Just so you know, I have re-done everything.
I had submitted my story into , and it narrowly got rejected because it needed some more editing.
And I have to admit, some of my writing was clumsy (and still is- I won't deny it), and I have done a large change. I have changed my storyline completely, because they were too worried that I may end up having a plagiarism problem, and so it has totally been changed. All my ideas are my own!!! LOL
The first two chapters haven't changed, in essence, just have been modified to better English. Oh, my preface has been changed too (I put more time into it than I did last time), but my blurb has stayed the same- that bit has stayed in my story unedited.
Same deal- you can review if you want (and I would love you to), but I won't beg you, except for chapter two. I will respond to them, and I have decided that I like writing chapter notes too, because they are fun!!! Also, I liked constructive criticism, but if you think it is awful, tell me! And if you don't like a particular part of my story, don't read it, or be patient and wait and find out why I did it!!!
The Beta services are amazing and have really helped me to try and clean up some of my horrifying mistakes.
I just hope that my story gets accepted this time, and if not, I'll keep on trying. Being rejected, just so you know, didn't make me said, or annoyed at all. It just encouraged me to change my errors and try and get a better story written in the end… Fingers crossed I get accepted!!!
Stephenie Meyer owns the Twilight Saga, and the subsiding characters within it, and all situations and settings that she had created. I do not own the Twilight Saga, and I own the rights to what I have written here, as they are my own scenarios! Thanks