Title: A Haunting on Executioner Street
Genre: horror, supernatural, romance
Rating: T for slight sexual themes and intense violence
Pairing: JohanXJudai (spiritshipping); other very slight OC pairings
Summary: Based on the 2005 movie "The Amityville Horror". Joshua and Andrea Andersen and their three children; Johan, Jehu, and Alice; are moving into an elegant Long Island home. What they don't know is that six gruesome murders were committed there the year before. Boo Yuki murdered his aunt and uncle, his parents, and his four younger cousins by shooting them before shooting himself. No sooner are the Andersens moved into the house than they begin seeing horrible things- the ghosts of Judai and Haou Yuki, the latter of the two is bloody and malicious, and horribly disfigured bodies- and hearing ghostly voices throughout the house. Joshua seems to notice it the most, and it isn't long before he becomes a danger to those around him. When the local priest, called in to bless the house, comes charging out in horror after being swarmed by evil voices and attacked by the wicked and vengeful Haou, he issues a dire warning to the Andersens - 'Leave that Damned house'. But will they be able to escape before the house and its vengeful spirits take control of Joshua - and make him into a deadly menace bent on killing his family? And will Johan be protected by Judai, who wants to save the Andersens from his brother's wicked wrath?
Me: Okay! Before we start, we all want you to know that this first chapter is just a warning to everyone before the story actually beings so that you will all know what is to come!
Lucy: You do not have to read this if you do not want!
NOTES: This first part was written just as an experiment and in giving you all an idea of some of the stuff that is going to happen just in case anyone wants to know what is going to happen and where the story is going to head.
Warning: You do not have to read this if you do not want, because there are some slight spoilers in here, but it doesn't matter if you know them or not because nothing majorly important will be ruined if you read this, so there is no worry that you are going to ruin the story for yourself if you do end up reading this!
TO WHOM IT MAY CONCERN!
Me: Okay, so, we wanted to introduce some of the characters and bit of information about them!
Lucy: This is a horror story, but it will have some humor and romance within it, so there is no worries about it!
Me: A warning, though, it will be much scarier than Mary's Play House. Not too much more, thought, and a bit of a deal gorier, but not as bad as it could be, you know?
Lucy: Without further adieu, here are the lists of characters in this story!
Characters
(Humans)
Joshua Andersen- Andrea's husband and father of Johan, Jehu, and Alice. He is the most paranoid about the spirits, and panics whenever he sees Judai (though it's usually only for a split second) and worries for Johan when he sees the spirits around him. Joshua has countless nightmares involving the spirits and himself. His worst one is when he sees Boo shot Johan in the head. He cares very much for his family, and will do anything for them.
Andrea Andersen- Joshua's wife and mother of Johan, Jehu, and Alice. She believes in the supernatural, and worries about her son and her family. She is made a target by Boo, and she will do anything to save the man she loves. She worries about her children being targeted as well.
Johan Andersen- Jehu's younger brother and Alice's elder brother. He is fifteen years old. He is a target for both Judai and Haou; though while Judai's intentions are not evil, Haou's intentions are more evil, a sort of obsession with Johan. He is made a target for some of the wicked spirits, especially Boo.
Jehu Andersen- Johan and Alice's elder brother. He is eighteen years old. He isn't a major target for vengeful spirits, but is often followed around by the other members of the Yuki family. He also sees Judai hanging around with Johan, and panics when he sees the blood on Judai that Johan can't seem to see.
Alice Andersen- Johan and Jehu's younger sister. She is eight years old. She is a target for Haou's cruel and horrible jokes, and is often sent to her parents' room crying because of a strange bloody boy that she saw in her room.
Giese Hunter- A robber who sneaks into the Andersen house late one night. He is driven into insanity by Judai and the vengeful spirits, and murdered by Haou.
Linda- The babysitter. She is a bitch, and is traumatized by Haou after insulting him and making Johan incredibly upset after she called Judai a cheap, disgusting whore.
Father Cornelius- The priest who is called into the house by Andrea to perform an exorcism on the house when Andrea notices the wicked things going on.
(Ghosts)
Judai Yuki- One of the youngest of the Yuki family. He is a ghost who takes an interest in Johan. Unlike his brother Haou, he sports no apparent injuries, though Jehu is able to see his wounds. No one else seems to be able to, however. He is not evil, and would never do anything to hurt Johan or his family. In fact, he does anything in his power to protect them, though Haou often hurts him and refuses to let him do anything.
