MY VERSION OF THE MARK OF ATHENA
Okay my last Story wasn't very good and I have started my GCSE's so to practice my writing skills I am going to rewrite my story to a hopefully higher standard.
My day could have started worse then again it could have started better as well. It probably started to go downhill when the fire hydrant exploded or possibly when I burnt my toast but I think that it could have been when the Hydra crushed the cab I was just about to go to school in. The Hydra looked like it had been in a lot of fights as it had fifteen heads and a few eyes were missing on some of these heads. But the thing is when you are just a normal fifteen year old boy worrying about what you were going to say to the girl you like at school and a five tonne Hydra lands on your cab you're not really expecting it. When I automatically pressed a button on the side of my watch and it expands into a long axe with a huge ornate blade decorated with hundreds of runes from some unknown language inscribed on it I'm not expecting that either. But hey ho if you've got lemons you make lemonade is what dad always said. I had always thought that my father told me that because he is the owner of a fruit company called 'Lemons and Lemonade'. But I was beginning to wonder if it was a metaphor when the Hydra decided to spit acid at me and me being who I am turned and ran as fast as my legs could carry me which was pretty quick I can run the two hundred metres in twenty seconds flat (hey I'm not bragging shut up). The Hydra seemed to sniff at the air before jumping very high towards me but at that moment clouds formed around the Hydra and I heard a single roar before a lightning bolt struck the beast in the chest and with that the rain began to pour down on the dark gloomy streets of Manhattan.
Annabeth
Annabeth had been stalking the Hydra for a while but had wanted to see what it was looking for and know she knew she wasn't a hundred percent sure the boy was a demigod until his watch turned into a long axe with weird runes written on the blade. She wasn't sure but from the very stormy eyes which were a mix of stormy grey and dark, dark blue she thought he might be a nebulae and from how fast he was running know it piqued are suspicions a little bit more. Nebulae are cloud nymphs for those of you who don't know and as all nymphs they are well let's just say there different. Some nymphs like to trick demigods into loving them so that they can have kids because a nebulae with a nebulae nuh uh that is like a child of Aphrodite going out with a child of Aphrodite it's just wrong but a nebulae with a demigod that's fair game. The thing that intrigued Annabeth about this demigod was his axe it had some strange runes, runes that to Annabeth looked like they were a Hecate thing so if this kid was a child of a nebulae and Hecate he would be immortal so that can't be right. Annabeth got distracted when the massive Hydra jumped up into the air after the demigod who was running away at a speed of knots. She started to pursue the Hydra when a cloud formed around its body and a flash of lightning struck it in the chest. At that moment it started to rain a rain that was so torrential Annabeth was soaked in seconds.
I know its short guys just wanted to know if you guys wanted me to continue with this after the first chapter as the MOA is out know cheers guys.
PS- I have read it twice already.