Disclaimer: I do not own ANY of That 70s Show Ok...This is My first Fanfic.....and I have NO CLUE how it is going to end up...so please review and Give me some constructive critism... :c) Thanks --- So Here it goes:
"I always used to think that there was no weirder,disgusting, and unnatural couple than Hyde and Jackie, but now, I couldn't see them any other way. My Best Friend, Hyde, always gave Jackie protection. He would never let anything happen to her. I remember this one time when Jackie's Dad got sent to jail and her mom was still somewhere in Mexico, he looked out for her. He let her come into the safety of a house with her in his arms, of course intil they KNOCKED OVER MY STAR WARS SPACE COMMAND LEGO'S! But that's the past................I just would like to congratulate them on this beautiful day and wish them luck when they go out into the world and hope for the.........."
"OK ERIC, hurry up and quit rambling" Everyone in the reception hall started chuckling while Eric stood there looking very preturbed.
".......FINE...........Now let's here my beautiful wife, Donna, say some things about them even though I wasn't fin"
"OK ERIC, whatever you say. Now about Hyde and Jackie.......ERIC YOU TOOK ALL THE GOOD STUFF!!!!!!!!"
"No I didn't, there's still the time.....um....."
"Ok you two, Let's hope we don't wind up like that Jacks," Steven Hyde joked while everyone lauphed including Eric and Donna."Well, I'm not really good at this emotional crap, but I'll give it a try, but it's the only time ok Jackie?!" Jackie shook her head."Ok, I've never told anyone this, but remember that day of the barbeque that the Foreman's had and we went out to The Point?" Jackie nodded while everyone in the room except for Kitty looked confused.
"I KNEW YOU LIKED HER THEN....oh whoops..(does her lauph)...carry on Steven"
"Ok, thanks Mrs. Foreman, but back to what I was saying. I knew that day that I wanted you to be my wife and become Mrs. Steven Hyde and look where we are now. We are married and you are Mrs. Steven Hyde and I love you so much," Jackie started to cry
" Steven...I...uh....I don't have a big story, well I did, b--but that just blew me aw-way and all I can think of right now is how much I love you" Steven wiped the pouring tears from her eyes and looked into them and Jackie looked back. Steven Hyde went in and kissed her with all the love he had and Jackie did the same, kissed with all her heart. They knew from that moment on, nothing would ever stand in there way.
Ok..........That probably wasn't really good, but PLEASE give me CONSTRUCTIVE CRITISM.......I want to become better in my writing!! And I know this is really short...but I think for my first one........it may be ok that it's that short..I dunno though....so R-E-V-I-E-W
