a new life in a new world and give you something you never had in 6 years ... Peace." The Princess said in a motherly tone
I was quite happy being given a chance to be happy and never see my messed up family again or my Dad if he returns, But my Dad would want me to be happy again so i made my final decision.
"Princess, I would be honored to accept your request. I said as I bowed before her.
I could tell she was happy because of her smile across her muzzle
"Please no need to bow and you will be transported to a location so you can make sure all your belongs get there." The Princess said as her horn lite up and we were shot straight at the moon.
In the second we shot through the moon I blacked out without remebering anything else except waking up in a strange forest. The sun was out and I looked at my pocketwhich still works and was at approximately 9:00am.
"Man where am I?" I asked as I looked around.
The forest was really strange and like my survival insticts kicked and pulled out the compass within the survival kit. Once the needle point North I decided to head in that direction. After what felt like 5 minutes, I heard a scream that sounded like 2 girls. Without any hesitation I rushed over towards the screams until I saw who was screaming in terror. 2 giant wolf like creatures that were made out of wood and surrounded a orange filly with a purple mane and tail and a yellow mare with a pink mane and tail. I saw they both have wings so I knew they were pegasi (I enjoy reading mythological creatures). Wth a plan up my sleeve i pulled out my combat knife and sprang infront of the 2 timber like wolves.
"Come on Timber breath whatcha got!" I said trying to intimidate them, which seemed to have worked.
With the 2 timber like wolves now focused on me and the 2 pegasi were too afraid to look at the battle that was about to unfold and they even caught a glimpse of who saved their flanks, 1 wolf pounced, but I anticipated the move and ducked and sliced the underbelly causing tree sap to pour out. The other wolf swiped its claws at me and nearly got me I quickly jumped up as the wolf almost bite me as I jumped to the top of it`s head and began stabbing it in the brain. The wolf howled in pain before collapsing and exploding. The other wolf was about to take a bite out of the the defensless pegasi before I threw my knife in it`s right eye. The wolf howled in sheer pain and and fell to the ground and exploded.
With the fight over I was about to check on the 2 scared pegasi before a rainbow blur slammed against a tree and was clearly angry.
"What were you about to do to my friends with that knife!" the rainbow pegasus yelled
I was about to say something before I was thrown aside and met face to face with the angry mare.
"I don`t want to hear it, now Don`t come anywhere near me or my friends or else your dead meat, now SCRAM!" The rainbow mare screamed.
I ran away as quickly as I could and reached a little pond. Alone and scared I sat down and watched the water.
(3rd Person POV)
As Torian ran away, Rainbow flew to her friends to help them up. Fluttershy and Scootaloo were happy to see Rainbow Dash but were puzzled by the strange creature who saved them.
"Hey you two OK, I heard Timberwolves howling and thought somepony was in danger." Rainbow said with relief.
"We`re OK but where is that creature who saved us?" Fluttershy asked.
"Oh I scared him off and you should have seen how fast he ran." Rainbow snickered.
"But Rainbow Dash, That creature saved us from the Timberwolves." Scootaloo argued.
Rainbow stopped laughing and saw how serious they were. "Wait it ... saved you?" Rainbow asked.
"Yes it did and I never got to thank it for helping us and who knows what could happen to it" Fluttershy said and began worrying even more.
"Don`t worry Fluttershy, Im sure all of your friends can help you find the creature." Scootaloo said and nearly forgot about the CMC Meeting "I gotta go see you later and good luck." Scootaloo added as she ran off.
"Scootaloo is right lets gather our friends and find the creature so we can give it a proper tank you." Fluttershy said as she and Rainbow left to find their friends.
Once in Ponyville, Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash arrive at Golden Oaks Library, where Twilight Sparkle, Rarity, Applejack, and Pinkie Pie were reorganizing books throughout the entire library.
"Hey you guys." Rainbow said but not in a delighted tone.
"Oh hey Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash what can we do for you?" Twilight asked happily.
"Want to help reorganize the library darling?" Rarity asked in a polish voice.
"Umm... Twilight there is something we need to tell you." the timid mare asked.
"What would that be, sugarcube?" Applejack asked in hopes nothing is wrong.
"Umm.. well you see... Um today me and Scootaloo were having a picnic outside the Everfree Forest, then 2 timberwolves came and were about to attack me and Scootaloo and I was soo scared until a strange creature jumped in and took on the 2 timberwolves." Fluttershy explained.
"WHAT, somepony actually took on 2 timberwolves!" Twilight gasped in complete shock
"Who in the right mind would take on such beasts?" Rarity chimed in
"But I accidentally overacted and scared him off into the Everfree." Rainbow said shepishly
"Why would you do that?" Applejack asked in annoyance to Rainbow`s assumption jumping.
"I thought it was going to hurt Fluttershy and Scootaloo." Rainbow protested.
What did it look like, Fluttershy?" Rarity asked.
"Well it was tall, had 2 arms and legs, carried some sort of knife, and... umm thats all I can describe." Fluttershy said timidly.
"That aside, we need to find this creature and show him our gratitude." Twilight said
"Does this mean we can throw it party?" Pinkie said jumping excitedly.
"Yes we can Pinkie once we find it." Twilight said in annoyance.
"YAY" Pinkie shouted
"Alright lets go and find our lost creature." Applejack said
Once the 6 ponies reached the Everfree Forest, They were still abit afraid of what could possibly live in it.
"OK ponies split up and report the creature if you find it." Twilight said.
"Right" the other 5 said in unison and trotted into the desolate forest.
(Torian`s POV)
I was alone and afraid because nobody was here to care for me so I decided to live in a cave that wasn`t far from the pond. I entered cautiously to make sure the cave wasn`t occupied.
