This Love : Revamp
Hello *waves frantically* , I haven't been on here in over 5 years , I can't remember any of the info for RUMINATEDKISSES , so I'll just continue everything here.
Crying .
My vision begins to fog , as the embodiment of my weakness slides down my cherubic face . Never have I ever hated a person as much as I hate you . Of course , one has to take into account the fact that you're not a person ; you're an otherworldly being . You're a vampire and a pitiful one at that . I always hear you and your colleagues speak of your disdain for humans , I'm sure they'd be more than surprised to see you in all your naked glory , thrusting into one .
I roll my eyes as I feel you pick up speed . Almost finished , eh? I nearly have a conniption when you tear out a chunk of my silky chestnut hair before howling your completion .
Stinging .
I bury my face in the pillow , hoping to finally get some rest . I shiver when I feel you languidly run your tongue up and down my spine . You place your full lips directly above my buttocks , tiny knots form in my stomach every time you plant a kiss . Of course , nothing enjoyable ever lasts long.
I cry out when I feel something puncture my pearly skin . Turning around hastily , I can see that you've lodged your fangs between my shoulder blades . You remove your elongated canines and begin dragging them down my spine . I arch my back involuntarily , my body feels as though it's being massaged by eels . My blood vessels feel like tiny land mines ready to be detonated . You glare at me as if I'm a bratty child disrupting a gourmet meal . The only place you can receive a sufficient amount of blood is from the jugular , we both know this , you're just being a prick .
Burning.
I feel the bed shift and I smile inwardly , it's time for you to go . I don't have to turn over to know that your smoking . The grape smell of those bourgeois cigarillos you seem to enjoy are sickening . I lie flat on my back as I watch you reassemble yourself . I've caught you halfway through the act and you look preternaturally beautiful .
Your tailored Versace pants hang dangerously low on your wide , bony hips . My eyes travel north and I can't help but gawk at your long , lean torso . I place my silk covered pillow over my growing erection . My eyes continue to ascend your towering frame and I finally reach the crème de la crème , your face .
You live in both realms of beauty (which simply isn't fair) . You could easily be an androgynous model for the likes of Dior and Versace . You like their clothing , right ? You catch me staring and you wink at me . Attempting to zip your pants , you jump around ungracefully causing ashes from your unattended cigarillo to fall on my apartment carpet with a hiss .
I glare daggers at you and you smile cheekily before using those long, nimble fingers to remove the cigarillo from your mouth , "Oops".
Chapter 1 done ! Please review , hopefully this ones an improvement . This is being done from a cellphone so the formatting might be kinda wonky .
Although I'm sure they don't get on here anymore or they probably won't see this I really want to thank "Trisitia-the-Sin" , "alltheangelsinheaven" , "Battygirl" , "Vampirefreakshow" , "ImpactManiac" and "TheGoldenDeagonborn" for reviewing the first version .
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