Hello there, in case you are wondering I'm new on this site and this is my first story. I hope someone will read it and review it so I know what to improve. I will probbably have some grammar errors but I will try my best. Thank for reading this and if you like it...give it a like or whatever it's called on this site.Anyway let's start! Character development in the future!
"Ahh my god why am I in so much pain." He said with a deep sharp voice and his vision was blurry so he couldn't see almost anything...just the light and what appears to be thin trees...bamboos probbably. The only thing he remembered was pointing a gun towards his target and than poof, everything went black.
Now you are probbably wondering is this guy even a good guy or just some lunatic running around killing people. Well the title is The Hitman...noo not he bald nutsack called 47...not him. His name is William and this is His story. (NOTE: This was me trying my best to be good ad breaking the fourth wall)
His vision has finally started to clear and he was now sure that he was in the bamboo forest but it looked weird...more colorfoul than it should be, everything looked a bit animated. he felt so hot and the pain was still there but it was bearable now.
Now William from the first person:
I started to walk around trying to find someone or a road leading to civilization.
3 hours passed and I found nothing. It was getting dark and I decided that it would be smarter to move at daylight.
You know in my commamdos training we were tought to only move at night time but the situation was now different. I couldn't navigate myself and I didn't know where I am so ofcourse I don't want to miss a road becouse I wasn't able to see well. So I made a little primitive shelter and I fell asleep under it.
I was waken up in the middle of the night by the noises coming from the forest. Branches were cracking so I assumed that it's probbably an animal or someone finally found me but in case of an emergency I still had around 12 bullets in my gun. I was in a total alert mode and than I realised that the sounds were not just coming from one spot but I was surrounded by it. That moment I knew that I was in trouble so I pulled my gun out and waited for whatever it is in the forrest shadows to face me.
Finally one of the "things" came out of the forrest and my jaw dropped. There was a crock standing on 2 legs with a sword in his hand right in front of me.
Crock: "Look here boys...what do we have here tonight"
After he said that more crocks started to step out of the forrest and they surrounded me and all of them had a weapon in ther hands.
"What do you want " I asked still thinking that this is a dream.
Crock: "Oh your money ofcourse...guys this one is easy" he said to the other crocks.
I was still standing there with a pistol in his hand with suspition that they had no idea that it was a gun.
"Soo, the money ha? Do you know what this is?" I showed them the pistol in my hand more visible now than before. They all had the dumb face expressions while looking at it.
I laughed a little
"You see, I call her lady death...do you want to know why? I call her that beacuse I can aim at you and whipe you away from existance in a second. So practicly your life is in my hands."
They all loked at eachother and they bursted into laughing... all 6 of them.
I was just looking at poor things with a sarcastic smile on my face. They stopped laughing and I said: "You don't bealive me? Okay than I'm gonna make you bealive!"
I fired five shots in circular motion and 5 of the crocks fell on the ground dropping their weapons on the ground. Only thing they had now was a bullet hole in their heads.
There was still one alive...the leader that was not bealiving what he just saw. He was in pain that he lost all his frineds and he was kneeling down. I approached him and I squatted down and whispered in his ear: "I'm gonna let you live, it's not my mercy... I want you to suffer and to deliver a message to all the other idiots that try to mug me and the message is: you can't fuck with me, you can try...but only once."
I got up and I started to walk away from him while he was still on the ground with tears in his eyes. I was going up the hill to see if there is anything. Because those crocks must have come from somewhere. I climbed at the top and finally I found a small city with small houses and what appears to be one huge palace on the top of the mountain. I started to walk down the hill in search for answers that I might get down at that village!
Poof...first chapter done. I will leave this at a cliffhanger here. You can guess who the first villain is going to be.Please review and tell me what to do better it means a lot to me.Bye till next time!