First chapter of my Spider-man 4 story based on the cancelled script.
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I may have grammar errors so don't be so harsh on me.
He was swinging around town for some time now since he was bored to do anything else.
His life was getting better after Harry's death.
He still couldn't get it why his pal had to die.
He always had those thoughts on his mind, you know about quitting being Spiderman again.
But every time he remembered his uncle's words –with great power comes great responsibility- had to go
on being the friendly neighborhood Spiderman even if for some news papers like the Daily Bugle was the deadly neighborhood Spiderman.
The only thing that could keep him from falling was Mary Jane Watson a girl he fell in love on first sight back in the 4th grade of public school.
MJ was dating numerous guys back in high school including his best friend Harry Osborn and the bully Flash Thomson.
Soon after Spiderman saved her from The Green Goblin and later some thugs she fell in love with him.
But at the end she ended up falling in love with Peter Parker.
All he wanted was to tell her how much he loved her but if he did , he would put her life in danger so he told her that only a friendship could be established between them.
But that was back then since now she knows his true identity and decided to be with him wherever the costs will be.
The things between them started going for the worse after Peter's control was taken by a black symbiotic costume.
He was even planning on asking her to marry him but after the past events he thought that it would be best for them to evolve their relationship first.
As he was swinging near the Bugle he saw a street bugler running with a young ladies purse.
Spiderman who quickly identified the lady swinged across the guy and hit him with his super duper flying kick.
"Haven't they taught you to be nice with ladies?" asked Spidey who had in no time the thief hanging webbed from two of the street's lights.
"Are you okay miss?" asked Spidey to the girl that lost her purse earlier.
She was probably 5'8'' and had light red hair.
"I'm fine mister" she replied laughing.
"What were you doing at the Bugle MJ?" asked Spidey.
"I wanted to surprise you and get you to a new place I found out but from what I can see you have been pretty busy beating up the thugs on the street" answered MJ.
"Yeah, but I'm never busy for you girl, let's go".
MJ hugged Spidey from the back and they started swinging to the place MJ was talking about.
It was an old restaurant one of those that MJ was probably working before she started her musical theatre career.
"Can you remind me the last time I faced super crazy bad guy since I'm getting really worried about the town being so quiet those days".
"I was 2 years ago and I probably try to forget this moment since all that is left is the good memories of Harry".
Spidey knew that the peaceful days in New York and Manhattan were few and that since he had some of them he should at least live the best out of them.
Adrian Toomes was a strange guy.
He has been cheated by his partner being left out of their business but instead of a bankrupt choose to take on a criminal life as the super villain Vulture.
He was starting his career as so Spidey didn't know anything about him.
Of course after a couple of small robberies the media will get crazy on getting info about the suspect and Spidey will find out that the peaceful days we were talking about were coming to an end.
The Vulture had only one goal, to steal more and more money so that he could build a company of his own.
He was old but not that old to prevent him from escaping from a dangerous situation.
Over the months he improved his flying abilities now being able to control them more accurately.
"So the bank closes at 8, right?" asked Toomes on the phone.
"Yes sir, at 8 o clock pretty much every bank in the area closes except for tomorrow because we have money loading work to be done" replied the bank manager.
"Hahaha that's sweet" answered Toomes who was happy finding his first big job. Tomorrow was for sure a big day for everyone.
What does the Vulture hold for his first big robbery?
Is Spidey going to catch up with him or the Vulture escapes undisturbed while Spidey shares some smooches with MJ?
Stay tuned good people and you'll find out.