So the majority of the dialogue isn't mine nor is the story or it's characters. Rated T because I don't want kids reading such evilness.
As he watched her sleep he could not harm her. Although he wanted to.
When she was close to him he changed, he felt a smile on his lips and a twinkle in his grey eyes, and he reverted into a young man, a happy man, one madly in love and desperate to do anything for her. Willing to obey like a dog and worship like a slave, she had full control and it made him weak.
When she was gone however, a dull metal slab had replaced his smile, and dead eyes the colour of bile looked back at him. He let the darkness creep back in; in the mirror he did not see a happy man, only a monster. One who loathed her to the very core of his ugly soul and wanted only to be free of her. But he knew just as well as she did, he could never be free. She was poison. She made him weak.
He had contemplated her murder, he would be in charge of the galaxy, he would never feel humiliated by her again, he could be unstoppable; the idea made him excited, made him feel strong. He waited for her to enter his quarters that night, naked and alone she would be all too vulnerable. But when he saw her, everything he had crumbled, his plots, his power and he was only a boy lying in the grass with an angel.
As he watched her sleep, he decided he could not harm her up close. He doubted he was strong enough but most importantly he doubted he wanted to. Outside his company she was the brilliant, cold darkness, all who lay eyes on her felt horror and adoration. It made them weak. But in his arms lay a tender, warm woman who did not flinch at the sight of his exposed deformity and instead promised love, power and the stars. It made her weak.
The bed was cold, too cold. He couldn't stop himself from shivering. He couldn't bring himself to invite another into his bed, none of them were angels. Sometimes he would close his eyes and lie to himself that she was there, he just couldn't hear her, feel her or touch her. Sometimes he would open his eyes and she was there, smiling at him, she looked like she did before the war, innocent and beautiful. But she always faded away all too quickly and he was alone once again.
He remembered once they had been equals, it wasn't until the taint came that her easy superiority to him became obvious and their positions seemed to fall into place. They had always been best friends for as long as he could remember and he could recall a time when every corner of their minds were open to each other. They loved and accepted each other completely. Now he sees her in everything he does. He use to feel so safe and warm in her company and he knew with the deepest conviction in his heart that she did too.
He asked himself many times why she chose him, he would not believe it was the force, and often wondered if she looked towards somebody else where would he be. Perhaps he would be one of the Jedi who resisted her Sith rule or did he die in the Mandolarian wars or did he wither away, lonely and lost in a dream because he knew she chose him but he was always destined to love her. Maybe they were never equal.
Was this regret he had been feeling?
Out conquering the galaxy one would not think so nor would he. He felt the closest to alive that a dead soul could feel upon destroying worlds and murdering millions. He was now the master, people looked upon him with dread and reverence, and he was king. But alone, the dark corners of his mind which she once kept safe now hailed his room and haunted it. Everywhere her ghost was smiling lovingly and laughing, comforting. Sometimes he would find her in her trademark mask and armour; filled with rage she could make him, such a large man so small. What was this apparition haunting him, this dark side trick? Or had the darkness finally made him mad? Her words would echo the room even after her ghost was gone, and nightmares of the day she fully accepted the darkness possessed him. The day she felt cold, the day her eyes changed and the day she almost beat him to death.
I find myself storming the halls of the Leviathan. I feel her everywhere, it's suffocating, her fingerprint left by the force on everything, it's intoxicating. I'm beginning to feel sick with rage at the thought of her, what they've done to her and what she's done to herself. She thinks she can change; it's too pathetic. I always knew she was weak.
My skin begins to burn as I enter the elevator, I've dreamed of seeing her for too long, finishing her, breaking her. I must prove to her once and for all that she meant nothing, she was and is nothing; she is simply a pawn between me and the council, she is weak.
Ever since rumors of her return began, the question of keeping her or killing her torments me. She torments me. If I kill her she won't leave me alone, just as the ghosts begin their departure, the simple mention of her name sends them racing back. I thought they were gone forever but now every day I hear "Revan, Revan, Revan." But she is too dangerous to keep. Even so the knowledge that I could go to her whenever I wanted makes me sick and very dizzy. As the elevator doors open, I realize she is minutes away from me; I have waited so long to prove myself, my skin tingles at the idea of her and the electricity buzzes at my fingertips. I use my passion to call upon the dark side for strength and composure; I must prove myself to her.
