I'm fairly new to the dragon drive manga series

I'm fairly new to the dragon drive manga series. I would just like to say that I would appreciate the reader to give me a good review and to show what needs to be edited in this story. –Newbie202 (author and editor).

One day in Rikyu, Reiji Ozora and his friends Maiko Yukino,

Daisuke Hagiwara, Rokkaku, and their dragons Chibi (A.K.A the Senkoukura.), Gorao, Kanpa, and Thunderbolt were enjoying the mid day sun at the beach. Reiji and Chibi were swimming together in the ocean, while Daisuke, Kanpa, Rokkaku, and Thunderbolt were having a mock fight against each other. Maiko and Gorao rested in the shade of some palm trees.

"Hey Chibi Your going to drown if you swim like that." Reiji said to his dragon who apparently was having a very hard time swimming. The little white dragon made some distressed noises as he splashed and struggled to stay afloat. Reiji started to look concerned for his little companion.

"Umm… Maybe we should move inland a little more?" Reiji said as he grabbed Chibi and moved to the shallower part of the ocean.

Maiko watched as her childhood friend Reiji struggled to teach Chibi how to swim, and giggled silently to herself as Chibi accidentally knocked Reiji over.

Chibi jumped onto Reiji and started to lick him when Reiji fell into the water, much to the complaints of his companion.

"Hey…Chibi…Cut that …Out…Please!" Reiji complained as his dragon partner continued to lick him.

A draconic snore emerged from Gorao's muzzle, slightly startling Maiko. The protector dragon opened one eye and looked at his female human companion with concern.

"Don't worry Gorao. There is absolutely nothing here that can harm me." Maiko told her now relaxed companion.

Reiji and Chibi were now soaked with salt water and shivering. They both lay down in the warm sun. Reiji looked up towards the clear blue sky. The wind was slowly picking up, and storm clouds started to form in the sky. Suddenly a bolt of lightning flashed in the sky and struck the area was Maiko and Gorao were.

"Roar, Gorao!" Maiko ordered her dragon. Gorao let out a mighty roar, and a shield of energy formed around the pair protecting them from the lightning bolt.

A dark ominous voice came from the clouds and said.

We can't be having that shall we!

"Huh? Who said that?" Daisuke asked. His battle between Rokkaku was rudely interrupted when a bolt of lightning crashed right in between their battle field.

"Whatever said that can't be good!" Rokkaku answered back, his dragon Thunderbolt was growling at the clouds.

Suddenly a huge ball of dark energy came flying at them out of nowhere.

"ROAR, GORAO!" Maiko screamed. Her dragon Gorao let out an even mightier roar then before, and a huge shield of energy formed and surrounded everyone. The ball of dark energy hit the shield, energy crackled as the shield repelled the attack. The ball of dark energy exploded and sent everyone flying. Luckily they didn't go far.

"Chibi, TRANSFORM!" Reiji ordered his dragon. The skin around Chibi's forehead began to move apart, (like an eye lid opening) to reveal a jewel in the middle of the tiny dragons forehead. Chibi was surrounded by a heavenly glow, and he began to transform. When the light cleared Chibi was in his attack form. Reiji was in his usual spot, on the dragons head.

An evil laugh came from the clouds and a black dragon slowly faded into view. The black dragon slowly opened his jaws and a ball of dark energy formed. The dark energy ball was shot towards Chibi.

"Chibi, Catch it!" Reiji ordered. His dragon companion reached out with both arms and caught the energy ball, and Chibi hurled it at the black dragon. The evil dragon shot another energy ball from his mouth and it hit the oncoming attack. Then with amazing speed the black dragon flew behind Chibi and Reiji and with a swift movement from his tail, wrapped it around Chibi's body. The black dragon then grabbed Chibi with all four of its limbs and started to fly upwards, carrying Chibi and Reiji with him.

"Hey…Huh…What the hell is gong on?" Reiji panicked as they continued to fly further and further upwards. Then they were flipped upside down, and with specific movements of his body the black dragon started to hurtle down towards the ground carrying Reiji and Chibi with him. Reiji fell off of Chibi's head and started to float away. He would have been as good as dead if his partner Chibi hadn't grabbed him with one of his hind legs. The black dragon slammed Chibi's head onto the ground hard. The Senkoukura changed back to his small white dragon form, He was slumped down unconscious.

