Hey guys! This is my first X-Men: Evolution fic. I hope you all like it. Feel free to ask if you dont understand anything.
And please review or i wont be able to continue this.
---The Fate of 5---
"The Wonka factory will once again open its doors to 5 children. Who will get the chance to see the miracles that take place
in the factory. 5 golden tickets are again hidden in 5 Wonka Bars. And one of them will receive a lifetime supply of
chocolate!" The TV reporter announced in front of a candy shop bombarded with children finishing all the Wonka bars.
"Vunderbar! I'd like to go!" Kurt cheered as he turned to Kitty who was studying for her Trigonometry test.
"You'd just like to go because they're, like, giving out a lifetime supply of chocolate." Kitty teased as she tore her eyes
from the book.
"And vat's wrong vit that?" Kurt asked as he teleported behind Kitty.
"A ton of burgers plus a lifetime supply of chocolate isn't exactly, like, a good combination. Even for you." Kitty answered
as she phased through the wall towards the staircases. There, she saw Jean followed by Scott, who was carrying boxes of Wonka
bars.
"...And I want you to find that ticket by tonight!" Jean said with a spoiled look on her face.
"t-t-tonight? B-b-but Jean!" Scott reasoned as the top box fell and spilled on the floor.
"What about it?" Jean yelled. "You don't want to do it?!"
"It's not that! It-it-it's just..." Scott answered.
"You're mean!" Jean shouted back as she pretended to cry. "You never give me what I want! Duncan would have done it for me!"
"No Jean! I-I can do it! In fact, I can do it faster than he can!" Scott pleaded as he fell back and all the chocolate
escaped from their boxes.
"Really? Well then, I'll be expecting the ticket before I go to bed." Jean bended down and ran her index finger under Scott's
chin and made her way up the stairs. Scott, in turn, sighed as he picked up the Chocolate bars on the floor.
"Man Scott! You, like, have it bad." Kitty spoke as she helped pick up the bars.
"I know! Jean's degrading!" Scott complained fixing up some boxes.
"Then why don't you just, like, dump her?" Kitty asked as she tossed some bars into the boxes Scott fixed.
"I can't do that! I love her! I don't want to make her unhappy." Scott protested but then, *bamf* Kurt appeared.
"Vonka Bars!" He cheered again "Can I have one, Cyclops?"
"OK but just one. Jean and I had to buy at least a dozen from each continent." Scott answered as he handed a very happy
Nightcrawler his precious candy bar.
"Hehe...my precious!" Kurt stroked the bar as he hopped up the stairs.
"OK...that was freaky..." Scott stared after his friend.
"He's gotta, like, lay-off the Lord of the Rings for a while." Kitty answered
*****
Meanwhile, in the Brotherhood dormitory, Fred was gulping down boxes of Wonka bars.
"Can't beleive it!" Lance complained as he dusted himself.
"Yeah! All that for a bar of chocolate?" Todd added.
"Pfft...chocolate you two were craving for just a few moments ago." Pietro sneered. Then, the tree of them heard Freddie's
loud munching in the kitchen. They creeped over to see what was happening.
"Hey guys!" Fred managed to snuffle.
"Well what d'ya know! Freddie's also up for these golden tickets too." Lance sneered as he patted Freddie on the back.
"Golden tickets?" Freddie pulled a confused look.
"Ya don't know about the Golden tickets?" Todd asked bouncing his way beside Fred. "Why'd ya think there were so many people
lining up for a box o' those?"
"Maybe 'coz these are best tasting Candy in the world? So I decided to get one." Freddie answered.
"But how could you possibly afford all that?" Pietro asked as he quickly circled around Fred and the stack of chocolate.
"I didn't say i BOUGHT it. I said I GOT it." Freddie answered taking a bite off two bars.
"So you mean you STOLE it?!" Lance yelled
"Well, sorta...the storekeeper gave it to me for free..." Fred said.
"But?" Pietro wanted a more precise answer. The shopkeeper wouldn't just GIVE away boxes of candies.
"After I threatened him." Fred sighed as he took another bite.
"Uhn!" was all the rest could say as they slapped their hands to their foreheads.
"Man! We've already got enough trouble when these two caused a riot in the park!" Pietro wailed. He remembered the time Lance
and Todd decided to tip over the trash bins in the park for fun. Since then, the police kept a very close eye on them.
"Hey boys!" burst in a voice from their very battered doorway. The door, in turn, just fell down to reveal a teenage blonde.
