I have kinda given up on my previous story line, but I have started a new one, and I am doing my own version of season 4 and I don't care how the real season 4 goes. I love my version and I hope you guys enjoy it as well.
Max was sleeping when suddenly started to jump on him. Max slowly woke up.
" what are you doing?" Max whined.
"YOU TRAITOR!" shouted. "Since when do you want to be a hero Max! Huh?!"…
Hank slowly woke up as he heard Max and Colloso shouting. Then Max opened the door and threw Colloso onto Barb and Hanks bed as the two woke up.
"HES YOU'RE PRISONER! HES YOU'RE PROBLEM!" Max shouted and then he went to shut the door as he started to leave but heard Colloso say something that made him come back immediately.
"HE'S YOUR MISTAKE SO HES EVERYONES PROBLEM!" Colloso shouted and Max stormed in and used his telechenisis and with the flick of his finger he hit Colloso with a pillow. "OH! IT'S THE PILLOW OF EVIL! OH MAX DON'T DO THAT! HAVE MERCY ON ME!" Colloso shouted in sarcasm. Max shook his head and saw a vase and used his telechenisis and Barb ran over and grabbed it.
"NOT MY VASE!" Barb shouted and she grabbed it and stood between Max and Colloso. "Ok, Colloso can you PLEASE be a decent person for five seconds so you two can just talk this out? I mean, your best friends."
"I KNOW! THAT'S WHAT I HAVE BEEN SAYING TO HIM! BUT HE WON'T LISTEN!" Max yelled and Colloso let out a laugh.
"Your not going to even WANT to be friends when I ask you this next question. Ever wonder where Allison has been lately?" asked. Max looked slightly curious but also extremely worried.
"Yeah, she hasn't answered my texts for three days now. Why?" Max asked.
"Well, I told the Villain League that SHE was the reason why you turned good and the villain league wasn't too happy and they had to punish someone and they couldn't punish you." Colloso said and Max walked over and picked him up by the fur on the back of his neck.
"COLLOSO WHERE IS SHE?!" Max shouted.
"I DON'T KNOW!" Colloso shouted back. "The last time I heard they got rid of her parents, and they were taking her to the villain league. She's probably somewhere there!" Max threw Colloso on the ground. "OW!" Colloso shouted as he got back on his feet.
"What did they do to her parents?!" Max demanded answers and Colloso was shocked.
"Buddy, why do you care about her parents?" Colloso asked. "They're stupid adults."
"They're her parents, and they are the only people she has to love. Now what did they do to them?" Max asked.
"Max, I really don't know. All I know is that the three of them are at the villain league and shes separate from them.I have tried to get more information but the villain league has since then shunned me. Don't worry, I told them not to hurt her. They just want to frustrate you so you will go after them and they can confront you about your betrayal. Max they want answers and if Allison wont give them to them, then they will have to get them from the one person who knows them, you." Colloso let out a sigh. "I just, I screwed things up so badly that I have been trying to get you to hate me because I know that you will never forgive me." Max picked Colloso up and looked at him with strong eyes.
"If Allison or her parents die then I will NEVER forgive you." Max dropped Colloso and walked down the stairs.
"MAX!" Hank shouted after Max. Barb and Hank rushed downstairs and woke everyone up in the process. As they got down there Max came up the basement stairs in his super suit and cape.
"Max you heard Colloso, it's a trap. They just want YOU. I can't let you go after Allison!" Hank yelled and everyone ran down the stairs.
"I'm going and you can either come with me or you can stay here but I'm getting Allison, Debby, and Garry back where they are safe. I KNOW where the villain league is, and I am going after them. So," Max looked to his parents and Phoebe. "Are you coming with me, or are you staying here?" Max asked.
"Max, it's not going to matter who is with you. They are going to want you and only you. We can fight them all we want but their target isn't Allison, it's not Debby or Garry, it's not me, it's not Phoebe or your mother, it's you. They already have one Thunderman against them, and now they have two. They aren't just going to give Allison back to you Max." Hank sighed.
"Fine. Then I'll go alone." Max sighed and then the Thunder monitor rose.
