Unedited
Authors Note:We always say how we want things to be unedited...well, I'll give you my first unedited fanfic!! Im not going to delete any typos...
"Hey Vegeta."I greeted the saiyas-jin prince.
"Huh?!?! Where did you come from?!?!?"he ye;lled at me.
"Home, where else???"
"...Theat;s not whaty I meant..."
I groinned evily at the midget, wondering what to di to him firsy.
"Why are you here then??"
"Im making an undedited fanfuc. My isdea for it ids to just tornent you with random messed up stuff."I explained to him, then dissapearing.
Uh,oh..."
::cradh::
Of couese, a boulder hab ;anded on his head.
"Can't you think of anything else??"
Next thing nhe knew22222(kitten stepped on keybpard)22222``` an icicle fell from the sky onto his poor pointu head.
:"Wrll, that's new."
Ther icicle dissapeares and Vegeta gulpoed as he wondered what was next. Then a giant pencil came down and earased Vegeta's hands off. Vegeta snorted."The giant pencil...what clicheds..."
Then the giant pencil erased off his hair.
"Ok, I take that back."
The pencil drew his hair againm, but now it lookred all penciluy and smeared on yjrthe papoer he ewas on.
"Great, ugly pencil hait..."Vegeta grumbled. Then a pen came down and went over it. His hair lppked almost noemal, except no color."How about filling it in??"
So the animator did...he filled it in as pink.
"8x34zz(Kitten....)THAT'S NOT WHAT I MEANT!! MAKE IT BLACKM, BLACK@!!!!"
Veegeta'ds hair was soon noermal, until he realuzed his hands were still missibng."Um...can I have sone hands too????"
Ther animator gave him crab claws,.
"DON'T MAKE MRE VBLAST YOU YTO THE NEXT DIMENSION!!!!!:"EWWWWWWHHJ(damn kitten...perfect fanfic for him to decode to do this on, thouggh...)Vegeta shouted at the obvious;ly humorous animator. A monster truck then fe;; on his head."This is getting very very annoying."
His hands werre drawn into place and he gace a sigh of reliref. Then a giant rock fell on his head and tdissapeared.
"Wait, isn't that a bloulder??"
"No, that was a giant rock, not a boulder."
"What's the difference??"
I shrugged and dissapeared. Then the Titanic fell on Vegeta. He groaned.
"I'll do anuthing, just end this. Pleasde, antthing, I pswear it."
I reappeared, my eyes twinkling with glee."Anything??"
Next thing Vetgeta knew , he was buying me a laptop. I also made him give me a hug.
"Well,m this fanfic turned out well."
Picc;olo popped in."ZFanfuc...Fan-fuc....bwahahahahahahahahahaaa!!!"
"Um....ruight...go eat Chaotzu."
"Ok."
Piccolo flies off into the abyss.
"Before I was so rudely interupptted, I was ending the fanfuc(that typo was real, hehe). By-"
"I don't get to be in this fanfuc(that ine too...what's with accodentally typoing the word fanfuc???)_ too??"Goku askedm his eyes fillingh with tears.
"Well......ok. Do sonething funny."
"Ok!!!!"Goku shouted with anticipation. He made aq stupid face, then ran off giggilinh.
"Um...Whatever,. Byer p-"
"WAIT!!!!"
"WHAT NOW, PICCOLO?!"
"Fanfuc!!!"
I devekoped a huge sweatdrop over my head as Piccolo burst ionto laughter over what O saw as absoluteluy nothing."Bye!!!"
The Ends
Authors Note:We always say how we want things to be unedited...well, I'll give you my first unedited fanfic!! Im not going to delete any typos...
"Hey Vegeta."I greeted the saiyas-jin prince.
"Huh?!?! Where did you come from?!?!?"he ye;lled at me.
"Home, where else???"
"...Theat;s not whaty I meant..."
I groinned evily at the midget, wondering what to di to him firsy.
"Why are you here then??"
"Im making an undedited fanfuc. My isdea for it ids to just tornent you with random messed up stuff."I explained to him, then dissapearing.
Uh,oh..."
::cradh::
Of couese, a boulder hab ;anded on his head.
"Can't you think of anything else??"
Next thing nhe knew22222(kitten stepped on keybpard)22222``` an icicle fell from the sky onto his poor pointu head.
:"Wrll, that's new."
Ther icicle dissapeares and Vegeta gulpoed as he wondered what was next. Then a giant pencil came down and earased Vegeta's hands off. Vegeta snorted."The giant pencil...what clicheds..."
Then the giant pencil erased off his hair.
"Ok, I take that back."
The pencil drew his hair againm, but now it lookred all penciluy and smeared on yjrthe papoer he ewas on.
"Great, ugly pencil hait..."Vegeta grumbled. Then a pen came down and went over it. His hair lppked almost noemal, except no color."How about filling it in??"
So the animator did...he filled it in as pink.
"8x34zz(Kitten....)THAT'S NOT WHAT I MEANT!! MAKE IT BLACKM, BLACK@!!!!"
Veegeta'ds hair was soon noermal, until he realuzed his hands were still missibng."Um...can I have sone hands too????"
Ther animator gave him crab claws,.
"DON'T MAKE MRE VBLAST YOU YTO THE NEXT DIMENSION!!!!!:"EWWWWWWHHJ(damn kitten...perfect fanfic for him to decode to do this on, thouggh...)Vegeta shouted at the obvious;ly humorous animator. A monster truck then fe;; on his head."This is getting very very annoying."
His hands werre drawn into place and he gace a sigh of reliref. Then a giant rock fell on his head and tdissapeared.
"Wait, isn't that a bloulder??"
"No, that was a giant rock, not a boulder."
"What's the difference??"
I shrugged and dissapeared. Then the Titanic fell on Vegeta. He groaned.
"I'll do anuthing, just end this. Pleasde, antthing, I pswear it."
I reappeared, my eyes twinkling with glee."Anything??"
Next thing Vetgeta knew , he was buying me a laptop. I also made him give me a hug.
"Well,m this fanfic turned out well."
Picc;olo popped in."ZFanfuc...Fan-fuc....bwahahahahahahahahahaaa!!!"
"Um....ruight...go eat Chaotzu."
"Ok."
Piccolo flies off into the abyss.
"Before I was so rudely interupptted, I was ending the fanfuc(that typo was real, hehe). By-"
"I don't get to be in this fanfuc(that ine too...what's with accodentally typoing the word fanfuc???)_ too??"Goku askedm his eyes fillingh with tears.
"Well......ok. Do sonething funny."
"Ok!!!!"Goku shouted with anticipation. He made aq stupid face, then ran off giggilinh.
"Um...Whatever,. Byer p-"
"WAIT!!!!"
"WHAT NOW, PICCOLO?!"
"Fanfuc!!!"
I devekoped a huge sweatdrop over my head as Piccolo burst ionto laughter over what O saw as absoluteluy nothing."Bye!!!"
The Ends