"Yo Tabitha! You still chewing that gum?" Lance asked noticing the gum she was chewing.
"Of course! I don't plan on losing to YOU!" She answered.
"Oh yeah! bout that gum..." Todd wanted to say something but Tabitha cut him off.
"Yeah? What about it?"
"Oh nothing. Just that it looks totally disgusting!" Todd yelled back.
"Tss...take a look at the mirror why don't you?" She sneered. "Besides you're just jealous. I broke your record."
"Oh yeah?! Well you...you..." Todd tried to find a counterattack when...
"Wonka bars! Mmmmm, my favorite!" Boom Boom squealed.
"EVERYTHING'S your favorite." Todd murmured. But Tabitha just grabbed a bar of chocolate an headed for her room.
*****
In the Alcolyte house, Pyro was happily watching TV with his dinner spread out on the coffee table in front of him. He was
laughing, crying and even singing songs whenever the TV would play it.
Magneto and Gambit just arrived with tons of Wonka bars when John was singing with a song on MTV.
"I CAN'T FEEL, THE WAY I DID BEFORE DON'T TURN YOUR BACK ON ME, I WON'T BE IGNORED!" he "sang". In the kitchen, Magneto
jolted causing a bar to fall on Gambit's head. It seems these two also want to get a hold of the Golden Ticket.
"Tell me again why we're looking for the Golden Tickets? I mean, what can we get from a lifetime supply of chocolate?" Gambit
asked wiping his hair of the chocolate.
"Because, my dear Gambit, along with the chocolate, there is a tour. And in that tour, we are able to see what that Wonka
does that makes his chocolate so GOOD!" Magneto stood up as if he was reciting a poem.
"Sure...so you want to sell chocolate for a living?" Gambit asked again.
"No!" Magneto answered inching closer to Gambit. "With Wonka's secrets on our hands, we can control all those insolent
children who LOVE his chocolate."
"OK...children, gotcha." Gambit said although he still couldn't understand. Magneto saw the puzzled look on his teammate's
face.
"Gambit, have you ever heard the phrase: 'Children are the future of a nation'? Well, as we control them, the nation will
have no future so WE can take over."
Just then
"NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Pyro yelled from inside the den.
"What's wrong John?" Magneto asked as he rushed into the room.
"Th-they k-ki-kidnapped..." John stuttered along with his tears.
"Who? Who, John? C'mon! we can't help you if you dont tell us anything!" Magneto started to panic.
"P-p-pi-pika-PIKACHU!" John wailed and cried even louder.
"Who's Pikachu?" Magneto asked as Pyro ran to the corner of the room.
"Th-that really really cute yellow pokemon!" He whined and dug his face under Magneto's cape.
"Incompetent Fool!" Magneto scowled and hit the crying "baby" in the back of the head. "It's just a cartoon!"
"But...But..." and Pyro cried even louder.
"Aw, there, there. Don't worry John. We'll find those those mean old kidnappers." Gambit entered the room carrying a handful
of bars of chocolate. He moved closer to Pyro and pushed Magneto aside. He then handed John a bar.
"Really?" Pyro asked. He lifted his head from Magneto's cape and took the chocolate and hugged it.
"Really. I promise." Gambit answered and smiled. Magneto, however, sighed at the sight of his teammates.
"Remy, why do you treat him like a baby when he whimpers over the TV?"
"Because he's our friend, Magnus." Gambit answered smiling at John who was now falling asleep. "Besides, he doesn't act like
that all the time."
"Exactly! We should teach him to NEVER act like that." Magneto argued. Just then, they heard a knock on the door. Magneto
opened it to reveal Forge who collapsed in his arms.
"O my G**! Forge are you alright?" Magneto asked and dragged him to the den.
"I just need some food. Do you guys have any Wonka bars?" Forge gathered all his strength to speak.
"Here!" Gambit replied handing him one of the Wonka Bars he had been opening.
"Thanks!" Forge pulled out his best puppy dog eyes to show he was grateful.
"You're-" But before Gambit could finish, Forge dashed out of the house in the blink of an eye.
"Never give Forge ANYTHING!" Magneto yelled and made his way back into the kitchen. Gambit just stood there still trying to
take in everything.
-----end-----
There you go! The first chapter! This is only the beginning. For those who watched the Willy Wonka Movie, i guess you know how'll
be able to go. Any questions and suggestions for the upcoming chapters are welcome. I'd like to learn what you think.
