Hey sweeties! This is my second ever fan fiction I have ever wrote so you may have to put up with some pretty amateur writing. This first chapter is a little bit of a taster to see if you like what's going on, (which I hope you do!) Enjoy and please leave a review!


Nessa, sluggishly dragged her tiered body into her tiny bathroom. She tied her long, brown hair into a messy pony tail and began brushing her teeth. Once she had finished she took a sip of water from the tap and walked back into her cosy bedroom.

Her house was not of great size at all, and neither great condition. It was old and almost shack like, with a red front door. But the reason Nessa loved it so much was because of the archers of woods stretched around it , where she would play as a young girl before her grandma passed, when she was just aged 16. Since then Nessa had lived, quietly, but happily alone. It wasn't her fault she had not many friends, living so far out in the middle of nowhere. It was neither her fault that she had no family either as her mother and father both died before she could remember them and therefore she lived with her grandma until she passed away too. But 10 years had passed since then, and old memories had been forgotten.

Nessa slipped on a long pair of fleeced pj bottoms and a oversized grey t-shirt. She dumped her cat on the floor and pulled the warm covers over her head. She had had a long day, and sleep soon found her.

Nessa had been sleeping a good few hours, peacefully until a large clap of thunder woke her.
"What the hell." She slurred.
She pulled herself from her bed and walked over to her window, pulling back the lace mesh and opening the window.
She took in a sharp intake of breath when she saw, about 100 meters from her house, a huge crater.
"Oh my gosh!" She stuttered, out loud.
She immideatley grabbed her Wellington boots and rain coat and ran out the front door.
The crater was even bigger when she got closer to it, knocking over about 15 of her apple trees.
She was about to turn away when she heard a muffled choking sound.
"Hello?" She whispered, scared of her own voice in the dark.
There was no reply, so she began to hurry back inside and sat down on her sofa. She switched on the TV before realising that nothing good is on at 2 in the morning.
Suddenly a large hammering, knock came from the front door. Nessa let out a small squeal and turned the light and tv off. She was scared, she never gets visitors and definitely not at two in the morning!
The door slowly opened, and Nessa cursed herself for forgetting to lock it. Her eyes widened as she saw from being hid behind her sofa a large, very built up man, with long, and drenched, blonde hair and what more... He was not wearing any clothes at all.
Nessa tried to hold her breath, absolutely terrified. The man continued to walk through her tiny home, talking angrily to himself.
After 20 minutes of hiding Nessa decided that she had to make a move, so she crawled out from behind the sofa, grabbed a vase and smashed it over the man's head. The man dropped onto the carpet, a small trickle of blood ran from the back of his head.
"Crap!" She whispered, realising that she had caused him to collapse onto the floor.
Instead of falling unconscious which she assumed he had done, he stood up again.
"Ow." He said, his voice was deep and monotone.
"Sorry." Nessa said, instantly embarrassed, realising he wasn't a burglar or here to kill her or anything.
"Where am I?" The man demanded.
"Somerset?" She laughed, assuming he must just be a lost, naked, drunk man.
"Where is Somerset?" He asked, confused.
"Somerset... You know Somerset, England, Earth, The universe." She laughed jokingly.
"Earth." He repeated.
Nessa raised an eyebrow. "Poor man, he really must be out of it." She thought.
She looked down at him again and blushed remembering he was not wearing anything.
"You must be very cold sit there, let me get you some clothes." She said quickly, before running up stairs and back down with a small pile of clothes. "I'm sorry if these are a little tight." She said bashfully.
"They will suffice, thank you." He said, pulling on the hoodie and jogging bottoms.
"They were my friends. I was meant to take them to the charity shop for him but I think you can keep them." She said politely.
"Thank you." He said back.
"Here let me get you a hot drink you must be freezing." She said getting up from the opposite sofa and pouring herself and him a mug of hot mauled wine.
"Why were you naked in my orchard?" Nessa asked inquisitively?
"I fell." He said back straightly.
"You fell?" She laughed. "You shouldn't be climbing trees naked then."
"I wan't." He said.
"Then how did you fall."
"I fell from the sky."
"Are you drunk?"
"No."
"Then I don't understand how you got here."
"I said... I fell from the sky."
"Do you have anywhere to get back to?"
"Yes."
"Do you want a lift back."
"They kicked me out."
"Why?"
" I rebelled again."
Nessa paused momentarily deciding what action to take next.
"You can stay here for just tonight if you promise not to be drunk."
"I promise... Thank you, kind lady."
Nessa laughed as she got up and ran to gather blankets and duvets so he could sleep on the sofa.
"I'm so sorry; I never asked your name?" Nessa asked.
"My name is Thor... And yours, kind woman."
"Nessa." She smiled.


I hope you all enjoyed the first taste of my story! Thank you to anyone who read the chapter! Promises it won't be long before Loki appears. Please leave a review.