A new start, I have a chance Chapter 1

This is my first attempted at writing a fanfic. I've read dozens of others, which some have inspired me to actually put this down on paper before it gives me insomnia. I have also seen some of these series in Japanese.
DISCLAIMER I don't own any of the series mentioned in this fic. The characters are from their most respected owners and if this seems like I ripped off anyone, forgive me I didn't. It all came from my twisted, TV raised mind. If my descriptions of the characters offend anyone please understand; this is anime not just children's cartoon. The language and personality of each individual in this story is base on their attitude in their respected series. I am trying to get them as close as I can to their real persona. Sue me you will get nothing but a large lawyer's bill and wasting of your precious time, effort and pain.
New Life: I have a chance Prologue I am-
Within a dark room that is only lit by a burning fire, beside it there are only a few laid out mats for prayer. A single man occupies the room. He is 6 ft. tall, lean, and raven hair cut in a short half bowl, man; eyes ice blue that held sadness in great depth. Dressed in black pants, purple long sleeve shirt and a black trench coat with matching black gloves and black shoes. Sitting in a lotus position with a blank expression on his face and his eyes closed, he meditates to the peace that is around him. Why he is here? To reprimand himself for his evil deeds he has done.
BOOOOOOOMMMMMM an explosion brings him out of his tranquility. He stands up with his kodachis unsheathed and his guards up. Surveying the new surrounding with narrow eyes he sees he is standing in the middle of a large crater with piles of rubbles everywhere. It was a dark evening but what time he couldn't tell. The sound of a cry baby alerts his attention to his left, out of the corner of one of his eyes he notice a child on the ground no older than 1 year old, the wall next to it threatens to crumble and crush the kid. A man in western white coat who is badly injured with bruises and his cut were bleeding, sprawled on the ground half buried in a the rubble try to get to the whaling baby.
Using his broken arms Mr. Tome desperately claw at the rocks to free him-self so he can reach his daughter. He stopped as a stranger pick up his Hotaru into his arms and brought her to him. He smiles at the little girl in the unknown man's arms.
Tome " Hotaru-chan y-yo-your s-su-safe" he collapses to welcome darkness.
The mystery man frowns down at the still body of the battered man the in his arm had settle down in his arm when she was picked up. Took in his surrounding and started in one direction with Hotaru in his arms sleeping peacefully. Within a few minutes later he is confronted with 8 teenage girls in the most scantiest outfit he has seen and a little girl in pink in similar getup.
Mystery man" Who are you?" Glaring at them and eyeing them suspiciously Shock plainly showed on the face of the girls I don't trust this guy, there's something dangerous about him. They lined up and posed in front of him. Stupidly.
" WE ARE THE SAILOR SCOUTS, WE STAND FOR LOVE AND JUSTICE, WE WILL PUNISH EVIL, THAT MEANS YOU!" finishing it off with a team synchronized arm gestures. It looks like they were the cheer leading squad.
Mystery man" ......"
The man stood in front of them only stared emotionlessly back.
Mystery Man" ......"
The staring contest was getting nowhere fast for both side. It was getting near into the early morning. The man frown deeper, this was irritating him a lot.
Mystery man" what the hell is going on here? Are you the one who kill this girl's family?
He ask in a calm cold whisper.
The girls winced at the tone and at words he said they couldn't help but shudder at the intense glare in his blue/gray eyes, but they notice the quiet baby in his arms was waking up.
Sailor Pluto" sailor Saturn" she gasp, a grim look post on her face.
The man snapped his head in her direction waiting for her to say something else then felt a light tug on his coat. Looking down, Hotaru/Sailor Saturn was waking up from her nap.
Sailor Uranus was a bit annoyed with this guy he seem to act as if he doesn't know what's going on but then it could be a negaverse trap.
Sailor Uranus" WHO ARE YOU? WHY ARE YOU HERE?"
He didn't answer, he was paying attention to the baby. Watching her open her eyes and smile at him and gargling something. He just stare at it confusedly. The scouts smile at the scene of a baby playing happily with this dark guy's black trench coat .
"Shinomori, Aoshi." He said looking up at them. Then he turn his to Hotaru who was giggling and clapping about something he didn't know.
Hotaru" Owchi Owchi he-ee-he-ee Owchi pappi" clapping and giggling at the guy in her face Aoshi raised his eyebrows at and gaped his mouth open like a fish for a few second then shot his head up at the girls hoping for an explanation. The girls were standing there giggling and laughing at his expression.
Girls" that is so-so-oh-oh- cuuuuute, she thinks he's her daddy-hee-hee-hee"
Aoshi face faulted "OH-MY-GAAAWWDD." One of the six girls who was laughing at him screamed.
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