"Warning: Dark Mayhem approaching with other villain league members." The computer said and then there was a deep knock at the door.
"How did they know?" Phoebe asked in confusion. Max walked over to the door and put his mask on and opened the door. Dark Mayhem let out an evil laugh as he stood there.
"Just the person I was looking for. Your pretty little girlfriend and her parents are here in our car, and," Dark Mayhem started.
"Bring them in here, safe and sound, and you can take me." Max said.
"MAX!" Hank and Barb shouted.
"Deal. Well, that was easier than I thought it would be." Dark Mayhem laughed and soon two villains brought Allison in and she was kicking and screaming and then the villain pushed her over to Max and Max caught her. Allison looked to him in frustration.
"Max you have A LOT of explaining to do." Allison said and then seven villains brought in a beat up Garry and Debby and threw them on the ground. "MOM! DAD!" Allison pushed herself out of Max's arms and rushed over to her parents and all the villains got ready to fight Max and Max pulled out a pair of power cuffs and placed them on his wrists.
"Max what are you doing?!" Phoebe yelled.
"Yeah, Max what do you think you're doing?Those freaks don't even have a conscious and your surrendering to them? Max they'll torcher you." Allison asked sadly.
"You're seriously just going to go with us?"Dark Mayhem asked.
"I told you. You leave Allison and her parents alone, and my family, and you can have me. Im not going to be evil for you, but I WILL go with you and you can give me whatever punishment you want." Max said bravely.
"MAX NO!" Hank shouted and Max turned to his dad and pulled his mask off to reveal a sad face.
"Dad, I dug my grave. If I had been responsible and if I would have followed my heart, none of us would be in this mess. It's all my fault and it's time for me to take responsibility for my mistakes. Every action has a consequence and it's time for me to face mine." Max said and then he turned to the villains and Dark Mayhem who were all just standing there.
"I was hoping he would fight." One of the villains said.
"I know, this isn't fun at all." Dark Mayhem added and then he looked back at Max. "But then again, once we get him to the villain league, his consequences will make things fun. So boys take him away." Dark Mayhem said and then suddenly Chloe teleported over to Max and clung to him in a hug and refused to let go.
"DON'T GO MAX!"Chloe cried and Max looked to Dark Mayhem who was about to pull out a weapon to get Chloe off of Max.
"HOLD ON! YOU DON'T HAVE TO FORCE HER OFF OF ME! JUST GIVE ME A SECOND!" Max yelled and Dark Mayhem put the weapon back and Max gently pushed Chloe off of him and kneeled down in front of her and put his cuffed hands on her shoulder. "Chloe, I did something bad and now I have to take my punishment for I, and I can either take all of you down with me, or I can go willingly and save everyone in the room. Now I need you to be a strong hero and go over to Nora and Billy and help comfort them. Can you do that for me?" Max asked and Chloe blinked and tears fell down her cheeks and she nodded sadly and Max felt awful and then Chloe hugged him and then teleported over to Nora and Billy. Max stood up and Barb ran over and stopped him.
"You don't have to do this. We can find some other way, I," Barb started and Max put his hands on her shoulder.
"Mom, I really do, now please, don't make this harder than it already is." Max requested and Barb nodded and stepped back and then Max saw Allison who was devastated.
"Allison, ever since I started dating you my life has been a hundred times better, and it was amazing while it lasted." Max sighed and Allison just looked down to the ground and shook her head as she started to cry silently. Max started to walk out with the villain league and Phoebe felt like she had to say something.
"MAX!" Phoebe shouted and Max turned to her. "Who would have thought that you were the braver twin?" Max couldn't help but let a laugh out and then Dark Mayhem pulled him out of the house.
"YOU DON'T HAVE TO PULL ME! IM COMING!" Max shouted and then a villain slammed the door behind him. The Thundermans all stood there silently and then the sound of Max crying in agonizing pain came to their ears and Hank ran outside and found that they were gone.
