I don't own Naruto.
This is my first story and I would like people to read it and tell me how it is and what mistakes i made and what I need to do to fix it. This story mainly focus on the OC'S they will interact with the rookie 9 later in the story.
Character Bios
Team Anko
1. Daisuke Yagani
age: 12
male
Personality: The lone male of Team Anko. He is cunning, clever, and stealthy. A prankster that rivals Naruto. Sweet and nice guy, shows unothodox intelligence only in battle, very fierce when it comes to fighting even in his true form. A little goofy and childish but with more common sense than Naruto.
Ability: He can do an advanced version and yuri version of the sexy jutsu of any girl only it shows what the girl really looks like naked (no clouds) he reads the mind of his male opponents and changes into the girl they lust after or have an affection for. He dislikes hitting girls and because of that he always loses to girls in a spar in the academy, to make up for it, he created a technique when his eyes glow pink he has the ability to mentally tickle a girl by focusing chakra in his eyes and imagine any part of the girls body he wants to tickle, also he develop a tickle fetish from using it too much. Anko, Sora, Mai, and alot of girls around his age have been his victim.
Hobbies: He likes pulling pranks, making jokes and loves to tickle torture girls to interrogate them, to calm them down when they get mad at him and try to hit him, just hearing them laugh, or getting him to do what he wants. He's a little perverted, but would never try to force himself on a girl or rape them, but he does peep at girls to get a good idea of what they look like naked for his unorthodox battle techniques. He also have the ability to sense a weakness in his opponents.
Clothing and Appearance: Maroon pants and gold shirt, baby blue shoes, short black hair,
Bloodline: He has the ability to shape shift to anyone he sees, Once in his disguise form he can use the powers and abilities of anyone he turns into equaling that person in strength, stamina, intelligence, speed, and power. When he fight's an opponent he turns into the person that opponent knows or is close to and use their attacks against them. He temporarily retains the memories of anyone he turns into. He also carries a sword with a badger symbol on the side, but rarely ever uses it except against another swordsman. He's an interrogator, infiltrator, and frontline fighter.
2. Sora Matsuki
age: 12
female
Description: long red hair, red eyes, wears the same clothes as Tenten only her shirt has long sleeves, but the color is all red with a black Chinese dragon imprinted in the back.
Personality: the voice of reason, she is intelligent in her own right, mature, and also nice, but she does curse sometimes. She has a crush on Daisuke (which he is a little clueless about) but is not above keeping him in line when he flirts with other girls or does something stupid, she can get jeolous when another girl flirts with him. Because she is way more patient with him than Sakura is with Naruto she doesn't hit him just drags him away, Sora has a tough time getting Mai to socialize with the team, even though she is leader she doesn't get involve when Mai pounds Daisuke for his pranks on her. She has a habit of saying "hell yeah" when she defeats an opponent.
Bloodline: has the power of ten elements: earth (brown), wind (pink), fire (red), water (blue), lightening (yellow), ice (columbia blue), metal (silver), wood (green), light (white), and darkness (black). Her hair, eyes, and clothes changes to the colors depending on which element she is using. She can manipulate and control them for creature comforts and fighting. Reconnaissance and tracking is her specialty. She is the healer and leader of the team.
3. Mai Kamaya
age: 12
female
Description: Ice blue eyes, white hair shaped like shippuuden Ino only she lacks her trademark bang that covers her right eye, She also sometimes lets her hair down when she's fighting, she wears tight black clothes that shows off her figure.
Personality: A calm and cold personality, intelligence that is on par with shikamaru, speed and strength on par with Lee, an ice queen because she comes from a military family She doesn't like being in a team at first because she doesn't trust a lot of people and she think that they'll hold her back. But time past and she consider her team like a second family even though she is still cold and calm. She is protective of her friends and will attack with extreme prejudice anyone that tries to kill them. She has respect for Daisuke although she is too proud to admit it, because he's the first person to dare make her laugh (although she kicked his ass later on that) She does give Daisuke advice on battle and what not to do could get him into trouble with people and also keeps him in line more than Anko and Sora by making her eyes glow red which frightens Daisuke. And as with Sora despite her personality she takes orders from Sora without question on missions and looks out for her teams wellbeing. She is the team's spy and tactical strategist, and assassin.
Hobbies: reading, studying and hanging out with her friends.
Powers: The pain stare jutsu: when she stares at someone and her eyes glow red, it brings up pain and suffering and blow and barrage from the target's life and unleashes the torment once again. She can also bring pain from a targets future as well. For example if she uses it on team Gai, Lee will feel Gaara crushing his arm and leg again, Neji will feel the pain of the cage bird seal, and Kidomaru's attack, and Tenten will feel the pain of Temari's attack and falling on Temari's fan. Also if she wants to she can kill people with it by making them experience how are they going to die before it actually happens but will never do that except in life or death situations. That mix with taijutsu is a deadly combination. She also has the ability to possess people and animals bodies, but unlike Ino she doesn't need to leave her body, plus she can't get hurt or die if anything happens to the body she possesses.
Let me know what you think and I will update soon. Please review. Peace.