Look this is only my 3rd story and im getting better at writing so give me a brack. tell me what you think R&R. Yolo.
chapter 1: The new born mouse
Penelope was at home with Bentley at her side. Its a sunny spring morning in Holland. That is interrupted by a loud scream. "BENTLEY GET IN HERE MY WATER GUST BROKE! AHHHHH."Bentley rolled in as fast as he could, as he came to the room of his wife he rolled in to the wall. "Ouch that hurt like hell. Hold on Penelope Ill get you in to the car." "Hury it up, I cant take in much longer. AHHHHHH!"
He got her in to the car and got on there way to the hospital. With in minutes a pone entering the hospital, Penelope was off to the delivery room with Bentley close behind. When she was settled in the room they gave her a epidermal. Bentley was right beside her, hand in hand. " Felling better Penelope, is the medican working at all?" she smiled and looked at him. "Ya its working pretty well it gust fells like I got kicked in the stamik a few times, but not allot of pain."
Bentley smiled at is wife, then the doctor came in. "How are we doing ? Is the medican working well?" Penelope looked up at the Doctor with a smile. "Were doing gust fine thank you for asking. Youch what was that?" The woman quickly sat on her chair. "Well look at there mama your fully dilated." She began to sqease her husbands hand. As she began to breath harder, Bentley began to rube her back. She sat up because of the pain on sqease Bentleys hand even harder. "AHHHHHHHH this hurts so damn much." Bentley shoke his head to stop the ringing from Penelope's yell. The doctor looked over the blanket on Penelope's legs. "Your crowning push a little harder. One,two,three push hard now." She pushed with all of her strength. The baby was half way out. Bentley rolled to the end of the bed an looked at the body of they child. He looked at her with a smile."Come on Penelope one more big push, ready?" She gulped an toke severely deep breaths. "I'm ready, lets do it." With one more push the room was filled with the cry of a baby. Penelope smiled with a tired look. The doctor raped the baby in a pink blanket that had purple stripes. "Its a baby girl."
The doctor handed the little mouse to her mother. Penelope toke the child in her arms and kissed he baby girls forehead. Bentley had small tears in his eyes. "Penelope she looks gust like you, her hair is blond, she has green eyes, and your beautiful face shes like a meany you." Penelope smiled and kissed his cheek. "So what should we name her? I really like Sofie. What do you think?" "Its perfect gust like you and for her middle name how about Ann? Its cutie and its sutibal for her." They both looked at the little mouse. Penelope toke Bentleys hand. "Sofie Ann Clark its perfect." The doctor toke the baby and left the room so Penelope could rest.
So not bad huh. Go a head an tell me what you think, and please review.