The opinions of Freddie

by labelma

Freddie is a dauntless security guard, who spends his days observing people. how will he feel about characters we know and love? The characters from an outsiders point of view. I don't suggest reading this, it was my first story, I just can't bring myself to delete it.

1. Chapter 1

A/N: This is my first official fanfiction, so I'm sure it won't be perfect. Thank you for getting so far as to click on my story, I appreciate it. Before you read any further, I would like to say, that this is not really a story, because it has no plot. This is simply how an outsider (someone who is not connected to the story) might view the characters, without knowing all the details. So with that said, here is my story. Oh and a little side note, this takes place in the middle of stage two.

My name is Freddie. I'm 18 years old, and I was born here, in the greatest faction dauntless. I was ranked number four at the end of initiation, landing me a job as a dauntless security guard. What we are supposed to do, is walk around the pit and hallways, making sure that everything is safe, but then again, this is dauntless, so there is almost no need for a security guard. Does that mean I've never actually done my job? No, there have been quite a few incidents, why my skills were needed, but in the two years that I've been here, it has been mostly thieves, or drunken members getting into fights with children (its dauntless right?). So mostly, I spend my days watching people. Not in a stalking, snooping kind of way, but I walk around the compound, and watch how people interact. It's quite interesting actually. After doing this for two years, I've gotten the hang of how to read body language, and what someone really means when they say something. I guess my extra erudite aptitude helps with that a little bit. The annual initiation season always spices things up a bit. New initiates are so interesting to read, and how they interact with their trainers and members is even more interesting.

Okay, so that's chapter one. I know the chapter was short, they will all be short, and so this is just the beginning. I will get to work right away on Freddie's opinion of Four. Please review, I am fully open to criticism, and I want to make my work better. So please review. Also, I would love to hear any of your opinions of the characters, so maybe I can incorporate, more than just my view. The characters are Four, Eric, Tris, Christina, And Al. thank you for reading this far.