What if Vision
*A/N: This is an edited version (by my betas and me) and I hope you like the improvement!
Chapter 1 - Yet Another Amazing discovery by Saint Potter
All was quiet in the Gryffindor girls' dormitory, every one was fast asleep and Hermione Granger was no exception. But she turned as someone tugged on her bed sheets. Hermione supposed that it was only her cat, so she merely whispered "Go away Crookshanks, it's too early to get up."
"Hermione, it's us! Get up!"
Wait. Cats didn't talk.
"Harry, Ron, what are you doing here? It's still dark," yawned Hermione, "and if you haven't noticed, this is a Girls' dormitory!"
"Apparently this idiot found something incredible, and couldn't wait to show us," whispered Ron, sounding groggy too.
"I had to show you guys, it is so amazing!" said Harry, without an ounce of tiredness on his face.
~*~*~*~
*On the fourth floor corridor*
"Harry, last time you found an amazing gadget you got so preoccupied with it that you wouldn't move until Dumbledore made you!" And I thought you learnt something from the mirror of Erised!" nagged Hermione, with a scowl.
"Oh give him a break Herms, don't tell me you're not curious. Well Harry, what did you find this time? Snape's underwear on a stick?" asked Ron, as he tried to avoid stepping on someone else's foot, which was hard considering that the three of them were under the Invisibility cloak.
"We're almost there!" chocked Harry with excitement. They were now standing in front of what looked like a dusty old broom closet. "I was just wandering around here yesterday after Charms and I heard this thumping sound coming out of a broom closet," he said, pointing to the closet.
"And found this!"
Harry pushed open the door, revealing a small circular room; it was dimly lit with candles. In the middle of the room stood a marble podium.
"Nice room you got here!" remarked Ron as his eyes traveled around the room.
On top that podium stood something that highly resembled a muggle television set. The three of them walked up towards the podium.
"I think it wanted to be found, which explains the thumping" said Harry. He turned a little knob at the bottom of the 'thingamajig' and the screen immediately burst to life.
"I think its possessed!" declared Ron, who looked rather anxious to go.
"Don't be stupid Ron, this is a What-If vision!" explained Harry. "You can ask it any what-if question and it will show it to you! Surely you've read about it Hermione?"
For once, Hermione the walking encyclopedia was utterly clueless.
"Well it wasn't mentioned in 'Hogwarts, a History'!" she proclaimed.
"OK, I'll show you how it works. Ron, Hermione, one of you asks it a question, any what-if question would do."
"I'll do it! Uhmm.what should I ask it? Oh, I know!" said Ron, with a mischievous grin on his freckled face.
"What if Severus Snape was nice?"
A/N: Okay people, what do think of that? For those who have read it, is it better? For those who haven't is it good? Do you want to read more? Then REVIEW! (sorry, I just love reviews!
*A/N: This is an edited version (by my betas and me) and I hope you like the improvement!
Chapter 1 - Yet Another Amazing discovery by Saint Potter
All was quiet in the Gryffindor girls' dormitory, every one was fast asleep and Hermione Granger was no exception. But she turned as someone tugged on her bed sheets. Hermione supposed that it was only her cat, so she merely whispered "Go away Crookshanks, it's too early to get up."
"Hermione, it's us! Get up!"
Wait. Cats didn't talk.
"Harry, Ron, what are you doing here? It's still dark," yawned Hermione, "and if you haven't noticed, this is a Girls' dormitory!"
"Apparently this idiot found something incredible, and couldn't wait to show us," whispered Ron, sounding groggy too.
"I had to show you guys, it is so amazing!" said Harry, without an ounce of tiredness on his face.
~*~*~*~
*On the fourth floor corridor*
"Harry, last time you found an amazing gadget you got so preoccupied with it that you wouldn't move until Dumbledore made you!" And I thought you learnt something from the mirror of Erised!" nagged Hermione, with a scowl.
"Oh give him a break Herms, don't tell me you're not curious. Well Harry, what did you find this time? Snape's underwear on a stick?" asked Ron, as he tried to avoid stepping on someone else's foot, which was hard considering that the three of them were under the Invisibility cloak.
"We're almost there!" chocked Harry with excitement. They were now standing in front of what looked like a dusty old broom closet. "I was just wandering around here yesterday after Charms and I heard this thumping sound coming out of a broom closet," he said, pointing to the closet.
"And found this!"
Harry pushed open the door, revealing a small circular room; it was dimly lit with candles. In the middle of the room stood a marble podium.
"Nice room you got here!" remarked Ron as his eyes traveled around the room.
On top that podium stood something that highly resembled a muggle television set. The three of them walked up towards the podium.
"I think it wanted to be found, which explains the thumping" said Harry. He turned a little knob at the bottom of the 'thingamajig' and the screen immediately burst to life.
"I think its possessed!" declared Ron, who looked rather anxious to go.
"Don't be stupid Ron, this is a What-If vision!" explained Harry. "You can ask it any what-if question and it will show it to you! Surely you've read about it Hermione?"
For once, Hermione the walking encyclopedia was utterly clueless.
"Well it wasn't mentioned in 'Hogwarts, a History'!" she proclaimed.
"OK, I'll show you how it works. Ron, Hermione, one of you asks it a question, any what-if question would do."
"I'll do it! Uhmm.what should I ask it? Oh, I know!" said Ron, with a mischievous grin on his freckled face.
"What if Severus Snape was nice?"
A/N: Okay people, what do think of that? For those who have read it, is it better? For those who haven't is it good? Do you want to read more? Then REVIEW! (sorry, I just love reviews!