Neerp: So... as my reveiw told you, my first fic here SUCKED! I mean, I'm
so bad at this, but thanks for the advice 0 I'm going to try again, this
time on a lighter note! Tehe! Lately I've been reading Dragonlance, and
watching Trigun, all while reading Ranma fics! GOSH! N E way, I'm going to
Attempt a crossover, ATTEMPT! Please send this hopeless wright feedback,
more wrighting tips would be nice! By the way, I took Run Away off... hehe
Also, Rem is my character, and the only other thing I own is three Radios!
Ranma sighed. When is he going to get here, he said it would only take a minuet! He looks at his watch. Minuet my ass! 2 hours I'v been sitting here! Gawd Damnit! Suddenly a blue beat-up station wagon comes down the street. In the front seat, is a young man, whom looks oddly like Ranma, with his hair down, insted of in a braid. Ranma sighs. "Finaly, took you long enough!" "Get in the car." Rem snorts. Ranma gets into the passenger seat. It's about five minuets before Rem speaks. "Some friends of mine are haveing a surprise party, you wanna come?" "Sure, what's the catch?" "No catch bro, just some friends." Ranma smirks. Rem is nutorius for haveing crazy friends. "Who's party?" "Hiei's" "The short one who never talks!?" "Oh he talks Ran..." "To us I mean." "Ya." "He'll kill you." "Not me, Ranma, Kura..." "Great... the pansy." "You won't be saying that tonight!" Rem laughs. "Everyone who we could get to come will be there. Hiei's been... away for a while." It was obvious to Ranma that his brother was leaving out something. The thought of Just who would be there kindof scared Ranma."By the way, when are you going to get rid of this hunk of junk, anyway?" "When I get a better job then waiting tables for Shampoo..."
They pulled into the spot near the dojo where Rem always parked. "You go clean up Ran, we've got a long night ahead of us. Oh, and go tell 'kane she's invited." He winks, then heads upstairs. Ranma grumbles. "He thinks he's so smart, but I can tell he's gonna ask Kasumi to go to!" Ranma also walks up the stairs, but he stops at the last door in the hallway. Akane's room. I wonder if she'll go... He was about to knock on the door, when Akane opens it. "Oh! Ranma!" She blinks. "What do you want?" "I came to err... ask if ummm... if you would like to go to a party with me?" Akane uncarictoristicly smiles. "I'd love to." Ranma is shocked that she would actualy want to go somewhere with him. "You should go get ready." Akane smiles, then returns to her bedroom.
Ranma sighs. Well, maybe she's just trying to be nice... He grunts as he does a few more situps. There's a knock on his bedroom door. "You ready Ran?" "Ya hold on!" Ranma stands, and puts on his shirt. He opens the door, to see his elder brother standing there. (Now, before we go on, you should know a few things about Rem. He's a twenty-one year old dark martialartist. Which means that he, if he so wanted to, could rip your heart out, littiraly. He enjoys partying, and does so often. He has two best friends, Youko Kurama, and Hiei. These two introduced Rem to their friends, Yusuke Urimeshi and Kazuma Kuwabara. Rem is an unoffical part of theam Uremeshi, and is always on call for them. He also has a larg crush on the eldest Tendu sister, Kasumi. Rem always wears black, and looks just like Ranma. The only differance is their Hairstyles. Rem's hair reaches round about his lower back. Rem is the only one in the Tendu home with a job. He waits tables at the Necko Hanten. Now that you know all of this, back to the story!) "Lets go."
Kasumi smiles at the two boys when they come down the stairs. She is wearing a blue strapless dress Rem bought her.It frames body very well, showing her curves. Akane is wearing a light pink dress, that comes down to her knees. She smiles "Are we ready boys?" "Yes, lets head for the car."
When the arrive at the party, there seems to already be alot of poeple there. Rem leads the group into the party hall. "Rem! You're here!" Yukina throughs her arms around the very surprised Rem. Rem blinks. "Hey Yukina, geeze! Ow! Too much love there hun, I need ta breeth!" "Sorry Rem!" She giggles, then turns her attention to Ranma. "So you're the little brother I keep hearing about!" Ranma blinks. "And you are...?" "Yukina! I'm a friend of Rems!" Ranma smiles. "Hello Yukina." Suddenly, Ranma was on the ground, with Yusuke kneeling on his cheast. "Long time no see, Saotome!" "Well well, Urameshi! Did you have to jump on me!" "Sure I did!" Ranma chucles, the playfully shoves Yusuke off. "Where's the host of this shindig?" Rem asks. "Over there, helping the girls you brought with there coats." Yusuke says. As he ahd said, Kurama was helping Akane and Kasumi with their coats. After he was finished with that, he indecated to the snack table, and went over to greet the brothers. "Rem, glad you made it!" "Finaly!" A voice behind Kurama states. Tanis smiles as he walks over to Ranma, Rem and Kurama. "It took you long enough!" "Ah! My favoret Half elf!" Tanis snorts. "Funny, very funny...." Rem smiles. "I know, when's the party boy going to get here?" "Soon-" " Evertyone! He's here!" Keico calls form her post by the window. "Everyone hide!" Kurama says.
