**Hi I go by Lila. And i've been working on my first novel for quite a few years now. But decided that maybe i should see if people think I'm even any good. So here is my first fanfiction please be brudle.

This one is my twist on Rupenzel. It is rated M because later on its gonna get very spicy ;) It starts out with Rupenzel orginal name Ally and alil of the backround this chapter is short and left off at a cruicial point. But i will write more soon i promise

please enjoy and tell me what you think! ***

A long time ago in a place far far away a woman sat and wished for a child to make her life complete. She had thought that learning magic would of done that for her but after years she found that she still yearned for a family.
Then one day she censored a huge cloud of fear somewhere in the woods. She walked over to her mirror and waved her hand in front of it. Soon amongst the mists of the mirror appeared a little girl with locks as black as cinders flowing down her back. The girl was crying as she wandered lost in the woods. She sent her pet wolf named Alec, to lead the little girl to her.

Ally sat down on a downed tree. She couldn't take another step. If only her new sisters had liked her and didn't find her to a bother. She'd be home in her bed with her mother reading her a story.
But no they were so mean and hated sharing Ally's mother and their father. That they decided to play hide and seek with her deep in the woods then go home. They knew Ally was to little to find her own way home to the cottage the sisters had grown up in.
She was only five years old she couldn't even find her way to the village square from her mother's sisters were gonna pay when she got home. They'd get a switched so bad they wouldn't be able to sit for weeks. She smirked through her tears at least she had that to look forward to. She started to doze off against the tree, but then she felt something rub against her arm. She jumped away when she saw a wolf as dark as her hair with bright green eyes looking at her. She started to slow crawl away from it when she noticed it just studying her.
"hhhh...hi," she stammered.
It moved toward her and looked as though it was smiling. She closed her eyes hoping it wasn't going to eat her. Then felt it rubbing against her again. She opened her eyes and started to pet the wolf's head. After a minute or two it grabbed the edge of her dress and started to pull on her.
"Are you wanting me to follow you?" the wolf knodded, "Alright."
Ally followed the wolf through the woods for what felt like hours.

The woman watched in her mirror as Alec led the little girl to the woman's cottage in the middle of the woods. She couldn't wait to meet the little girl. She looked so adorable but she would need a potion to keep the girl there. She opened her enormous spell book until she found the one for memory erasing.

2 tongues of a toad

4 eyes of salamander

1 leg of a fly

5 drops of baby tears

and a vile of dragon's blood

She mixed it all up and set it on simmer just as Alec returned.

Ally walked inside after the wolf. The cottage was bigger than any she had seen before but the outside had looked so had a main hall and everything, as if a king lived here. What if this was a King's home she wondered. But why would he wanted it charmed to look tiny?
Then it all clicked. This was the house of a... WITCH!