Confused
Hi! This is my first Matched fanfiction. Please review. Flames accepted but constructive criticism is better. Thank you in advance to those who review.
Disclaimer Time! I don't own the Matched series (well besides my own copy) please don't sue me.
Prologue
"Sammy!" my twin brother Dylan cried out. I was being taken away from my family. I was resisting but the official was putting up a good fight, but not enough to stop a Markham kid. My mother was crying and resisting an official's grab screaming, "Samantha!" "Let her go!" Dylan cried out. My dad runs up and gives me a piece of paper. It's the Dylan Thomas poem. "Read this if you forget who you are," my dad says. Two officials come up and grab my father. I put the Dylan Thomas poem in my pocket preserving memories. The official taking me stops. Then something hits me so hard that it sends me down on the ground. All I hear is a scream before my world becomes completely black.
Chapter One
I wake up in an unfamiliar room. Two people walk in and one of them and say," Thank goodness Anastasia you're awake. I thought you were going to be in that coma for weeks. Good thing it was only one." "I look around and I don't see a person named Anastasia anywhere. I reply, "Who are you talking to?" They laugh and say," You silly!" I reply," My name isn't Anastasia, it's Samantha and I don't know you." One of them laugh and say," Yeah and I'm not your best friend Marlina," she points to the boy right next to her and says, "And he's not your friend Alex either." I instantly thought of my family. I sit up and say," Where's my mom, my dad, my brother?" Marlina says," Your mom and dad are in the other room." "What about my brother?" "You don't have a brother, you have twin sisters! In fact, your mom was on her way to the hospital to have your sisters, until the accident happened. Your parents and your sisters were fine, but you were hurt the most. Doctors said that you would die but we knew it wouldn't happen." Alex says. I wanted to see my "parents", I don't know why; I just had this sudden urge. A nurse took me to a room and I saw a woman in there with blue eyes that shimmered like sapphires and black hair that looked like the night sky. She carried two babies. She turned to me and cried," Anastasia! You're awake; the doctors thought you were going to die. You father and I were worried. Here are your new siblings; I want you to name them." I think of my real family and say, "Cassia and Samantha". The lady says, "Those are cute names! Anastasia, meet your new siblings, Cassia Nicole and Samantha Paige Michaels." I ask to go into my hospital room and I go there. I lay in my bed thinking about my real friends, my real school…my real family.
A/N Should I write in Dylan's POV? Or should I go ahead with Samantha's/Anastasia's POV. This chapter turned out really good actually I'm surprised! Check out my two stories, The War between Camps and A Quarter-Blood surprise, as well.
~ButterLover2345