I dont own the characters tho I wish I could own torchwood :) I just wrote freely comment freely nothin to harsh it was my first story if u want me to right summit else just say I give it a try :)
Jack and Gwen walked up to the door step,the leaves danced round in circles wind blew through them ,making Gwen's black hair whip her cold face,they walked up the well worn concrete path as they reach the door, Gwen pulled her hand out of her pocket ,She pressed the button the ring of the doorbell filled the air she quickly put her hand back in the warm heated pocket they waited to see who would greet them ,an old worn man opened the door with and smiled which behind was hiding pain, they walk into the warm and old scented house .On the walls hung photos of the past some new some old only one stood out to Jack, He nuged Gwen,He looked at her pointed at the painting and then turned to face the well aged man staring at his company.
"Hello my names Jack this is my college"
"Gwen"
" We was just wondering who this young lady stood by you in this photo is."
The old man spoke with a ruff edged voice"That was my Sister Melody before she died in fact I think this was the year before, what fun times we had "
Gwen spoke next "Yes do you know what happed to her"
"No but she was found by a lake in which she was dressed in a white dress that had blood stains on it but no evidence of a fight against the killer,Pretty lucky I would say if I would of got my hands on the person who did that"The old man made a face that showed his hidden pain.
thanks review if you want me to continue consider this a tester