This is my first MorMor fanfiction so please review and tell me how I could improve, these characters are really hard to write. This story has been bouncing round my head for ages but I wasn't sure if I could do these characters justice. The characters are probably OOC however I hope you like it anyway.
Disclaimer: The characters do not belong to me. Theses versions belong to Steven Moffat etc. and the original characters belong to Arthur Conan Doyle.
Sometimes when Sebastian walks into Jim's flat after another kill, 'always Jim's, never ours', Jim is sitting on the cream, leather sofa, "Cream shows up the blood best Sebby", completely lost in his own mind. At these times Sebastian walks past him into the kitchen to make a cup of tea, even though he prefers coffee, "I don't like it when you taste of coffee Sebby", and sits down in the chair opposite, waiting till Jim gets out of his mind and back into the real world.
Other times the second he steps through the door Jim is running at him, Sebastian's t-shirt flying out behind him, and launching himself into Sebastian's arms kissing him happily. This is always followed by a soft "I'm glad you're back baby" and another loving kiss, which almost always leads to more. Almost like a normal couple. Jim is always sweet for a little while after this but he soon gets bored of playing nice, "being normal is BORING Sebby! How do you do it all the time?", and goes back to normal, well what normal is for him.
Other times walking into the flat means walking in on Moriarty, not his boyfriend but his boss, holding a knife or one of Sebastian's guns. Sebastian can deal with Moriarty, he just needs to keep him occupied and away from any dangerous objects until he calms down. Jim tries not to bring Moriarty home but if a job has gone wrong or someone hasn't died properly he can't really stop him. But Sebastian can deal with that, it's part of his job.
The worst times are when he walks into Jim's flat and Jim is sitting on the floor, hugging his knees to his chest and rocking back and forth. This is the one Jim that Sebastian doesn't know how to deal with. Jim won't talk to him, won't even look him. It's not like when he's lost in his mind, it's so much worse. Because he's not lost in his mind but more like stuck in the past. His horrible, horrible past that Sebastian knows next to nothing about, because Jim refuses to talk about it. He hates it when Jim gets like this because there is nothing he can do but sit on the floor next to his boyfriend, place a hand gently on his shoulder and wait. Just wait to get his Jim back.
I really hope you enjoyed this because it took quite a while and the characters are really hard to write. If you have any pointers to writing them better please drop a review or a PM. I love you all. Just remember that you're all perfect and people just don't understand your love for fictional characters! They just haven't found the right fandom for them yet, that's it! Smile :)