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I walked out of my truck. It was raining and cold, just like his arms use to be. STOP THINKING THAT. I walked toward the crocked door. I couldn't tell what was getting me wetter, the rain or the sweat that was surfacing faster ever second. It was six months since he left. Six miserable black months of not telling anyone what was eating me up. Six months of keeping a secret for a monster. A monster that should rot in hell for all I care. I had been getting over him quite well. I had a system, if I think of the name Edward longingly or in a wishing- he- was- here way, then I would make a picture of him and burn it. Then if I still feel sad, I eat a gallon of ice cream then listen to some break up songs. I was almost one hundred percent over him, almost.
Air escaped me and was trying to play keep away the oxygen. I pulled open the creaking door to look down the hallway. Did the hallway always look so dreadful? Did it always look like a hallway that you would see right before an axe murder came out from behind a corner to kill you? The light was burned out making it so much more disastrous. The hair on the back of my neck was standing up. What if Edward is hiding in these shadows watching me? Would he kill me once I told the secret that he kept so sacred? I couldn't gulp like I wanted to because air was still playing the deadly game. I felt like a rabbit was taking over me, making me jump and want to run away at every slight noise. Even the sound of my own footsteps would set me off. I walked into the kitchen to see Charlie eating left over pizza. I was tempted to sit down and eat, but I knew I needed to tell someone before I cracked. At this rate tomorrow I was going to start screaming, 'Edward was a vampire,' in my English class. I knew that I would go to an asylum for that. I tried to calm myself down just a bit, but nothing I did calmed the rabbits and butterflies which were finding pleasure in taking over me.
"D-dad, I-I have-ve something I-I need to-to tell you." I sputtered out. With these words the happiness that was on Charlie's face was wiped clean off and worry was cemented on. He dropped his pizza and dragged me to the kitchen table.
"Dad, this will sound crazy, but it is the truth and I have hidden this for way too long from everyone… Edward and his family are vampires." I spit out. I heard an ear splitting growl and I was positive I saw Edward standing in the living room. His face was murderous. His flawless features made the hairs stand on the back. Six months of missing him and our first moment together has me screwing thing up. I didn't even think about my actions. I jumped on my father to protect him. It then hit me, Alice… she would have saw me doing this and told Edward. I stared at my father underneath me and realized just how much trouble I had put him in.
"Edward, please don't hurt my father… he is innocent, take me. I told." I rambled. My dad then started wiggling out from underneath me. Edward slipped out of the room before Charlie even got out from under me. I let him get out and curled up in the fetal position and muttered.
"Why did I tell? Edward… don't hurt him. Hurt me, hurt me. Please." I kept on rambling as Charlie started in confusion and called someone. "Don't hurt him." I could still see his ghost in my head. Just how furious he was, his lips stretched in think lines like someone drew them with a pencil. How his hands were balled up so hard that his veins were jumping out. I didn't look at Charlie. How could I tell him? I am so going in a loony house for this.