So I've kind of had this idea for a couple of years actually and I've never put it on paper, let along any fan site. So I hope you enjoy my creation, I accept constructive criticism and lovely reviews. (P.s when I use these symbols - that means it's someone's thought)

-The air is so cool today. I wish it was like this all the time. Warm and light. Yeah, that would be perfect.-

"Chihiro! Chihiro where are you?!" -That must be Jimmy. He's too overprotective. I mean I know I'm only four but, come on I'm way smarter than your average four-year-old. Then again if he wasn't overprotective then he'd be a horrible older brother.-

"CHIHIRO! Do you not hear me calling?!" Jimmy hollered, he was still a few feet from the shrine, even farther from me. The family shrine is where my grandfather is buried. The shrine holds his head while the rest of his body is buried underground, he's huge. Well that's what I heard at least. He passed away before I was born. Who supposedly was this great demon lord that no one could ever defeat. Then he got old and died.

"Chihiro, must you ignore me. You can not, nor are you allowed to run off by yourself. Anything can happen, if father were to find you without supervision he'd surely have thy head for the morning feast!" -Jimmy spoke in the voice of my father which I hated. Father calls it the way of the feudal era, whatever that means. It's not only pointlessly formal but annoying as well.-

"Chihiro! Are you even listening to me. The shrine is not a place for you to take a nap!"

-He's right it really isn't. The shine may be where my grandfather was buried but it's also right on the edge of the mountain, meaning it could fall and collapse at anytime.-

"Chihiro, why aren't you listening to me, is something troubling me?" Jimmy was truly concerned. Staring into those bright green eyes with perfect curls cascading down his high cheek bones. He had a strong square jaw and small lips. His nose was pointy but not in that unattractive kind of way. He was hunched over in a squat but he could still see he had some height to him. A nice lean body to top it all off. He looked nothing like me. Well that's also because even thought he's my brother he's only my half brother.-

-He looked nothing like me. Well, that's also because even though he's my brother he's only my half brother.-

"Brother I can assure you there isn't anything bothering." -Jimmy and I only share a father. We have different mothers. His mother was some powerful read headed witch who was purified but a high priestess. But that was a hundred years ago. So my father remarried, to my mother the most beautiful celestial being you could ever imagine. I take after her. I have long straight black hair the darker than the night itself. Big round hazel eyes, to go on my pale face. Small nose and lips. My cheek bones aren't as high as my brothers but they're pretty cute. My mother tells me as I grow so will the shape of my body, I don't really knows what that means.-

"Well if everything's ok, why are you up here all by yourself. Do you not wish to see your friend Inuyasha?" -Inuyasha is my best friend, he has long silver hair he keeps pulled back. He has the deepest brown eyes you will ever see, a small nose and tiny lips. Ideki lives in a human village not too far from our lands. Our estate is really big, Empty too. Even though we could afford it we only have the two house holds. (Meaning two mansions) the bigger one belongs to my father and the other all of our workers live there. We don't have many workers, three to be exact. My father's right hand man Lester, my mother's midwife and, my aunt Lilith. She's family but she makes all of our clothes so that makes her a worker, plus she really old so we have her with her own space.-

"Inuyasha's spending time with his mother, she's ill so he's taking care of her. Humans are different from demons brother they require more care to their fragile bodies."

-Inuyasha's mother may be human but he isn't, at least not all human. His father was a demon. A pretty powerful one too but my father killed him during the Great War. He got his look from his father, well just his hair Color and dog ears really. The rest of his genetics he has to thank his mother for. Her name is Sakurai, her hair is dark brown she's tall and slender. Her lips and nose are both small. She has round brown eyes and has the fairest skin I've seen.-

"Why don't you go down to the village and see if he needs any help."

"Come on I'll get Cerberus. Let's go see Inuyasha."

Ok so I decided to end it there, yes it's detailed I thought it should be lol so tell me what you think of it. you can give me your advice it's very welcomed. I look forward to request, I hope u get some lol.