The doors slide open and as I march forwards three figures rush towards me but all freezing in horror at the sight of me. I stand tall, my chest is proud and I am so ugly. It takes a moment for me to recognize her, my heart rises and feels as if it is on verge of bursting, and she is so lovely. The markings of the dark side have left her, now she glows, her aura is so clear, the light is swirling through her veins and it wouldn't take a fiend like me to see that she is an angel again. She looked like she did before the war, innocent and beautiful. But I am not weak.
"Darth Malak." Batila declares her voice dripping with disgust held by a stern, hard face. A brown haired man attempts to shoot me roaring "Down you go!" impulsively I deflect his shots and with the force flick him to the ground, like a summer ant on the picnic table and I laugh richly. I saw distress wash over Revan at this man's fall, she attempted to hide it as he rose but I am no fool and I memorized every corner of her mind; this is where her affection lies. What could a puny, ant of a man do to deserve an angel?
"I hope you weren't thinking of leaving so soon Bastilla." I sneer allowing a growl in my mechanical tongue to surface "I've spent far too much hunting down you and your companions, to let you get away from me now." My gaze never left Revan. "Besides I had to see for myself if it was true. Even now I can hardly believe my eyes." I felt her presence in the force tremble in terror but her face remained solid with her eyes holding mine, like so many times before, I have watched men brake under that stare, I have been broken. This time I did not waver. "Tell me," I mock "Why did the jedi spare you? Is it vengeance you seek at this reunion?" A frown creased her face and it took her moment to realize I was speaking to her. She looked at me in sincere confusion "Reunion? What are you talking about?"
"What? You mean you don't know?" I laugh wickedly "All this time and you still haven't figured it out?" Could she be so foolish, has my little strategist has fallen so far? "I wonder how long you would have stayed blind to the truth. Surely some of what you once were must have surfaced by now." My confidence grew in my knowledge that she did not remember us; she does not remember all that I gave her in weakness or what lay in the corners of my mind, I have the advantage and she is weak. "Even the combined power of the Jedi council could not keep your true identity buried forever, could it?"
And I watched as it began to unfold in her mind. The realization had begun crashing down on her and she could not hide her fear. I even allowed some of my memories to flow into hers but only the worst and most vile ones. "You cannot hide from what you once were, Revan!" I found it difficult to say her name, as if lifting an object of great weight so it came out with an effective force "Recognize that you were once the Dark Lord and know that I have taken your place." It felt so good to finally issue authority over her.
"No," she stumbled, shaking her head "You're just a liar."
"You do not yet remember Revan? The jedi set a trap; they lured us into battle against a small republic fleet. During the attack a team of jedi knights boarded your ship. The jedi strike time captured you and the council used the force to reprogram your mind. They wiped away your identity and turned you against their own followers."
"No," She said again defiantly "I won't believe you, Malak!"
At my name, my heart stopped, the poison settled in and I felt alive again. It strikes me how she has no idea the power of the weapon she just used, it was always her favourite. "You must have seen flashed of your old life in your dreams, Revan. Memories, bubbling up to the surface. Surely, you must remember the battle in which you were captured?" I waited patiently and observed how her forehead creased amusingly as she sought for an answer. Eventually she bit her lip and asked tentatively "Why wouldn't the Jedi simply kill me?"
"The Jedi are fools." I promptly snapped "They do not believe in executing prisoners. Originally I assumed you died in the battle. Imagine my surprise when I found out you were still alive, Revan," and my revulsion, causing a bitter and syrupy confusion twisting my every action and decision reminding me of my weakness.
"Do you really mean I'm really..." she inhaled deeply before stammering with her eyebrows raised "your master?"
"Once I served you, Revan. But I always knew that one day the title of Dark Lord would be mine. When the Jedi strike time boarded your vessel, I saw my day had come. I ordered my own ships to fire on your bridge; I thought I could destroy all my enemies with a single glorious victory. I never dreamed the Jedi would take you alive from the wreckage."
