This is my first fanfic ever so please review and tell me what you think! I'm open to any suggestions and ideas. Thanks!
The family drifted slowly into the living room, the children still begging their father to let them sing in the festival. He shook his head again, smiling.
"Children!" Maria called as she removed her guitar from its case. "Who shall we here from next?"
The children quickly gathered around her whispering excitedly. The Captain poured himself a glass of wine, an amused look spreading across his face. As he turned back around to face them he heard an enthusiastic cry emerge from the circle that the children had formed around Maria. Maria gave the children a doubtful look but they nodded their heads vigorously, so, still seeming a little unsure Maria wove her way through them to the Captain.
"The vote is unanimous". She said, her face lit with excitement. "You, Captain."
"Me?" He replied confused. "I don't understand".
"Please?" she asked timidly as she held out the guitar.
Suddenly, he realized what she was getting at.
"No, no, no, no, no…" he said as he shuffled around her and started to walk towards the couch, setting his wine glass down on a nearby table.
"I'm told that a long time ago you were quite good." Maria said trying to encourage him.
"That was a very, very long time ago." He replied defensively.
"I remember father." Liesl interrupted.
"Please father!" The children begged. "Play us something we know!"
He stared down at seven expectant faces. Then as he turned to look at Maria he realized he wasn't going to win. So he took the guitar from her hands while the children happily gathered on the floor. Max and Elsa who had been watching the scene quietly sat down on the couch that was opposite of Georg. Maria, instead of sitting with the children, moved over to stand by the wall. Everyone was smiling, ready to enjoy such a rare treat.
The Captain grinned at the ten happy people before him, and as he sat down he began to play. It was just a few chords at first, but soon he added his soft voice to the lovely flow of music. The words seemed to ease his mind and they made his children's faces glow with joy.
Edelweiss…
Edelweiss…
Every morning you greet me…
He turned his head to gaze at Maria. She was staring back at him and as their eyes met she smiled.
Small and white…
Clean and bright…
You look happy to meet me…
As he looked into her eyes, his emotions overwhelmed him. How beautiful she was standing there in a pretty blue dress, leaning her head against the wall, completely lost in the music.
Blossom of snow may you bloom and grow…
Bloom and grow forever…
Maria's feelings were similar to the Captain's. As she stood there, her entire mind was focused on the enchanting voice coming from the Captain's handsome face. The world around her seemed to disappear as the sweet music enclosed her in a dream. Never had she felt this way before.
Edelweiss…
Edelweiss…
Bless my homeland forever…
Meanwhile, the Baroness, who had been intently watching Georg, noticed the way he and Maria were gazing at each other. Jealously filled her at once, but she bowed her head down, staring at her lap, as she tried to push away the sinking feeling she had in her heart.
With difficulty, the Captain tore his gaze from Maria and nodded to Liesl. She shifted herself into a good position and started to sing along with him.
Edelweiss…
Edelweiss…
Every morning you greet me…
He smiled at her and looked down at all his children, who were completely captivated by him. At that moment, he understood how much they needed him and love filled his heart. He knew from now on he would always be there for them, no matter what.
Small and white…
Clean and bright…
You look happy to meet me…
Blossom of snow may you bloom and grow…
Bloom and grow forever…
Edelweiss…
Edelweiss…
Bless my homeland forever…
The song came to an end and again, the Captain's eyes rested on Maria. As the last note faded away everyone in the room was silent with awe. Maria was so touched by the music that all she could do was stand there with her mouth hanging open. The Captain, who was not sure what to make of her expression, just shrugged. As he did so, Maria's face broke into a wide smile.
"Anytime you say the word Georg, you can be part of my new act." Max said breaking the comfortable silence.
Georg laughed softly and turned his glance away from Maria.
"I have a wonderful idea Georg." The Baroness cried excitedly as she got up from the couch and walked over to his side. "Let's really fill this house with music. You must give a grand and glorious party for me while I'm here."
The room erupted with noise at the idea.
"A party?" Georg asked.
"Yes, I think it's high time I met all your friends here in Salzburg, and they met me."
"I see what you mean…" Georg replied thinking.
"Oh please!" exclaimed the children.
He paused for a moment, knowing they were all waiting for the final answer.
"Alright…we'll start planning it in the morning!"
The children jumped up cheering and ran to hug their father.
"Can we help you plan it?" Friedrich asked.
"Of course you can!" Replied the Captain.
Maria moved forward. "I know how excited you all are, but it's really time for you to go to bed. You're going to need a good night's sleep if you want to help your father start planning the party tomorrow."
No one needed to be told twice. They finished saying goodnight and followed Maria upstairs. The Baroness and Max retreated to their bedrooms as well, but Georg stayed sitting on the couch staring down at the guitar, deep in thought.
Well that's the first chapter! I hope you enjoyed it! This chapter followed the "Edelweiss" scene very closely but I have some ideas for the next couple chapters to make it somewhat different than the movie. Anyways thanks again for reading and please review!!!!