Işkence Gören Ruh – Enaid Ei Arteithio

Author's Note: Hey! I would like some opinions on this fic, if no one likes it I won't post any more of it. I will write it either way as I cannot find a fic that is exactly what I want so I'm writing it myself.

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Tags and Other Info:

Incontinent Thorin, future ABDL, mostly DL (I've found absolutely nothing like this with Thorin as the subject, am I alone in my interest?)

Happy Ending!

Thilbo Bagginshield

Fili/Sigrid OR Fem!Ori

Dwalin/Nori

Kili/Tauriel

Future Legolas/Gimli

Emotional Abuse by Thrain and Thror to Thorin

Balin is Thorin's Father Figure

Journey Rewrite

Modern Hobbits

Took ancestral fighting style (is basically mixed martial arts)

Pipe weed is pot

Hobbits have a greater tolerance for alcohol and weed

Hobbits and Dwarves have the same lifespan:

Hobbits= Adult 33, middle aged 50, old 300, max 400

Dwarves=Adult 80, middle aged 190, old 300, max 400

BAMF!Bilbo

Hobbits were made by Yavanna AND Eru to keep dwarves company

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In this fic Khuzdul is Turkish and Hobbitish is Welsh

All translations will be from google translate

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INTRO/SUMMARY

The Hobbits of the Shire were by far the most advanced of the free races of Middle-Earth, though most thought the Elves with their medicine or the Dwarves with their engineering to be the most advanced, they are wrong.

By the time that Bilbo Baggins was born, the Shire and, in part, Bree had advanced beyond our own medical, technological and scientific knowledge. Hobbits were not greedy people but by a quirk of their nature the advancement was never shared. You see, Hobbits are beings of habit and comfort, so they never changed the outward appearance of their towns, and so few of other races were ever welcomed in to their dwellings that this advancement had become the best kept secret in all of Middle-Earth. Until a Wizard brought 13 Dwarves to tea.

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I hope to get lots of feedback on this, please?

I've already written the first chapter, it can go up anytime.

King Simin