XxXxXxX Kingdom Hearts Life on Mars XxXxXxX
sora, a yung boy from an ilsand, was stroling down market street in twiligt town. He was hit bye a tram and now he wass now in a coma. Evrone was sad, and even organisation 13 was sad even tho they dint have emotions. sora dint know he was in a coma yet, he thought he was still fine and htat nothing had happined. He wen ttoget his ifone but it wasnt ther. "omg someone stole it!" He exclaimed. he also saw he was waring old clothes. "ew gross there so unfashionble. asif i would were thise clothings!" sora was beggining to feel werd, and he kept walking down teh street, seeing evrythin hat changed asswell. All the buildlings were old and weerd. The color of evything seemd like all pale. sora went into his favrite music shop ans sore that they only sold records. "wtf are those" said Sora as eh walked out of the shop. sora was soo confused. "where is the gummni ship then?" he thoght. and someone who was walkin past said "hats a gummi ship?" and sora knew he was back in tim.
back in the present, riku was waitin next to sora wile sora was in coma. he sat ther listenin to the radio and his fave song of al time came on it was a song by 3OH!3 an he danced to it bcus he cant listen to his fave song and not danc! wen the song finshed he leaned over to sora and said "sora plese if u can here me... wake up soon please!" an he stated to cry tears downd his cheek. kairi walked in and also stated to crie bcause she was also sad and missed sora. "riku will sora evar wake up?" she asked in pain. "kairi i dont know but i hoep he does..."
sora contued to walk around aimlesley when a thoght occerd to him "oh is this like timeless river or somthing?" but noe it wasnt because this was 1973 and sora needed to figure out why he was ther so maybe he cold get home. and then he saw ppl that looked like hayner pence and olette. "hai guys have you notised all teh strange things happning latley?" but they juts stured at him. "oh if im in the past then u ppl must be like hayner pence and olettes parents or grandparents or something." the trhee people luked at him. 'who ar they?" and sora realsed that they wouldnt kno who those ppl are. "oh nevermind. my name is sora buy the way" an the people said "hi we are hayner pence and olette" and sora was confused but eh figured that hayner pence and olette wer probable named after these walked off and keeped walking until he saw a man.
"my name is gene hunt and im the detectiv sheif inspectre of twilight town police department. what you doing her?" the man was wearing a brown trench coat with a shirt nd tye undrenearth, and he had black leathre gloves. "im sora" gene looked at sora "oh ur the new DI?" an he grabed sora an threw him into the passenger seat of his ford cortina, then eh jumped into the drivers seat and drove ver fast like a maniac. "what are you doing?" aksed sora "DI sora, thers criminals on the lose and we must catch them that is why i am speeding!" "gene man ur wrong im not a polieceman! ima keyblade welder!1" gene laughed "sora we need your powers in the twilight town police!" an they keeped spedding they went through the sandlot and kept going til they go to the back alley, then gene jumped out the car and shouted "oi scumbag get back here" sora was amazde. gene coght the crimnal and it turns out the crimnal was hayner (the on from the past). "HAYNER YOU MENACE i knew it was you what robbed Jessie's accessory shop!" and hayner was cuffed and they drov him to the poliec station in station heights. "lol now i know why hayner from teh futre is all messed up" and sora laughed and gene dint know why so he punchd him to keep him in line. "whatya say sora, would you like to be my new DI?" and sora said "ok i will maybe if i do i can figure out why im here and get home"
End of part 1