"But why did you betray…your master?"
"You mean why did I betray you, Revan. You were the one who taught me the ways of the Sith; the strongest must rule if we are to survive. You knew I would one day challenge you for supremacy but you underestimated me. I acted sooner than you expected and seized the Sith throne with a single brilliant stroke! How you survived the final battle is a mystery to me. Perhaps you should ask Bastila; after all she was part of the Jedi strike team that captured you."
"Bastila, tell me this isn't true."
"It's true. I was part of the team sent to capture Revan…To capture you. When Malak fired on the ship you were badly injured we thought you were dead. Your mind was destroyed but I used the force to preserve the flicker of life within your body. I brought you to the Jedi council. They were the ones who healed your damaged mind."
"But my past, my family, my friends, my memories, my home they all are so real."
"The Jedi council didn't restore your wounded mind Revan. They merely programmed it with a new identity – one loyal to the Republic. They needed to make you their slave," my laughter cut over the uncomfortable silence that had now fallen over the three companions, who I imagine had grown fond of each other. Too fond.
To my surprise Revan collected herself and seemed taller than before. "I don't care about the council, while this changes a lot about me, it doesn't change one thing about you. You are still a threat to the safety of this galaxy that must be stopped."
"I was wrong." I said flatly, her surprise was evident "You haven't changed at all." I allowed a memory between us, of the day she decided to join the Mandolorian Wars, the words she chose were too familiar and I could see, like neither one of her companions how it hurt her. Like one mind we whipped out our lightsabers synchronously. Weary of their unwelcome presence, I froze her companions in stasis; I wanted to see what she could do. Two blades of green and blue sparkled at me, funny in my mind she hadn't chosen the exact same colours and blades as before. Nevertheless I was not the same and her green and blue is no match for my red. We circle each other for quite some time; both of us are too cautious, too timid, too weak. It is I who takes the first charge, she sidesteps, and on the same note spinning on her heel to swing at me, I twist fast enough to block it. Our sabers crossed it's now a test of strength rather than one of patience. With my huge form I always surpassed her in raw physical strength and she is forced to bounce backwards as fast as she can to avoid a fatal blow. To my surprise she conjures a crooked blaze of violet from her hands in an attempt to shock or perhaps paralyze me; an uncommon and ineffective choice of weapon for one who walks the light path. You have not changed in any way, my old friend. I whispered into her mind causing her to stumble momentarily, providing me with the opportunity to take a swing at her ribs but she deflects it without thought. I resolve to show her, like she showed me, how much more the darkside can offer. With two hands I summon a great storm of lightning causing her body to convulse and jerk. Her screams rip through the hallway like fire, stirring distress in her companions but I take pleasure in the sweet symphony of her pain. Upon releasing her she pulls herself off the floor and stands to face me. Again our blades dance together, and we enter the famous tug of war, we drive each other backwards and forwards, every piece of ground one of us loses, we quickly regain. I realize with my heart beat drumming and throbbing round my head and the sweat on my cheeks that I may be unable to match her endurance. Our heads snap towards the sound of Bastila's paralysis cage shattering, she snaps her blades open and bounces over to us. Through the force she pulls Revan beside the brown haired man and takes Revan's place to challenge me, she screams "Run!" And before Revan could disobey her the doors slam shut.
We waste no time and we both impatiently dive into battle. Amazed at how weak she was compared to Revan, I had her throat in my hands within minutes. She struggled and squirmed and I laughed at her pitiful attempts at freedom. "Pathetic," I sneer and she spits in my face. "You will soon realize the potential of true and untamed power of the force. You will no longer be weak and you'll soon become so much more."
"You're a fool, Malak, I will never turn. Revan will come back for me and like she promised, we will stop you." I swing my head back in laughter.
"You have no idea whats waiting for you, do you? If you believe you can resist then you are the fool. You will be my dog before the week is done."
I hope you liked it, please review, it's the best thing. But I'm really stuck I don't know where I'm going with this to be honest. I could keep it Malak and keep it all very intense or I could let you see what's going on in Revan's mind etc? Otherwise I'll take forever deciding and the world desperately needs more Revan/Malak, they are the best.