Chapter 1

It was after nine o clock and Jessica still hasn't called me yet. I can't believe I actually agreed to this Jessica had wanted me to watch Mary scott the girl she's suppose to be watching so she and Mike can do who knows what in that little girl's house. I had to take her trick or treating and keep her entertianed the whole night. Jessica had promised me that she'll call me about nine so I can bring her back to her home. It was ten to ten when I decided to take Mary back home before her parents get home. "Go get your coat Mary i'm going take you home before your parents get home" I said getting off the coach and getting my coat. "Yea my parents will flip out if they find out" She said getting her coat and grabbing her candy.

It's a good thing Mary only lives two blocks away so don't need to drive. I hate walking around at night especially after that time in port angeles. My heart suddenly tightened up at that memory. That was the day I figured out who he actually was. I couldn't let myself think of him he doesn't love me anymore he said so himself. "Bella are you alright your starting to cry" Mary said breaking me from my thoughts. I was shocked I hadn't realize that I was crying. "Uh yea sorry I don't know what happen" was all I could tell her.

When we got to Mary's house I decided to knock first just to be polite and plus I didn't want Mary being exposed to the things there probably doing. When they didn't answer I just decided to go right in. Once I opened the door it was completley pitch black. "Here i'll turn the light on" Mary said going past me. As soon as the light turned on Mary screamed. I looked over and saw Jessica covered in blood. "OH MY GOD JESSICA" I Yelled as I went over to her side. I lifted her in my arms and saw she had major cuts all over I couldn't tell if she was alive or not. "MARY RUN BACK TO MY PLACE AND LOCK THE DOOR" I yelled cringly at her. I heard Mary yelling for help as she ran outside. "J-essica" I cried as I held her in my arms. I quickly got up and ran straight for the phone. "Hell 9-1-1 what's your emergency." "I n-eed an ambulance my friend's bleeding to death" I cried into the phone. "Ok please calm down and tell me where you are at." I took a couple of deep breaths and said "My name's Bella Swan and i'm at 483 Crecent Ave." Then all of a sudden I was yanked away from the phone and thrown against the floor. I looked up and saw a tall figure wearing a mask with hair on it. I quickly got up and started running towards the kitchen doors because he was blocking the front entrance. I looked behind me and saw he was keeping up with me despite him walking. I ran into the kitchen door, but it wouldn't open. I looked back and saw he was almost near me. I then through myself against the glass door and landed in the yard. I quickly got up and started running despite my cuts. "HELP ME SOMEBODY HELP ME." I looked behind me in horror to realize he was still close behind me. "MARY LET ME IN" I screamed when I made it to my front door. "MARY OPEN UP IT'S ME" I screamed and bang at the door. Then the door opened and I went in and locked it. I turned to Mary who was very frightned. "Mary are you ok" I asked alerted. She nodded and said "Yea, but who is that" she aske frintened. Then all of a sudden there was a big bang at the door. "AGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG" Mary and I both screamed when we saw who it was. "MARY RUN UPSTAIRS NOW" I yelled. He then broke down the door as I was running up with her and he took me by the legs and started dragging me back down. "AGGGGGGGGGGG" I screamed. "BELLA" Mary yelled an then she started to take my arms trying to pull me up. Suddenly Mary's arms let go and I fell back to the bottom. Then he lifted me by the waist and start taking me away. "HELLLLLP MEEEEEEEE" I scremed as i tried to kick and hang on to the door, but then suddenly everything went black.

Charlie's POV

It was another boring day in the small town of forks. Not much crime around here execpt maybe a break in once in a while. I wonder how Bella's doing I really don't like to leave her by herself for so long, especially after what that damn Edward did to her. Then the phone rang which I answered right away. "Hello Chief Swan how may I help you" I answered. "Charlie it's Greogory we need you at a situation at 483 crecent Ave.." Another break in most likely, but something in Gregory's voice had me kind of worried. "Another break in" I asked jokingly. I heard gregory sigh and said "I wish, but we're dealing with a Murder situation this time." My eyes widened at the word Murder. "A-are you sure" I asked still stunned. "Come see for yourself." he said irritated. I sighed and said "Ok i'm on my way." I quickly got up and got my coat and hurried out the door.

Once I made it 483 crecent Ave. I saw three other police cars and an ambulance. "Cheif Swan we've identified the body" Gregory told me as I got out and started walking towards the house. "Who" I asked him as I stopped in the front porch. "Jessica Stanley and we've also recovered another body which we believed is to be Mike Newton's." I rubbed my temples and thought this can't be happening two of Bella's friends murdered. I walked into the house and saw Jessica's body. It was so disgusting she was covered head to toe in stabbed wounds. I walked into the other room and saw Mike's body being less damaging just a neck break that took his life. "Can't believe this is happening" I said shocked not really talking to anyone in particular. "Me either we were plenty shock when we got the 9-1-1 call." The 9-1-1 call that reminds. "Gregory where's the person who called 9-1-1 we need to question them" I asked him getting back to the questioning that needs to be done. Gregory shrugged and said "I don't know she wasn' here when we arrived." "Do you know who called 9-1-1" I asked. He nodded and said "Your daughter did Bella Swan." After he said that name I immediantley started to run back to my house. How could i've been so stupid I should've had a cop go over there when I heard about the murder to make sure Bella was alright I'll never forgive myself if something happens to her. When I got to the house the door was bang down. I stepped inside and all I saw was a little girl crying by the stairs. I went over to her and kneeled down and asked "Are you ok." She looked at me and said "H-e took B-ella." Then she sobbed into my chest. Oh my god my poor baby.