The black dragon then flew upwards. He hovered over Reiji and his friends for a bit, and then the dark ominous voice was heard in the wind again.

Hmmm… you seem stranger then I thought…

"Hey… there is that voice again!" Reiji said to his friends.

"So I wasn't the only one who heard it!" Daisuke replied.

"So where is it coming from?" Maiko asked.

"Yeah, that is strange, and I have seen and heard stranger." Rokkaku said.

Look above your pathetic human heads!

"HUH?" they all replied as they looked up in the sky.

"Telepathy?" Rokkaku said.

"Weird!" Reiji said.

Yes! I am telepathic human. The black dragon replied.

"Why are you attacking us?" Maiko asked the black dragon.

Practice! The black dragon answered.

"Practice for what?"

World conquest!

"What!" they all replied, surprised at what he said.

Yes! But when I rule this pathetic world I will need a queen!

And with that being said the black dragon flew at Maiko and grabbed her.

"Hey! What are you doing? Put me down?" Maiko panicked as the black dragon flew off with her.

"Hey! You heard her! Put Miss Maiko Yukino down!" Daisuke called out to the black dragon. "You ready Kanpa?" He said to his dragon. Kanpa used his Ka-Ze-Sho-Kan (Wind summon) attack against the black dragon.

You think that will work against me! The black dragon said.

Then a black hole appeared and sucked up the attack. Then the black dragon sent the Ka-Ze-Sho-Kan Back at them, with twice as much power.

The attack hit them with so much force that every one was knocked off of there feet.

Maiko watched with horror as the Ka-Ze-Sho-Kan hit her friends. When the dust had settled she saw to her dismay that her friends were frozen in blocks of ice, looks of terror stuck on their faces for all eternity.

"Reiji…Chibi…! Daisuke… Kanpa…! Rokkaku… Thunderbolt…! Gorao…!" Maiko called out, Tears welling up in her eyes.

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" She cried out as she was carried off into the distance.

A few day's after the incident with the black dragon, the world was taken over by the evil dragon, now the world was a place of darkness. The frozen bodies of Reiji and friends still stood. Suddenly a bright light came from were Chibi's forehead was, and the ice began to crack. A few minutes after the ice had cracked, it shattered with an audible tinkling sound.

"What happened?" Daisuke asked as he was freed from his prison.

"Ummmm… I think we were frozen?" Reiji replied. "But now that we are thawed we should try to rescue Maiko." He continued.

"I agree with you there Reiji." Daisuke responded.

"Hey! If no has noticed but when she was taken we were frozen so how are we going to find her if we don't know were she was taken to." Rokkaku said.

"I dunno?" Reiji said. "We could… maybe ask if anyone knows were she is?" He continued.

"What the hell Reiji! You mean to say that you don't have freakin clue as to how we are going to save Miss Maiko!" Daisuke fumed at Reiji.

"Yeah… I kinda have to agree with Daisuke. As far as pathetic goes, that is pretty pathetic." Rokkaku told Reiji.

"Hey! I was just…" Reiji was interrupted when Gorao gave a howl of despair over his kidnapped companion.

"Don't worry Gorao, we will find Maiko. Hopefully." Reiji comforted the grieving dragon. Gorao looked at Reiji with sadness in his eyes.

"We just have to find out were she is." He continued.

He looked out into the distant storm clouds and said.

"Rokkaku, Daisuke, looks like this may be our biggest adventure yet."

"Yeah! Don't worry Maiko your beloved Hagiwara is coming to rescue you." Daisuke said.

Rokkaku and Reiji sat onto Thunderbolt, Daisuke got onto Kanpa, and Gorao went into the nearest cave and waited for Maiko's saviors to come back with his master.

"Don't attract too much attention to yourself Gorao. We will come back with Maiko soon, I promise." Reiji called back to him as he and his friends flew towards the setting sun.

To be continued in chapter 2.