Hiei enters the room. It's dark, but smells like... cake? "SURPRISE!!" Hiei is startled, as the light turns on, and a large group of people jump from their hiding places. "Welcome home Hiei!" Kurama says, putting an arm around Hiei. "What in the hells is this about Kurama?" "Well, you've been gone for three months, and so I thought it would be nice to through you a party!" Hiei snorts. "Goody..." Next chapter, we see Hiei and Rem get drunk! Weeehooo! Review please! But be gental! I'm knew at this!
Ranma sighed. When is he going to get here, he said it would only take a minuet! He looks at his watch. Minuet my ass! 2 hours I'v been sitting here! Gawd Damnit! Suddenly a blue beat-up station wagon comes down the street. In the front seat, is a young man, whom looks oddly like Ranma, with his hair down, insted of in a braid. Ranma sighs. "Finaly, took you long enough!" "Get in the car." Rem snorts. Ranma gets into the passenger seat. It's about five minuets before Rem speaks. "Some friends of mine are haveing a surprise party, you wanna come?" "Sure, what's the catch?" "No catch bro, just some friends." Ranma smirks. Rem is nutorius for haveing crazy friends. "Who's party?" "Hiei's" "The short one who never talks!?" "Oh he talks Ran..." "To us I mean." "Ya." "He'll kill you." "Not me, Ranma, Kura..." "Great... the pansy." "You won't be saying that tonight!" Rem laughs. "Everyone who we could get to come will be there. Hiei's been... away for a while." It was obvious to Ranma that his brother was leaving out something. The thought of Just who would be there kindof scared Ranma."By the way, when are you going to get rid of this hunk of junk, anyway?" "When I get a better job then waiting tables for Shampoo..."
They pulled into the spot near the dojo where Rem always parked. "You go clean up Ran, we've got a long night ahead of us. Oh, and go tell 'kane she's invited." He winks, then heads upstairs. Ranma grumbles. "He thinks he's so smart, but I can tell he's gonna ask Kasumi to go to!" Ranma also walks up the stairs, but he stops at the last door in the hallway. Akane's room. I wonder if she'll go... He was about to knock on the door, when Akane opens it. "Oh! Ranma!" She blinks. "What do you want?" "I came to err... ask if ummm... if you would like to go to a party with me?" Akane uncarictoristicly smiles. "I'd love to." Ranma is shocked that she would actualy want to go somewhere with him. "You should go get ready." Akane smiles, then returns to her bedroom.
Ranma sighs. Well, maybe she's just trying to be nice... He grunts as he does a few more situps. There's a knock on his bedroom door. "You ready Ran?" "Ya hold on!" Ranma stands, and puts on his shirt. He opens the door, to see his elder brother standing there. (Now, before we go on, you should know a few things about Rem. He's a twenty-one year old dark martialartist. Which means that he, if he so wanted to, could rip your heart out, littiraly. He enjoys partying, and does so often. He has two best friends, Youko Kurama, and Hiei. These two introduced Rem to their friends, Yusuke Urimeshi and Kazuma Kuwabara. Rem is an unoffical part of theam Uremeshi, and is always on call for them. He also has a larg crush on the eldest Tendu sister, Kasumi. Rem always wears black, and looks just like Ranma. The only differance is their Hairstyles. Rem's hair reaches round about his lower back. Rem is the only one in the Tendu home with a job. He waits tables at the Necko Hanten. Now that you know all of this, back to the story!) "Lets go."
Kasumi smiles at the two boys when they come down the stairs. She is wearing a blue strapless dress Rem bought her.It frames body very well, showing her curves. Akane is wearing a light pink dress, that comes down to her knees. She smiles "Are we ready boys?" "Yes, lets head for the car."
When the arrive at the party, there seems to already be alot of poeple there. Rem leads the group into the party hall. "Rem! You're here!" Yukina throughs her arms around the very surprised Rem. Rem blinks. "Hey Yukina, geeze! Ow! Too much love there hun, I need ta breeth!" "Sorry Rem!" She giggles, then turns her attention to Ranma. "So you're the little brother I keep hearing about!" Ranma blinks. "And you are...?" "Yukina! I'm a friend of Rems!" Ranma smiles. "Hello Yukina." Suddenly, Ranma was on the ground, with Yusuke kneeling on his cheast. "Long time no see, Saotome!" "Well well, Urameshi! Did you have to jump on me!" "Sure I did!" Ranma chucles, the playfully shoves Yusuke off. "Where's the host of this shindig?" Rem asks. "Over there, helping the girls you brought with there coats." Yusuke says. As he ahd said, Kurama was helping Akane and Kasumi with their coats. After he was finished with that, he indecated to the snack table, and went over to greet the brothers. "Rem, glad you made it!" "Finaly!" A voice behind Kurama states. Tanis smiles as he walks over to Ranma, Rem and Kurama. "It took you long enough!" "Ah! My favoret Half elf!" Tanis snorts. "Funny, very funny...." Rem smiles. "I know, when's the party boy going to get here?" "Soon-" " Evertyone! He's here!" Keico calls form her post by the window. "Everyone hide!" Kurama says.
Hiei enters the room. It's dark, but smells like... cake? "SURPRISE!!" Hiei is startled, as the light turns on, and a large group of people jump from their hiding places. "Welcome home Hiei!" Kurama says, putting an arm around Hiei. "What in the hells is this about Kurama?" "Well, you've been gone for three months, and so I thought it would be nice to through you a party!" Hiei snorts. "Goody..." Next chapter, we see Hiei and Rem get drunk! Weeehooo! Review please! But be gental! I'm knew at this!