Haou Yuki- Judai's brother and the antagonist of the story. He, unlike Judai, sports all of his wounds. This is because he clung to his hatred even in death, where as Judai let it go. He haunts the Andersen family and causes them grief. He also has an obsession with Johan, though it is believed that all he wants is to keep Johan in the house so that Judai can have him around since he likes him so much.
Boo Yuki- Judai and Haou's cousin. He killed his entire family, and then killed himself. It is believed that he went insane, which is why he killed them. His catchphrase is "Catch them and kill them". He goes after Johan since he is precious to Judai, and Boo wants to hurt Judai even in death.
The Yuki Family- A bunch of vengeful spirits that exist in the house. They have grotesque forms, and are often just wandering around or seen in Joshua's nightmares.
Me: Okay! So, now that we know about the characters and their appearances...
Lucy: Let's move on to the Parent's Guide!
Me: This was written more for fun than anything, and will let you know how much sexuality, gore, violence, language, and intense/frightening scenes will be in this story, just so you can tell if this is something that you want or will be able to read!
Lucy: So, here it is!
Me: We were careful not to use any names so that no one knows just who does what, but there might be some spoilers, so we left out a bit of detail in it so no one knows when it will happen or to whom it will!
The "Parent's" Guide
Sexuality
A man and a woman engage in sexual activities, but are interrupted when the man sees a horrifying image looming at the foot of their bed. Their sexual activities end with this.
No other sexual things happen.
A few people kiss one another, but I don't see how that really counts as sexuality, but whatever. Just a bit of hugging, making out, and maybe some mentions of sexual stuff.
Nothing major this time.
Violence/Gore
Plenty of violence and some gore in this. A boy teenage spirit walks around with a bullet hole in his head, a missing eye, a slit throat, and a blood covered body.
Some mentions of blood in the prologue, nothing major.
Some graphic gore coming from the vengeful spirits looming around. Some of them are bloody or are spitting up blood, but it's nothing that's absolutely terrifying, so no worries.
A man has plenty of nightmares where those involved are wounded or are bleeding.
A man walks around with an ax and chops at people, missing them, but this would be viewed as violence since the man is aiming to kill those that he is chasing.
A boy's hand is wounded after he tries to escape the house and the window closes on it. Nothing graphic, and he's fine in the end. He just gets a small cut and a bit of bruising, but otherwise, it's nothing major.
A boy has hands from an unknown spirit wrapped around his throat and mouth to keep him from speaking. Again, this is just counted as violence, not gore.
A man watches as his reflection kills itself by slitting its throat open, and the man is then killed. This is not seen, but implied, and it is unknown as to what became of the body.
A bit more blood than this, but mostly, they are involved in nightmares or on the vengeful spirits.
Language
A few uses of "damn", but that's not really a swear. "Hell" is used, but it's mostly used in reference to the place. Maybe a few uses of other swear words such as "bitch, fuck, shit, etc." but overall, nothing too intense.
I know swearing isn't a major issue, but some people get offended by it, so this is just letting you all know what type of language could possibly be in this story.
Drugs/Alcohol
None. 'Nuff said.
Intense/Frightening Scenes
The only major frightening thing that I can think of for this story could be the bloody figures, the intentions of the ghosts, the nightmares, and maybe some of the scenes where the ghosts are around.
The possessions are a bit creepy, but overall, it's not all that bad.
Slightly freakier than Mary's Play House, but I think it's just because of the intentions, motives, and actions of the spirits and the people who are possessed and nothing more.
Me: Okay, guys!
Lucy: We're sorry if this was boring to anyone, but we just wanted to give you all a warning since this is going to be a fairly creepy story and we didn't want anyone getting caught off guard!
Me: Of course, you didn't have to read this if you didn't want to, so please don't be mad if this ruined anything for you all! We tried not to give out too much information on it!
Lucy: Anyway, we hope to get the prologue up at least after updating a few more of our stories and getting a few more reviews on those that have just been updated!
Me: Please be kind and we will start this soon!
Lucy: We are very worried about starting this one, so please be kind! We were nervous about putting this up as the first chapter, but we felt that we needed a warning page or an Author's Note of some sort before we continued.
Me: Anyway, please enjoy the story when it begins!