"NO! MAX!" Hank shouted and everyone ran to the door to find that all of the villains were gone….and so was Max. Then they all noticed that there was a decently sized pool of blood on the ground where Max's cape laid as it stained the fabric. Hank kneeled down and picked up the cape and sat there for a second.
"He's gonna die, isn't he? They're gonna kill him." Allison asked as she tried so hard not to lose her mind. Hank turned to her and everyone else and Hank didn't know what to say. ….
Everyone was sitting in the hospital as the doctors tended to Allison's parents and then Super President Kickbutt walked in.
"Thundermans, I have news." Kickbutt sighed and everyone stood up. "We have been trying to track down Max for about an hour now and we have found a trail of his blood. Sadly the location where the trail stops has no sign of him, but, we did find something, do any of you recognize this?" Kickbutt asked and she held up a necklace and Allison let out a cry and walked over to Kickbutt and went to grab it and Kickbutt pulled it back and Allison basically throat punched her and grabbed the necklace and held it. Kickbutt gathered her whits and then looked to Allison.
"Wow, you definitely prove that looks can be very deceiving." Kickbutt coughed.
"I gave Max this as a gift about a month ago. It was our 8 month anniversary and I got it for him. I told him if he were ever in serious trouble, to leave it as a clue to where he was being taken next. Where was this necklace at?" Allison asked.
"There was a checker pattern and it was black and red and there were four checkers on the ground to be specific. Why?" Kickbutt thought for a moment and then knew.
"They took him to the Redfore Auditorium. It's a place near the school that we go to watch basketball games. They must be leaving him there for the whole school to see tomorrow evening during the pep rally." Allison said.
"Well, we will check, but I doubt he was conscious enough to even leave a clue. Due to the amount of blood loss, he was more than likely completely out of it." Kickbutt added and Allison pinned her to the wall.
"GO AND CHECK NOW!" Allison shouted and Kickbutt looked slightly afraid.
"Alright, alright. For a human you really have serious anger issues. I can see why Max likes you so much." Kickbutt then left…
Everyone was waiting in the hospital when suddenly five doctors rushed past everyone. You could hear them talking about a serious case and then several other doctors came in through the doors rolling a gurney with someone on it. The person had around fifty bandages at random spots. There was a lot of blood and you could barely see who it was. Then they saw Kickbutt with her uniform covered in blood and she looked very shaken up. The doctors took the gurney away so fast that no one could see who it was. Kickbutt walked over to them and looked freaked out. Everyone gathered around her.
"I don't know who did it. I just, I don't know." Kickbutt stuttered.
"WHAT DON'T YOU KNOW?!" Allison shouted.
"When I got there, all of the villains had been massacred and Max was the least injured out of all of them. The rest were dead. But Dark Mayhem was gone. That was for sure. Im assuming he got away because he was angrier than anyone at Max. The person who did this was nowhere to be found." Kickbutt sighed.
"Wait was that MAX?!" Phoebe cried.
"Yes. I don't know if they can save him but they are going to try, and," Kickbutt started and then two members of the hero league came in carrying a teenage girl who was about the same age as Phoebe and Max. She was kicking and trying to get out of their grasp and she had blood all over her as well.
"We found who did it Super President Kickbutt. What prison are we sending this insane freak?" One of the officers said and the girl reacted and spit in his face.
"IM NOT INSANE!" The girl shouted.
"Only insane people say that." The other officer said and the girl stomped on his foot.
"Wait, wait wait. This girl took down twelve villains, and it doesn't seem strange that she allowed you two to catch her so easily? Young lady, who are you?" Kickbutt asked unsurely.
"Im Alexandra Maximian." The girl replied and Kickbutt raised her eyebrows.
"Let me guess, it was either the villains lives or yours, correct?" Kickbutt asked.
"No, it was either the villains lives or Maximus's. I spoke with Maximus often on the villain chatline. I knew Maximus before anyone knew him. He consulted with me on what to do with this whole situation with him deciding to be a hero or a villain. I told him to follow his heart, but to make sure he knew the difference between what his heart was telling him and what his mind was telling him." Alexandra answered and Kickbutt nodded in approval.
