"See ya bulky!" said Miko as she jumped out of a dark green vehicle, who happened to be a robot in disguise. She ran up the steps of Jasper High. Once inside the smile that she started with melted off and she sighed another day in hell.
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Head up, shoulders squared, look every one in the eye. That was on replay in my head. I wish i could be anywhere but here. From a girl that loved the ocean, my parents moved to a desert. Come on! I was born their, raised their, I even sill had the sand burn from a fall off my board. From Florida to Jasper, Nevada the land of a dry sand no lakes to hang out by no nothing. I started in the way of my first period, Math. Mr. Burns wonder if he's nice I thought absent mindedly. Finally I tought I would never get here. I look down at myself, my jeans hiding my prostatic leg. Oh ya lost it in...an acident and let leave it like that. The only sign of it is a slight limp you have to squint to see it. Before I walk in I hear voices. "Your a dumbass, why they even let you in the country I dont even know. Your probably an illegal alien. Bitch" I stride in to see a girl with red hair standing over a Japanese looking girl. I walk over. "Excuse me why dont ya leave her alone and show yer self to ya seat? Kay? Good." I say in a darker tone. To some people I am intimidating and apparently I am to her because she shuffled off. Looking at the asian girl I put out my hand to help her up. "Hello there my namesa Annabeth." I say. "names Miko I uh... thanks?" she stuttered. " Yer welcome. Hey ya mind showin me ya schedule to see if we have any classes together?" I replied. She laughed and she and I sat next together talking while waiting for class to start.
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"Bulky! You will never guess what happened today! I met a girl named Annabeth and she's from Florida oh and she surfs-" The Autobot chuckled softly as his charge recounted her day.
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