Hi I am Dug I had just bought Advanced wars just days ago and I now have a fan fiction. This one is based on the map on the first one. Cool any way I love writing and I would like to know if I am any good at it and if I can improve myself on this story well thanks for reading if you have and please R&R. ENJOY!

Advanced Weapon

Chapter 1-Something Learnt

The Orange Star Army was on their way on answering a distress call from Yellow Comet Army. It was worrying that they had not been attacked on their way and Andy (The head Co) was unsure if it was a trap. Then a sound started to come to the radio. The sound was the voice of Nell. Andy picked up and heard some one yelling down the receiver.

"Yello" said Andy in his usual happy tone

"Hello Andy well lets get to business we are having problems believing that the Yellow Comet Army is still functioning. But you are very close so we want you to go check with a transport copter."

"But I do think the would make it"

"Andy im sorry but we have not bin receiving any messages from them"

"Please let me go with the copter. Max can take over as Sami is back at Orange Star."

"Andy I will have to talk to my spires but I have no problem with it."

"Cool how long will it take to decide?"

"Not long, in 5 minutes we have a meeting I will say something."

"Cool"

Andy put down the receiver and ordered for a transport copter to be prepared. Andy just sat there in APC and waited for the answer of his request. The APC suddenly stopped and he was thrown out of his seat and hit the head of the seat in front of him. Andy got up and press a button at the top of the APC and a window opened up. He popped his head through the window and looked around to see an army in the colour of blue. Andy knew straight away who was controlling the army. Blue Moon Army was attacking Andy's Army. Andy picked up the radio receiver and asked for Ness.

"Ness we are being attacked by the Blue Moon army"

The APC shook. Andy was thrown forward like before but this time with much more power. Andy bumped his head on the forehead and stood up to sit back on his seat.

"Get me a Md Tank I need to get out there and fight!" Andy ordered

"Sir we are unable to" Said a driver

"Why!"

"Sir there is a strange light coming towards us."

"Sir the Blue Moon Forces a moving away."

"What how could this be possible?"

"Sir the light its hit……………..

Suddenly there was a explosion and then there was silence. Everything had been destroyed. Andy tried to get up but felt a sharp pain in his leg and fell to the ground. He held a metal pole and used it as a walking stick. He looked around and all he could see was rubble. Death was everywhere there was nothing alive apart from him. He searched for anyone that was a live. He then heard something a noise of propellers. He looked and it was a fleet of air forces. He tried to get their intention and then had a harder look and he saw the colour of Yellow. But a transport copter landed right next to him. The door opened to see a face he knew. It was Sami. She went running to him with an Aid team with a crash bed. Sami ran to him and gave him a big hug. Andy could not take it anymore he just fell in to her arms. Sami lifted him on to the crash bed and the Aid team surrounded him. Sami yelled something and they push the crash bed into the transport and left the battle site.

Well I hope you enjoyed it I will update it well thanks for reading and please review.