And please review or i wont be able to continue this.
---The Fate of 5---
"The Wonka factory will once again open its doors to 5 children. Who will get the chance to see the miracles that take place
in the factory. 5 golden tickets are again hidden in 5 Wonka Bars. And one of them will receive a lifetime supply of
chocolate!" The TV reporter announced in front of a candy shop bombarded with children finishing all the Wonka bars.
"Vunderbar! I'd like to go!" Kurt cheered as he turned to Kitty who was studying for her Trigonometry test.
"You'd just like to go because they're, like, giving out a lifetime supply of chocolate." Kitty teased as she tore her eyes
from the book.
"And vat's wrong vit that?" Kurt asked as he teleported behind Kitty.
"A ton of burgers plus a lifetime supply of chocolate isn't exactly, like, a good combination. Even for you." Kitty answered
as she phased through the wall towards the staircases. There, she saw Jean followed by Scott, who was carrying boxes of Wonka
bars.
"...And I want you to find that ticket by tonight!" Jean said with a spoiled look on her face.
"t-t-tonight? B-b-but Jean!" Scott reasoned as the top box fell and spilled on the floor.
"What about it?" Jean yelled. "You don't want to do it?!"
"It's not that! It-it-it's just..." Scott answered.
"You're mean!" Jean shouted back as she pretended to cry. "You never give me what I want! Duncan would have done it for me!"
"No Jean! I-I can do it! In fact, I can do it faster than he can!" Scott pleaded as he fell back and all the chocolate
escaped from their boxes.
"Really? Well then, I'll be expecting the ticket before I go to bed." Jean bended down and ran her index finger under Scott's
chin and made her way up the stairs. Scott, in turn, sighed as he picked up the Chocolate bars on the floor.
"Man Scott! You, like, have it bad." Kitty spoke as she helped pick up the bars.
"I know! Jean's degrading!" Scott complained fixing up some boxes.
"Then why don't you just, like, dump her?" Kitty asked as she tossed some bars into the boxes Scott fixed.
"I can't do that! I love her! I don't want to make her unhappy." Scott protested but then, *bamf* Kurt appeared.
"Vonka Bars!" He cheered again "Can I have one, Cyclops?"
"OK but just one. Jean and I had to buy at least a dozen from each continent." Scott answered as he handed a very happy
Nightcrawler his precious candy bar.
"Hehe...my precious!" Kurt stroked the bar as he hopped up the stairs.
"OK...that was freaky..." Scott stared after his friend.
"He's gotta, like, lay-off the Lord of the Rings for a while." Kitty answered
*****
Meanwhile, in the Brotherhood dormitory, Fred was gulping down boxes of Wonka bars.
"Can't beleive it!" Lance complained as he dusted himself.
"Yeah! All that for a bar of chocolate?" Todd added.
"Pfft...chocolate you two were craving for just a few moments ago." Pietro sneered. Then, the tree of them heard Freddie's
loud munching in the kitchen. They creeped over to see what was happening.
"Hey guys!" Fred managed to snuffle.
"Well what d'ya know! Freddie's also up for these golden tickets too." Lance sneered as he patted Freddie on the back.
"Golden tickets?" Freddie pulled a confused look.
"Ya don't know about the Golden tickets?" Todd asked bouncing his way beside Fred. "Why'd ya think there were so many people
lining up for a box o' those?"
"Maybe 'coz these are best tasting Candy in the world? So I decided to get one." Freddie answered.
"But how could you possibly afford all that?" Pietro asked as he quickly circled around Fred and the stack of chocolate.
"I didn't say i BOUGHT it. I said I GOT it." Freddie answered taking a bite off two bars.
"So you mean you STOLE it?!" Lance yelled
"Well, sorta...the storekeeper gave it to me for free..." Fred said.
"But?" Pietro wanted a more precise answer. The shopkeeper wouldn't just GIVE away boxes of candies.
"After I threatened him." Fred sighed as he took another bite.
"Uhn!" was all the rest could say as they slapped their hands to their foreheads.
"Man! We've already got enough trouble when these two caused a riot in the park!" Pietro wailed. He remembered the time Lance
and Todd decided to tip over the trash bins in the park for fun. Since then, the police kept a very close eye on them.
"Hey boys!" burst in a voice from their very battered doorway. The door, in turn, just fell down to reveal a teenage blonde.