"Hello anyone in here?" I called out in hopes that no one was.
Luckily, There was nobody in the cave so i began to settle in and use the survival kit and advice my dad gave me and began to make a fire. But i was about ignite it until I heard clopping coming towards the cave. With my quick reaction, I hid behind some stilagmites but poke my head out to see who was coming. The person who came inside the cave wasn`t a person but it was the same yellow pegasus I rescued earilier.
"Hey girls I found something in here." The timid pegasus said.
A short time 5 more ponies came and were standing outside the enterance of the cave.
"So Fluttershy, what did ya find in here?" The orange southern pony asked.
"This." The yellow Pegasus said and point her forehoof out at my fireplace i was about to ignite.
"Somepony or something is definetly here." The purple unicorn said
"Hello anypony in here?" The pink pony shouted
I knew I couldn`t hide here forever so I decided to answer while still hiding.
"Please leave me be, I`ve been through enough." I said sadly and hope they may leave.
"Are you the same creature who saved our dear friend?" the white unicorn asked.
"Yes I am... now please go." I said becoming slightly annoyed.
"Not until we see you and thank ya fer saving our friends life." the orange pony protested.
I thought they might not leave until they have shown their gratitude so I decided to finally unveil myself to these ponies. Finally, I worked up enough courage and walked out infront of the ponies. The 6 ponies infront of me were different in personality style and tattos on their flanks. The purple unicorn had a lavander and pink mane and tail. She also has a tattoo with a star with 5 more stars around it. , The pink pony had a poofy mane and tail with 3 balloons has her tatoo, The white unicorn had a purple curly mane and tail with 3 diamonds as a her tattoo, the blue pegasus had a rainbow mane and tail with a cloud and a rainbow lightning bolt as her tattoo, the orange pony wore a stenson hat, had a blonde mane and tail with 3 apples as her tattoo, and finally the yellow pegasus with a long pink mane and tail with 3 butterflies as her tattoo (Sorry for the repeating statements here.)
"Thanks for saving our friend i couldn`t imagine what would happen if you didnt come along." The purple pony said
"Don`t mention it." I said coldly
"Excuse me sir but, what are you and do you have a name?" the white unicorn asked?
"My name is Torian James Scotterian and I`m a being known as a human." I answered
"I`ve never heard of humans before, Are you new here?" the rainbow pegasus asked.
"Yes im new and now it`s time for me to ask, who are you?" I asked in irritated tone.
"Oh well I`m Twilight Sparkle and these are my friends Applejack, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, and Fluttershy." Twilight point her hoof at each of her friends as introduced.
"Its been nice to meet you but now can I be alone, I`ve lost the only person who meant something in my life." I said and sat against the wall. Twilight walks to my side and everypony else surrounds me in a group hug.
"Why do you care about me so much I mean all I did was save a friend from a terrible end." I said as the ponies looked at me.
"And thats why we consider you as a friend." Twilight said.
At that moment I realized i never had a friend in my life because I was either too shy or to depressed after my dad disappeared. I felt a feeling I never had in a long time, Happiness.
"Wait, we`re friends?" I asked nervously.
"Why of course, darling. Have you not have a friend before?" Rarity asked.
"I`ve never had a friend and i`ve been too shy or depressed to even think about friendship." I said with a sad expression on my face.
At that point, they all gasped for my lack of friendship and felt really bad for me.
"You`ve never had a friend, How do you get through lifOW." Rainbow screamed as Applejack kicked her in the forehoof
"Rainbow, Manners." Applejack scolded at her
"No she is right, I never understood how I managed to get through life without any friends but I don`t feel ready to talk about my past yet." I said out of pure sadness.
"We understand and when you feel ready to talk we`ll be ready to listen." Twilight said
After a while we converse and I found that im in a place called Equestria in the Everfree Forest not far from Ponyville. They told me about their culture, currency, and how Equestria is ruled by 2 Princesses. Soon it was getting late and we left the Everfree and headed towards Ponyville.
"So do you know where a hotel is?" I asked.
"Hotel, darling, nonsense you shall live with one of us dear." Rarity proposed
"OK but who shall I room with I mean I don`t want to take advantage your hospitality." I said not wanting to take over somepony`s home.
"You could.. um live with me.. if you want to that is?" Fluttershy said timidly
"Are you sure, I mean I dont want to over your home." I said to be sure.
"Yes I`m sure I want you to be with me." Fluttershy said barely above a whisper.
"Well alright then." I said and turned back to my new friends.
We said our good-byes and Me and Fluttershy walked to her house, which was a small cottage near the Everfree Forest. Once we walked inside I saw a few animals inside scampering or flying around.
"Wow you really like animals don`t you?" I asked as I looked around.
"Yes I do I take care of them. Do you like animals?" Fluttershy looked at me waiting for my response.
"I do enjoy the company of a few animals." I replied.
Soon it was getting late and me and Fluttershy ate dinner, and got ready for bed. (Mental note visit Rarity for more clothes.)
"So I guess I`ll sleep on the couch then?" I asked
"No no no I can`t ask you to sleep there, But you can sleep with me.. if you want?" Fluttershy said and quickly hid behind her mane in embarrassment.
I could have swarn I saw her blush before she hid behind her mane but I paid no attention to it.
Once we were in bed I was about to doze off to sleep until I heard something that may affect me when Fluttershy said "Torian, stay with me."
And that was Chapter 1 of this new story and I hope I can be able to entertain you guys. There will be more going into Torian`s past and possible lemons in the future. As always Review, Favorite and all support is apperciated. This is The Admiral signing out. Dismissed.