Bella's POV

When I woke up I didn't reqonize where I was. When I started to look around I gasp in shock when I saw Angela's body next to mine. "ANGELA" I cried out to her. "ANGELA WAKE UP PLEASE" I cried. I saw no sign of any injury, but he face was turning blue and she was so still. Then I heard someone coming down those stairs. I looked up and saw the masked man standing in front of me with a knife in his hands. "Please don't hurt me P-PLEASE" I begged him. Then all of a sudden he dropped the knife and he went down onto his knees. "W-What do you want" I asked him trying to keep myself from crying. He then pulled out a picture and put it in front of me. The picture was dated in the late 60's and it showed a lovinging family in it. Then I finally saw what he wanted me to see a girl who looked like me she had brown hair, heart shaped face, eyeybrows the exact same way, the only diffrence is her hair is much longer and wavy than mine. I figured I could use this to buy me some time to escape. I sighed and said "It's ok I understad i'll protect you." He tilted his head and looked at me blankly. I wasn't sure what he was going to do,but i didn't want to stay and find out. He then put his arm out to try and reach out to me. So I did the same, and when our hands nearly touched I used my other hand to grab a piece of wood and hit him over the head. I then hurried up the stairs to escape.

As soon as I got up the stairs I immediantley ran out the first door I saw. As soon as I got outside I tripped and rolled down in what I believed was an empty concrete pool. The pain was unbearable I could feel the blodd coming from the back of my head, but I knew I had to get up. Once I got up I saw him standing 10 ft away from me. How the hell did he manage did get here so fast. I could already tell my leg was broken which would make escaping difficult. He started to walk towards me and at the same time I was trying to move back, but unfortunaltey I hit the side wall. Tears were coming my face like a waterfall, but then suddenly I heard a gun shot. I looked up and saw a middle aged man shooting at the masked man. He shot three more times and then he fell down. "Come on let me help up there isn't much time to lose" the stranger said. "Who are you" I asked as he helped me. "Dr. Loomis, but there ain't no more time for questions you got to go hide before he wakes up do you hear me." I nodded, but i had to ask one more question. "Is that the boogeyman" I asked breaking down. He sighed and said "Yes it is, but you got to go hid now and here take this gun." After he handed me the gun I started walking as fast as I could to get away. I knew I wouldn't get far with my leg so I have no choice, but to hide in that house.

Once I got back inside I quickly went upstairs to find a place to hide. I decided to hide in the attic maybe he wouldn't find me in her. The attic was small, so small I could only lay in and not stand. I wasn't sure what was going on outside so I decided to check outside the small window. Once I crawled to the window I saw Dr. Loomis trying to talk to the masked man. Then all of a sudden the masked man grabbed him by the throat and threw him to the side. "Oh my god" I whispered in fear. I got away from the window as quickly as possible. Then I went stiff with fear when I heard movement from downstairs. I tried not to cry, but it was so hard not to cry at this very moment. Then all of a sudden a beam came through. "AGGGGGGGG" I screamed because I knew that there was no way out of it this time. I tried to keep moving, but he kept using the beam to bring me out. As I was crawling, the wood I was on suddenly felt weak and then the drop came. "AGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG" I screamed as I fell face first onto the floor. I wasn't sure why I was still consicous or stil alive for that matter. I slowly got up and turned around and saw the masked man staring at me. I knew I wouldn't be standing for long I had to try and kill him. I took the gun and pointed it at him hoping this will kill him. Suddenly he dropped his knife and came running towards me. "AGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG" I screamed as he pushed us both through the wall and outside, but then suddenley everything went blank.

When I opened my eyes I noticed that I was lying right on top of him outside. I could taste my blood in my mouth I'm in so much fuckin pain I don't care if I die, but I want to at least take him out with. I slowly lifted my upper body, which took so much effort because of the pain. Luckily the gun was right next to me. I took it and tried to shoot him, but it didn't work. "Come on please" I said beggingly after it failed the second time, but then I felt his hand on my wrist and that's when the trigger went off. "" I screamed in agony .

Author's Note

Well there's chapter 1 to my Halloween rewrite i hoped you all enjoy it. I wanted to do this like Rob zombie's because I thought they were ok and it'll fit better in the way i want this story to go. A few things I know some of you might be disappointe in not seeing the others death. I'll make their deaths into an outake that i'm doing along the way. Edward and his family will be in it next chapter i'm hoping if it goes the way I want it to. I felt that this chapter did have it's missing moments, but the way I want this story to go I had to get ride of some things and rush it about. It'll all make sense next chapter. By the way This is the only thing i'm truely using from the Halloween remakes the other events will be based on it but doing it my style. So please review and let me know what you think.