"Yo Tabitha! You still chewing that gum?" Lance asked noticing the gum she was chewing.
"Of course! I don't plan on losing to YOU!" She answered.
"Oh yeah! bout that gum..." Todd wanted to say something but Tabitha cut him off.
"Yeah? What about it?"
"Oh nothing. Just that it looks totally disgusting!" Todd yelled back.
"Tss...take a look at the mirror why don't you?" She sneered. "Besides you're just jealous. I broke your record."
"Oh yeah?! Well you...you..." Todd tried to find a counterattack when...
"Wonka bars! Mmmmm, my favorite!" Boom Boom squealed.
"EVERYTHING'S your favorite." Todd murmured. But Tabitha just grabbed a bar of chocolate an headed for her room.
*****
In the Alcolyte house, Pyro was happily watching TV with his dinner spread out on the coffee table in front of him. He was
laughing, crying and even singing songs whenever the TV would play it.
Magneto and Gambit just arrived with tons of Wonka bars when John was singing with a song on MTV.
"I CAN'T FEEL, THE WAY I DID BEFORE DON'T TURN YOUR BACK ON ME, I WON'T BE IGNORED!" he "sang". In the kitchen, Magneto
jolted causing a bar to fall on Gambit's head. It seems these two also want to get a hold of the Golden Ticket.
"Tell me again why we're looking for the Golden Tickets? I mean, what can we get from a lifetime supply of chocolate?" Gambit
asked wiping his hair of the chocolate.
"Because, my dear Gambit, along with the chocolate, there is a tour. And in that tour, we are able to see what that Wonka
does that makes his chocolate so GOOD!" Magneto stood up as if he was reciting a poem.
"Sure...so you want to sell chocolate for a living?" Gambit asked again.
"No!" Magneto answered inching closer to Gambit. "With Wonka's secrets on our hands, we can control all those insolent
children who LOVE his chocolate."
"OK...children, gotcha." Gambit said although he still couldn't understand. Magneto saw the puzzled look on his teammate's
face.
"Gambit, have you ever heard the phrase: 'Children are the future of a nation'? Well, as we control them, the nation will
have no future so WE can take over."
Just then
"NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Pyro yelled from inside the den.
"What's wrong John?" Magneto asked as he rushed into the room.
"Th-they k-ki-kidnapped..." John stuttered along with his tears.
"Who? Who, John? C'mon! we can't help you if you dont tell us anything!" Magneto started to panic.
"P-p-pi-pika-PIKACHU!" John wailed and cried even louder.
"Who's Pikachu?" Magneto asked as Pyro ran to the corner of the room.
"Th-that really really cute yellow pokemon!" He whined and dug his face under Magneto's cape.
"Incompetent Fool!" Magneto scowled and hit the crying "baby" in the back of the head. "It's just a cartoon!"
"But...But..." and Pyro cried even louder.
"Aw, there, there. Don't worry John. We'll find those those mean old kidnappers." Gambit entered the room carrying a handful
of bars of chocolate. He moved closer to Pyro and pushed Magneto aside. He then handed John a bar.
"Really?" Pyro asked. He lifted his head from Magneto's cape and took the chocolate and hugged it.
"Really. I promise." Gambit answered and smiled. Magneto, however, sighed at the sight of his teammates.
"Remy, why do you treat him like a baby when he whimpers over the TV?"
"Because he's our friend, Magnus." Gambit answered smiling at John who was now falling asleep. "Besides, he doesn't act like
that all the time."
"Exactly! We should teach him to NEVER act like that." Magneto argued. Just then, they heard a knock on the door. Magneto
opened it to reveal Forge who collapsed in his arms.
"O my G**! Forge are you alright?" Magneto asked and dragged him to the den.
"I just need some food. Do you guys have any Wonka bars?" Forge gathered all his strength to speak.
"Here!" Gambit replied handing him one of the Wonka Bars he had been opening.
"Thanks!" Forge pulled out his best puppy dog eyes to show he was grateful.
"You're-" But before Gambit could finish, Forge dashed out of the house in the blink of an eye.
"Never give Forge ANYTHING!" Magneto yelled and made his way back into the kitchen. Gambit just stood there still trying to
take in everything.
-----end-----
There you go! The first chapter! This is only the beginning. For those who watched the Willy Wonka Movie, i guess you know how'll
be able to go. Any questions and suggestions for the upcoming chapters are welcome. I'd like to learn what you think.