Hi This is rewrite of an other story I wrote, but I really disliked it once I revised it, so I deleted it. This is my second try at it, I hope it comes out better.

Enjoy!

disclaimer: I do not own Percy Jackson or any characters, except my own characters.

Prologue

In the beginning, there was Chaos. Chaos, mother of all. Chaos created darkness and night, Nyx and Erebus. Nyx and Erebus created Day, or Hemera. They together made Earth, or Gaea. This, of course, the mortals never knew. Gaea made Sky, or Uranus, and Sea, or Pontus. Chaos then left them alone and began making dimensions. The first one was called Aether, and from that dimension came Light. Then Chaos created the Erebus, were darkness conquered all. Then Chaos created Terra, the dimension of the planets. In that dimension, there was a tear. That tear was called Void. The planet closest to the Void, which had the most magic, was called Earth. And that is were our story truly begins.

Chapter 1

Dimension: Terra

Date/ Time: August 18, 2409

Planet: Earth

Perseus PoV

" No, Jack. Lift your sword tip up, it'll feel more normal," I commanded my egoistic younger cousin, who snorted and said, " You can't tell me what to do!" I rolled my eyes. " Yes I can. I'm teaching you. Know, raise up that blade!" Annabeth glared at me. " Don't yell at him, Percy!" I sighed and growled, " You teach him then." I disarmed jack with a flick of my wrist, bending Jack's arm so he cried out in pain. " Percy!" Annabeth yelled, and I knew she was under Jack's 'Spell'. There was a flash of light, and Zeus stood in it's place. He was grinning evilly." Poseidon has faded, Perceus." I leaped up. " WHAT?! How?!" I screamed. Zeus replied, " I killed him." I ran to my cabin, barely hearing Annabeth yell, " We're done!" I grabbed my backpack, stuffed my things in it, and ran out of camp, leaping into my parked car, and drove home, just to find flames licking it, and lightning tearing the sky apart. I kept driving, not once looking back at the home and the family, no. Not family. Enemies. It may seem I am over reacting, but truly, I'm not. The Olympians had become more family like after the Giant war. Artemis, Apollo, Athena, and Ares had the come my real blood cousins, and Triton had stopped hating me. Had that all been an act, to loosen me up before stabbing me in the back? I knew I had been banished, driven from my own home. Everyone had fallen for Jack's boasting. Was he the one that had defeated both Kronos and the Giants? Was he the on that had protected their children for over 4,000 years, not caring wether or not he was on the verge of fading? I parked in a diner and went inside to eat.

I was waiting for my order when a woman appeared before me. She was probably the most beautiful woman in the world, more so than Aphrodite. " Greetings, Percy Jackson. Please stop drooling," she trying looking as if she were trying to contain her laughter. I turned red. " I'm sorry," I said, " I mean no disrespect, but who are you?" She laughed. " I am Chaos, the creator." I quickly bowed, " I am sorry, milady." People gave us a weird look.

" I have a proposition for you, Percy," Chaos said, " If you agree, you will become the commander of my army, especially the Warriors of Chaos, and will have powers the gods have never even dreamed of." I thought about it for a moment. Powers the gods have never even dreamed of? Damn, that's powerful. " I accept you offer, Lady Chaos." Chaos smiled and placed a finger on my forehead. The world went black.

In The Void

I woke up in a black room. Sitting up, I saw a note on top of a uniform at the foot of the bed. It read,

Percy,

Meet me in the training arena ASAP. If you are reading this, a lot of shit has just gone down on earth.

Chaos

I pulled on my uniform as quickly as I could, and noticed the helix on my forearm. " Weird," I muttered, then buttoned up the jacket and ran out. I quickly found the Training Arena. Sure enough, Chaos was waiting for me. " You have awoken," she said, " Do you remember anything good about your old life?" I shook my head. " Good," she replied," Lets start training, then." She, in a matter of minutes, taught me all my power. According to her, she had blessed me to learn 4,653.8 times faster than the average god, which was pretty god damned fast. After an hour or so of perfecting, I asked, " So, you said in the letter that, if I was reading it, a lot of shit had just gone down on earth. What happened?" A Look of sadness flashed on her beautiful features, what, no! Err, conscience, don't tell me I have a crush on the creator of the universe!

Too late.

Shit. Umm, why?

Its the Fates' fault, not mine.

And Aphrodite.

Not exactly...

" Percy, are you even listening to me?" Chaos asked.

" Uhh, what?" I said,blinking at her. She rolled her eyes and said, " I said, I'm going to take you to build your city."

" This is going to be awesome."

In Percy's Unfinished Kingdom

Chaos led more to a navy blue door in the middle of space. " Do I open the door?" I asked, to which Chaos replied, " No. I brought you here for no apparent reason. Yes, open the door!" I turned the knob, and the door swung open, revealing a large flat area with mountains around the back. " What now?" I asked.

" Now, you build your kingdom."

" oh yeah!"

You like it? You hate it? I think I might have done some overdoing, but that's my opinion :3