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The Tale Of Darth Revan Fanfic.

This story will sploil it if you don't.

Anyways everyone enjoy, I know its short but will be longer in the future.


The Birth Of Darth Malek

Begin Chapter 1 ( Or True Pain Pt. 1

Alec woke up in a dark room, the last thing he remembered was going into Veneto's chamber with Revan then everything went black. Now he sat in a dark empty room with nothing but a bed against the wall and a plate of food on the floor. As he tried to reach out with the force he could feel Revan's presence, but it felt greater….greater even than when they were on the bridge of the infiltrator. He also sensed a great deal of pain and anger. As he felt it he realized Revan had turned…..he had joined the dark side. Whatever Veneto had told him had changed him… and that meant that Alec was alone….Revan had been the only friend he had ever known. Back when they were young Revan had helped him learn his saber forms, shown him force secrets he couldn't imagine. As Alec sat there, he swore by the force he would see Veneto be killed and that he would save Revan from the path he was walking or die trying. A click from the corner of the room grabbed his attention. Looking over he watched the wall split into as doorway and reveal Darth Veneto standing there.

"MURDERER!" Shouted Alec as he flew from where he stood to punch Veneto but before he could he was stopped by a powerful grip from the force and held in place.

"Save your rage Alec," Said Veneto, "You're going to need it for more important things in the future, and besides without your weapons you are no more dangerous than a blade of grass against me." An evil grin spread onto Veneto's face, "I have big plans for you Alec…..big plans" As he finished Alec felt an immensely powerful being's thoughts envelope his mind, reading his thoughts and making it impossible to concentrate. As if the feeling wasn't enough, as it tore through his memories it burned. As a scream of pain tore from Alec's mouth he fell to his knees before Darth Veneto.

End Chapter 1 (Or True Pain Pt.1 )


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