Hi this is my first story so please try and be nice about it.
Third person
Bella looked around for the first time seeing what the castle looked like, the walls slightly browning from age with the thrones of the three vampire kings sitting in the middle of the room. All the vampires in the room turn to stare at her, as if she was a new toy to a todler at christmas time. Bella just rolled her eyes at them and turned to look at the three kings who were just now sitting down.
Bella POV
I just rolled my eyes at the vampires 'Assholes' I thought as I turned to look at the three kings,"Well Edward lookes like you got your Bella back!" The overly cheerful vampire stated. Edward tried to rap his arm around me, tried being the key word as I side stepped him.
Edward just nodded his head and was about to speak when I decided to cut in by saying," Excuse me, but I believe Eddie and I are still broken up and are not getting back together at anytime so... When can I go home or am I just going to die?" Everyone just looked at me like I was crazy and the blonde king just growled at me.
"Dear Isabella you are not going to die.. Well not today anyway.. Now may I try my gift on you?" The crazy one asked.
"Sure why not Eddies gift couldn't work so go ahead and try." I said giving him my hand as he had lifted his torward me to take."Intresting... My power doesn't work on you. Jane be a dear and try yours on her." He said to a blonde who I'm guessing is Jane.
"Yes master," She replied, Jane then turned to me and said," This is going to hurt." She just stared at me, 'Trying to use her powers I guess' I thought. When Jane tried to move torward me the blonde king moved in front of me.
"You are not to touch her. Understand me." he growled out at her.
"Caius, calm down nobody is going to hurt her." Crazy guy said calmly to Caius. The other king Marcus moved to 'Aro' I thought of his name instead of 'Crazy guy'. Marcus took Aro's hand and stated to look at Caius and me. Aro justnodded his head and said,"Well it looks like we have another mated couple in our grasps." Everyone in the room turned to look at the one person that growled 'Edward' I thought as I slowly turned around to him,"Eddie remember we are not a thing. You left me in the woods and I just embraced the thought that you and I aren't mates. I had a party, I rode a motorcycle, I got drunk, and I grew a backbone." I said to him in a deathly calm voice.
"Love, we belong together. I love you and you love me." Jerkward responded.
"One I don't love you and two as you heard Cauis and I belong together not you and I. Understand?" I asked him, Edward just lunged forward grabbing me by the throat.
"You belong with me!" he roared in my face. My eyesight started to blur and go black around the edges. The last thing I heard was Cauis tearing Edward appart. Then everything went black.
Again this is my first story so don't be that mean.