"Let her go. She's done nothing wrong here." Kickbutt sighed. The police officers let her go and the girl looked calm.
"But seriously, are there any showers here? This blood is getting really uncomfortable." Alexandra added and Kickbutt waved for a doctor to go over to her and then the doctor led her away to a shower. Kickbutt turned to the Thundermans and noticed that Allison looked angry.
"Wait a minute, MY boyfriend was talking to another girl online and I didn't know about it? Oh he is in SO much trouble. If he doesn't die, im gonna have to kill him." Allison said as she crossed her arms.
"Allison, allow me to explain how this whole situation works. Heroes marry heroes and villians marry villians, and there are no in betweens because then things get complicated. That girl is a hero and Max is a hero, and you are a human. Humans and heroes can't really have a pure relationship because humans can't have children with heroes, it's so dangerous that it is almost deadly. So I'm sorry but it's probably better that those two get together than you and Max." Kickbutt explained.
"I don't think that YOU know how this situation works." Allison snapped and Kickbutt looked intimidated at the level of frustration and anger in Allisons voice. "I love him! I'm not just going to back out now! After all the hard work he put me through, I'm not just going to back down. It's not happening. I don't care how complicated or dangerous it gets. Max Thunderman is my boyfriend and I'm not just going to give up on him! I didn't before I knew he was a hero, and I won't do it now." Allison refused to submit to Kickbutts request and Kickbutt turned to Hank.
"Good look with this one. Tell her what she's risking." Kickbutt sighed and then she walked away. …
Everyone had been waiting for what felt like hours and then suddenly Alexandra walked in with a fresh pair of clothes on. She wore a black tank top and leather jeans with studded black boots. Her belt was full of studs and she wore very simple makeup but it was kinda dark.
"Any word on Maximus?" Alexandra asked and everyone looked at her like she was crazy.
"No one calls him Maximus." Hank said.
"Well that's clearly not true because the last time I checked, I just did. But seriously, any word on him?" Alexandra reiterated.
"No, there isn't." Barb answered.
"I've been gone for like two hours, how is there no word on him?" Alexandra didn't understand and then a doctor walked out slowly and everyone saw him.
"Thundermans?" The doctor asked and everyone stood up. "I think you should know that Max pulled through surgery. Luckily he was rescued before they could do any fatal damage. He's actually awake. We were shocked with how quick he woke up. You can go and see him, but he actually is asking for someone named Al." The doctor said and Allison and Alexandra both stood up and spoke.
"That's me." Allison turned to Alexandra. "He was clearly trying to say Allison."
"Yeah but he's always called me Al. We've known each other for five years, and there hasn't been a single day when he didn't call me that and given the fact that I just saved his life I think you should be grateful and allow me to go talk with him before you go." Alexandra snapped and Allison crossed her arms.
"I think we should both go. One, so he can explain who the heck you are, and two, he should explain why he hasn't told me about you." Allison snapped back.
"Fine, but Maximus doesn't need you stressing him out right now. He nearly died today so don't become the stereotypical psycho overprotective girlfriend. Ok?" Al added.
"Fine." Allison replied and the two of them walked down the hallway and found Max's room and both of them went for the door and when they started to open it they started pushing into each other to get in there first but ended up getting stuck.
"Ok, we can't both fit through this door, so one of us is going to have to let the other go first." Al sighed and Allison nodded and then they both tried to walk forward.
"GET OUT!" Allison shouted.
"NO YOU GET OUT!" Al shouted back and they kept trying to push and suddenly they both fell inside and the two stumbled over each other to get into the room and the two of them saw Max and saw how hurt he was and looked sad and slightly fearful.
"Hey Maximus. How yah doin?" Al asked as she walked over to his bedside and Max couldn't help but smile.
"I thought that was you." Max said tiredly.
"Hey JERK." Allison snapped and Max looked to her sadly. "You didn't even really say goodbye. Seriously what was up with the, 'It's been good while it lasted' bull crap? You never told anyone you had other people in the villain league who were allies to you still! That would have been nice to know. It would have been even nicer to know that this ally happened to be female and also happens to be YOUR AGE! Super President Kickbutt thinks your little girly friend should replace me because humans and heroes shouldn't get married and I have a feeling that the rest of your family is going to agree with them. I just, I," Allison couldn't shout at him anymore so she just started crying as she didn't really know what to do. "I love you so much dang it, and you just went off and nearly got yourself killed and then I find out that you have a secret friend. Why would you keep that from me?" Allison cried as you could hear the heartbreak in her voice.
"first of all, I didn't tell you because I knew you would react this way, but secondly and more importantly, Al, she's just a friend, and it would be crazy weird for us to go out because we've known each other for so long." Max explained and Allison just crossed her arms and looked at the ground and then she lightly punched Max in the foot.
"Don't you ever do that to me ever again Max Thunderman." Allison cried.
"Talk about an emotional wreck. Maximus the crying is making me uncomfortable, if you need anything Super President Kickbutt will probably know where to find me." Al said and the she walked over to the door and Max had to say something.
"Al!" Max yelled and Al turned to him. "I owe you one."
"Yeah, you do." Al laughed and then she walked out and Max just smiled and shook his head. That's when the rest of his family walked in. Nora and Chloe walked in, saw him and then they both almost trampled over each other to get back out.
"Oh, Phoebe, could you go talk to them?" Barb asked as she couldn't really think at the moment and after few seconds of no answer everyone looked to Phoebe. Phoebe just stared at Max with her mouth slightly open.
"Phoebe?" Hank said and Phoebe still didn't make even one movement.
"Pheebs?" Max sighed sadly and Phoebe suddenly fell back to reality as tears filled her eyes and she tried to say something but couldn't do it without crying and so she left the room. Max looked to Allison.
"do I look that bad?" Max asked and Allison nodded. Then Max looked to Billy and saw how upset he was and then Billy went off on him. He ran over to Max and started hitting him on the leg.
"YOU JERK! YOU JUST LEFT US! AND NOW YOU COME BACK ALL BEATEN AND TORN UP AND BROKEN AND HURT AND IT'S NOT FAIR!" Billy shouted and Hank tried pulling him back. But then Billy used his super speed and was out of the room.
"I guess this is all a little bit much for the kids Max. We should probably come back tomorrow. We'll talk with them and figure things out." Barb sighed.
"But mom, I want to spend time with you guys now. I kinda just escaped death." Max said sadly.
"Shes right Max, it's a little bit too much to deal with, even for your mother and I." Hank sighed and the two of them left and it was just Max and Allison.
"Well, theyre kinda my ride home, so I gotta go too." Allison said and then she kissed him on the forehead and then rushed off. Max sat there for a second and then looked extremely sad.
"I mean, it's not like I missed you guys more than life itself or anything." Max sighed as his voice shook and then a doctor walked in.
"Hi Max, how are you feeling?" The doctor asked.
"I want a mirror." Max replied.
"Max, I don't think you should see yourself just yet." The doctor didn't want him to get overwhelmed.
"Get me a mirror. I need to see why everyone is freaking out so much. I know I'll regret it, but I need to see myself." Max snapped and the doctor walked out and a couple seconds later he brought back a mirror and had it against his chest as he didn't let Max see himself yet.
"Keep in mind that it looks much worse than it is and you should heal up without very many scars." The doctor said and then he slowly showed Max the mirror and Max saw himself and couldn't believe how bad he looked. He was so emotionally overwhelmed that he started to cry. Then Allison walked back in.
"Good news. Your mom is going to come and pick me up later on after visiting hours are over and," Allison looked up and saw what was going on and she saw Max and couldn't believe that he was crying. This stunned her completely. She didn't know what to think.
"How could you let my family and friends come in to see me like THIS!?" Max snapped at the doctor and the doctor just walked out and didn't give an answer. Max looked to Allison. "I'm sorry you have to see me like this." Max cried and Allison rushed over to his bedside and gently pushed him to one side and got up on the bed with him and put her arm around him and leaned her head against his shoulder.
"Max, your going to be ok." Allison sighed and the two of them laid there together for a while…